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Name
: Zane Blander
Age: 18
Gender
: Male
Height: 5 '6
Weight: 145 lbs
Hair color: Blackish-Blue
Eye color: Grey
Skin color: Caucasian
Complexion: Very fair
Race: Uknown
Job: Ninja

Weapons: Katanas, longswords, and daggers.

Armour: Wears heavily weighted clothes that is just one suit that is much like a shirt that is combined with a pair of long shorts with a V in the middle of it that's black. He's wearing a fishnet shirt under it. He also wears a jacket made of black leather and has spikes on the shoulders of it and the mane of a lion on the collar of the Jacket. Has wraps that cover his entire body except from the neck up. Every piece of clothing he wears is weighted.


Abilities:

Ashigaru: When Zane activates this ability, it looks like veins have come up to the surface of his body, but they're actually Nerves. It allows him to see the chakra points on his enemy's bodies. The eyes make time seem slower and speed up his reactions to make actions easier to predict. The brain normally rests to maintain stability, but Zane's brain never rests and always keeps and active state. For years he has been this way, honing his nerves and thickening them. But this technique has some drawback. If it is used strenuously, the users senses can become damaged and may never work again.

Lightningproof: The uncanny ability to absorb electricity.

Lion's Roar: This jutsu channels a large amount of chakra into the user's arm. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible to the naked eye. The technique actually alters the nature of the user's chakra, effectively converting it into electricity. As a side effect of the conversion process, the large amount of chakra, and the speed at which the user moves, this technique makes a loud noise similar to a Lion's roar, hence the name (if the user is not in motion, it merely makes a vicious crackling electric sound). Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and stabs their enemy with it. The amount of thrust combined with the large concentration of chakra allows the user to stab through almost anything; as such it is usually fatal to the enemy. This technique is classified as an assassination technique because of the speed at which it is performed, despite the loud noise it produces.

This jutsu has a major drawback, however. The speed at which the attack must be done, combined with the fact that the user must run in a straight line, causes a tunnel vision-like effect for the user. This allows their enemy to easily counter the attack, making it a potentially lethal move for the user. Though this drawback would seem to make learning the technique fairly pointless, Zane is able to avoid the drawback because of his Ashigaru eyes, which take in every detail regardless of how fast the user is moving. As an additional drawback, the large amount of chakra required limits its use to seven times a day for Zane. Should the user attempt to go beyond their limit, all of their chakra will be drained and their very life force could go along with it, killing them. An additional problem, though not necessarily a debilitating one, is the fact that the large amount of chakra can also injure the user's hand if they put too much force into the attack.


Lion's roar Current: this jutsu allows Zane to cover himself in electricity, instead of just concentrating it in his hand. The electricity can be channeled anywhere, allowing Zane to enhance his attacks with it. Because it is channeled throughout his entire body and not concentrated, the electricity will only cause temporary paralysis instead of killing an opponent. While this is not a problem in one-on-one battles, it does allow others to save their comrade if Zane is outnumbered. Zane can also channel the electricity through his swords, increasing the overall strength and cutting power.

Chidori: This jutsu is an enhanced form of the One Thousand Birds, and has the same, more powerful, effect. It is named as such because he once cut a lightning bolt with it before it hit the ground. This jutsu requires a larger amount of chakra and better chakra control. This is exemplified in their respective appearances. Whereas One Thousand Birds creates a large mass of chakra in one hand that appears near-white, the Lightning Blade is considerably more concentrated and appears in the normal blue color of chakra. Zane can only use this technique four times in a given day.


Longsword Of The Heavens:This technique arms Zane with the Kusanagi. To retrieve it, Zane opens opens a scroll. Then he cuts his finger open and makes complicated symbols on on the scroll and then he activates the scroll and it produces the Kusanagi sword. The sword can cut through almost any object, its blade can extend to many times its normal length, and it can be controlled remotely by Zane.


History: He was an outcast in the village where he lived. Though he was taken in by a very kind lady; he is still feared and hated by all. He leads a very lonely life, he is hindered by the memories of the day his village was destroyed by soliders of the empire.

