Personality:
Elvire is a radical idealist. She is always a Paragon, helping those learn how to help themselves. She does not believe in holding out for heroes and as such, her ultimate goal is that when her people is in need of heroes, they can become one.
She can be sometimes introverted and rude, but she is a kind person and tries to mean well. Supporting the people of the Kingdom, even despite her views.
You know the drill. Specifically, what exactly is a "radical idealist"?
First Impression:
People think of Elvire indifferently, while she is a role model figure and a very exceptional leader, her ideals are radical, revolutionary and thus are popular with those who share these views, mainly those who want to overthrow the monarchy and establish a republic, while those who are indifferent to these ideals view her as a threat to monarchist way of life. This leads to her making a lot of enemies.
Almost all of this would actually help flesh out her Personality.
Elvire would be able to dodge semi-automatic fire at medium range
That strikes me as a bit much. I could see maybe the first shot. Maybe. If she's anticipating the shot.
However, with the armor, her reflexes and agility are reduced noticeably.
How much? To the point where she wouldn't be able to catch an arrow in flight?
Vitality: Elvire's Vitality is average, with an opponent able to do 65 out 500 HP from an opponent striking with a brunt object.
How is her defense against magic?
She could maintain this ability with consistent pressure (equivalent to a fire hose sprayed from a hydrant) for about 30 seconds. Elvire could also use the same breath and increase pressure to metal cutting extremes for about 15 seconds before tiring herself out.
Strikes me as a bit long. I counted out 15 seconds in my head, and it just seemed like a long time to hold that type of ability.
Glace Souffle (Frost Breath): Elvire can also use her ability to freeze the air around her, causing opponents to either feel the effects or freeze the enemy in place. She could maintain this ability for 30 seconds before tiring out.
On the flip side of the above notation, this actually seems about right time-wise.