Personality: Bright individual, annoyed, depressed, and doesn't really like company; he prefers to be alone. He is a very single-minded person. He works hard for everything he does and never gives up; no matter what.
 
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I think I've done enough to get this approved.
 
I'm not sure why you're only aiming for unoriginal roleplay approval.
Is this character based on a pre-existing character?

 
As much as I hate to admit it, I'm a rabid Uchiha fanboy.*Notice the tag* He's basically a very similar character model to Sasuke. I'm going to remodel him later and add his kekkei genkai when I find that damned sheet of paper I wrote it down on. I forgot all the big words...
 
Well in any case, welcome to the RP Central. =]
 
Alright, I found that damned piece of paper.:)

My approval aim is now original.
 
I still don't know what Uchiha is. lol.
Just tell me it doesn't bear reference to Uchiha and I can approve it as original. =]
 
Name: Koseiyouso
Gender: Male
Age: 24

Occupation: 3rd Division Lietenant
Race: Shimigami
They are hardly any different from humans. the only real difference is that Shimigami age MUCH slower than humans and that most are able to utilize their spiritual power in some way.

Origin/Birthplace: The 80th Rukon District.

The streets were a sad place.... Filled with children with no parents, and most adults were either complete assholes or thieves. It was a poor life. Most die and don't even get buried. Water is rare, and the small river is full of dirty, brown yucky, polluted water. The fish there are unhealthy but perfectly safe to eat. Clean water usually comes from the 30th or 40th district, where businessmen go to get water for free to sell it back in the poorer districts. The 80th is in the worst shape, and the community is hard to live in.

Current Residence: 3rd division's lieutenant's barrack
A nice and cozy, humble abode. Complete with a set of sliding wooden doors, no less. The inside is nice... And wooden. There is a chair and a desk, which he does paperwork on. It's mostly a quiet place, not a peep ever comes up

Appearance: He wears black robes just as any other Soul reaper in the Gotei 13 would Such as the ones posted in this link below. But unlike ichigo, he wears his katana on his sash instead of on his back. http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z72/Osafune_2007/ichigo.gif
Shape of nose: Average
Shape of eye and brow line: thin
Shape of ears: Average
Shape of mouth: average
Hair color, style, and length: longer hair, it goes down to the bottom of his neck with just enough to hang down in his face and enough to have two ponytails in the back of his head and his hair is black with a few raven coloured highlights.
Eye color:Blue
Skin color: Caucasian
Complexion: Very fair
Height: 5'8
Weight:160 lbs.


Weapons and Armor:

Tentouken
A cape that allows the holder to fly by taking a small amount of spiritual energy. A set amount of energy is taken to be able to maintain flight, but once the cape is destroyed or removed, the spiritual energy is given back to the holder.

Personality:
He is very quick to judge and is careful of everyone around him. He is often a cool and laid back individual, but once his blood is boiling and he's pissed off, he can be somewhat reckless and irresponsible. While being around the unfamiliar, he is suspicious of everyone and doesn't take kindly to someone that's withholding info.

Ambitions:
His ultimate goal is to become a captain so he can be in a position to change things. But that is merely a side quest compared to his real goal. He intends to find the hollow whom killed his brother and avenge his death and send that particular hollow into the depths of hell.

A sidenote on Hollows: They are human souls that have been altered and become possessed with devouring those with spiritual power. most of them are mindless and stupid oafs who wave their arms/legs/tails/bodies around bluntly, but those who are vengeful spirits controlled by their lust are given the privelge of being altered with the ability to control themself and speak. Normally Soulreapers purify them by defeating them and purifying them, which turns them back into human souls that get sent to the soul society and are put in one of the 80 Rukon districts. The higher the number, the more horrible it gets.

Another note: Humans cannot see Shimigami unless they have a high amount of spiritual power so they can see the dead and other Spirits. Hollows also apply with this sidenote.


Talents:
He is well learned in combat and graduated 6th from the top in the academy. He is also skilled at the release of spiritual power in both harmful and healing techniques, but he is much more experienced and more effective in the latter.


Intellect/subjects of interest: He graduated from his academy early because his spirit power was so immense that no one even stood a chance against him in combat and he was a bit dangerous to spar with. He loves the sound of clashing swords and the cries of men whom he has defeated. On a sidenote, he likes to ponder his thoughts in his mind and daydream often.

Also, note that spiritual energy can be channeled everywhere throughout his body and can be used for defense.

First Impression:
At first he comes off as an analistic mindfucking asshole. He doesn't care much for introductions, and when confronted, his reply is "This is such a PAIN IN THE ASS!" or "let's get this over with already." seems somewhat snotty and stuck up and has no interest in trouncing weaklings.

History:
When he was a child, he was a prodigy, just like Hitsugaya. The soul society wanted to bring him into the court of pure souls, seeing the immense amount of potential he had. But he often turned them down, saying "I'm waiting for bro to return. Once he comes back, we'll go together." with a smile on his face. He always stayed because his brother told him he;d come back and they would both go together. He waited days and months, and even years always vigorously training his spirit power and taking caution not to use too much. He trained for days and days, time eventually flew by and he was finally 18. Days later, he received a notice saying that his brother was killed in action. He then decided he would get his revenge by becoming a captain and hunting down the hollow that killed his brother. A week later, he was sent off to the soul academy to learn how to fight and use demon magic. He was by far over the heads of the freshmen class and ranked among the seniors in terms of spiritual power. He learned quick and was always put down because people found fault in who he was and where he came from. Quite often, he would get hot-headed and get into trouble with the senior class. But most of the time he would skip out and take one o the katanas that are issued to those not worthy of joining the Gotei 13 squads. He trained and trained until he didn't have any energy left to move. Koseiyouso was able to now train this way because he was in the court of pure souls and food and water were much easier obtain to nourish himself with. He would repeat this routine and skip out on the academy every four days and be absent for a week. four days later had come, and the seniors had been wondering where he always ran off to, so they followed him being the foolish idiots they are. They decided they would wait for him to become tired and amubush him, so they all watched him train for a couple of hours. But the katana he picked up today felt different, like something was trying to talk to him, trying ti get Koseiyousou to call out it's name. He continued walking, ignoring it and also realizing that he was being followed but decided not to reveal that he had this knowledege. He finally reached his location. It was a nice place here, it gave off a quaint and relaxing feeling, there was a river, surrounded by seemingly endless trees. The water clean, crystal clear. Water was still dripping from the leaves of the tress from a rainfall from the previous day, but the ground was dry, with patches of grass popping up everywhere, as well as giant rocks with huge a huge amount of spiritual power. shortly after Kou came to the soul society, he found this place with these rare rocks and has trained there since.

Note that some soul reapers use their Spiritual Power to sense those that are nearby.

Senior 1:
Damn, he's still at it?!
Senior 2:
What the hell? He thinks he can smash a boulder that friggin' big? What a jackass.
Senior 3:
I can't wait until we gang this stupid little idiot.
Top Class Senior:
You idiots, he's training so he can increase his overall cutting power using his powerful spirit energy. But there's something about that sword he's using. He shouldn't be able to make those scratches in the rock he's slashing at even though that rock is brimming with spiritual power.... Could it be that he somehow got a Zanpato?! No way, why would they give a brat like that a Zanpato instead of giving me one?! I swear I'll beat that kid to a bloody pulp and take it from him!

*Seniors emerge from the bushes*

Koseiyouso: "I was wondering when you rats would come crawling out..." He said with an underlying sense of a grudge and anger. He turned to the senior students when they unsheathed their katanas and got into an offensive postion and it suddenly began to rain.

Seniors 1, 2, and, 3: "We're gonna kick your ass!" They all ran towards him, with a lust to slice this boy into pieces and ran towards him in different directions and yelled and made all noises of the like while attacking.

Koseiyouso: "Is that it?" Koseiyouso fended off each blow by slashing each senior and knocking them back.

Top Class Senior: *Damn! He's fast! If I'm going to kill this brat, I'm going to have to do it quickly!* The Senior ran in and thrusted his sword straight into chest. Kouseiyouso fell to the ground with the Zanpato in his hands.

Kouseiyouso:*Shit! I can't die here! I haven't completed my revenge yet!* He sat there with his knees in the ground and his hands in the mud while coughing up blood. He realized he had been mortally wounded and there was no way he could survive...

Top Class Senior: "Serves you right, you little snot-nosed brat! I'm going to finish you off real slow..." he kicked Koseiyouso in his ribs and turned him over and pulled his sword out of his chest. "I'm going to make you scream like a little bitch before before I kill you off. But I think I'll do it with your sword instead of mine." The Senior then reached out for his Zanpato....

Mysterious Voice: Before the Senior could grab the Zanpato, as Koseiyouso helplessly watched, a voice suddenly screamed into his head and time stopped. "I will not let this fool remove me from your hands. I demand that stop him immediately!"

Koseiyouso: Suddenly, Koseiyouso was somewhere else. Somewhere that felt empty and was endless. It was pitch black and he couldn't see anything. "And Just who the hell are you and where am I?!"

Mysterious Voice: "Right now you are inside your mind and you and I are in the same reality, in which in your reality, time is frozen. This is only possible because of your great power and I have been trying to call out to you ever since you picked me up because I can feel the power rushing through your body."

Koseiyouso: "I don't know what you mean... And you still haven't answered my question."

Mysterious Voice: "I will only tell you my name if you promise that you will never abandon me and leave me to rust."

Koseiyouso: *Did I pick up a Zanpato..?* "Are you the spirit that sleeps within this sword?"

Mysterious Voice: "That is of little consequence. Do you promise me or not, Koseiyouso?"

Koseiyouso: *This must be this sword's spirit. If I promise him, then I can be able to call it's name and become much more powerful!* Yes, I promise you, I will never let another take you from my hand and always fight with all the power I have alongside you.

Mysterious Voice: Very well then, my name is Toukai. use my power well and and train hard, it is as they say, "If you work hard, you are always rewarded." Follow that phrase and you will become powerful over the years, young one. We'll talk again some other time, Kouseiyouso. Until then, don't die." He chuckled while his voice faded away while Kouseiyouso was returning to his reality.

Koseiyouso: "I call upon your power, Toukai!" Kouseiyouso's spiritual power began welling up, to three times it's power and his wound was completely healed. Kouseiyouso got up and moved behind the senior student. *Wow! This speed is absolutely amazing!*

Note: When a Soulreaper can call out the name of their Zanpato, it is much like having another ally. The spirit power of the blade and the wielder can be merged together, making the user substantially more powerful. The spirit will merge strengths and heal the users wounds while fighting. Also, it's not like, "That dude cut me in half." "Heal, lol." it just speeds up the healing process so the user can fight better. It would only occur that way if such a minor wound like a papercut was inflicted.


Koseiyouso grabbed the sword with both hands, slashing the senior's right shoulder, and watching the blood spew all over the place while he screamed. He then readied himself to split the senior from the head down. But something flashed by, knocking him back.

Captain Hitsugaya: "Stop right there." He turned to Kouseiyouso and pointed his sword at his throat staring at him with his ice-blue eyes that had hardened over the years, and peered straight into his eyes while Kouseiyouso stared right back into his. "What the hell are you thinking, trying to kill one of your classmates?" he said as he smacked Kouseiyouso over his head. "This is a serious crime, child."


Koseiyouso: "He attacked me and mortally wounded me. There were three others, but they must've run off. You should probably get those pansies from 4th squad to track them down and help them. The cuts I gave them were deep. They're lucky I wasn't able to call out Toukai at the given time."

Captain Hitsugaya: "I see... Your wounds are completely healed, but I can see the blood that must have came from your blood, even though it's pretty much been washed away in the rain. There's something special about you, kid. You remind me of someone very strong I knew back in the day. I'll take this idiot back to 4th division, you find the other three and bring them there with your newfound speed and strength.

Top Class Senior: With the last of his consciousness the senior spoke: "You're... A.. Fucking monster..." Then he fainted, his head fell to the side of his shoulder, resting on Hitsugaya's arm.

Koseiyouso had left in search of the three students and had finally found them.... And they were dead. Completely mauled, and their souls had been devoured. A memory soon flashed back through his head, remembering when he got the notice that his brother died, he had been mauled to death by a Hollow and his soul was devoured.

Koseiyouso: ".....Brother, is this the bastard that killed you?" Kouseiyouso tried to sense it's power, but he couldn't find anything. Nothing at all. "I swear, brother. I will avenge your death!"

unfortunately, he had blacked out because his shikai release exhautsted him completely. When he came to, he was lying in a hospital bed with a man over top of him looking at him.

Kouseiyouso:
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! What the hell! Who are you and where the hell am I?!" As he got up and mashed foreheads with the man, his wounds reopened. "Ugh! SHIT! What was that?"

Hanatarou: "Ow... My forehead. Just sit back and lie down! You're not helping the healing process! My name is Hanatarou, captain of 4th squad. Pleased to meet you, bumpkin." He said in a sarcastic voice. "Just sit back down and relax. This is going to take a while." Hanatarou reached for a needle and stabbed it right into Kouseiyouso's neck. "I'm sorry, but I need you to lie down and stay perfectly still, because no one ever stays put long enough to completely heal them.


Next time Kouseiyouso, awoke, he was still in the same place. He wondered why he was sitting there, standing still and he took the time to examine the surroundings. There was a window that was open, and there was a nice breeze coming through. Birds were chirping and it was a sunny day in the court of pure souls. The room he was lying in, the walls were made of some kind of faded blue, the pillow was soft, but the bed wasn't as soft... He then examined the room even more and realized he no longer had Toukai in his hands.


Koseiyouso: "WHERE IS IT?! WHERE IS MY ZANPATO?!" He yelled frantically as he fell out of the bed and onto the floor. One of his wounds reopened and leaked through the wraps around his chest."DEAR FUCKING GOD! That really hurts!"

Captain Hitsugaya: Captain Hitsugaya came running in to see what the commotion was, just to see it was Kou freakin' out about where his Zanpato went. "Get back in the bed, Dumbass.You're not done healing. Furthermore, you're not allowed to have a Zanpato because you're still in the academy and haven't joined a squad, so it's been confiscated and put in your personals since it was meant to be sent to you, anyway..."

Kouseiyouso: "But... I made a promise to Toukai. That I would never let him leave my side. Give me back my Zanpato..." He said in a suprisingly calm voice.

Captain Hitsugaya: "Well, I guess it couldn't really hurt to give a nub back his sword if that's the promise he made, would it?" Captain Hitsugaya chuckled.

Koseiyouso: A sharp look flashed across Kou's face... "Who are you calling nub, gnomeboy?" Kou laughed as he made this remark not expecting what would happen next...






I will brush up on my history later. for now, I'm gonna do something else. ^^


He honed his skills for six more years and developed and mastered his Ban Kai, which is unbeknownst to his entire squad. And now currently, he is gunning for the position of captain.

This next section is all about his weapon and it's abilities.


Toukai

Shikai
Description and Abilities:
it takes the shape of longsword that is a beautiful sword that takes the form of a diamond with what seems to be wings at the end of the hilt of the sword with wraps around the hilt that reach down to Koseiyouso's knees.

The shikai release amplifies small bursts of spiritual energy to make explosions on contact with any surface.


Ban Kai

Description and abilities:

The only other stretchblade in all of the entire soul society that has been developed. It looks like a whip, it is quite flimsy, but obviously a blade. The blade Greatly amplifiies spirit power, making finishing attacks unbelievably strong.

The outline of the sword is a deep crimson red while the inner layer is black. The handle hilt is wrapped like any professionally made Katana would be with red and black thread.


Ragnarok
The user channels all their energy into their Zanpato and swirls Toukai around every which way to make thousands of orbs appear around the target in a large range and strike. Once the orbs rub against each other, they make a massive explosion. It is thought of as a self sacrificing attack because the user and the target both become trapped inside the technique and it would be extremely difficult to use at a long range.


Ikazuchi-Ken
this ability allows the user to cover themself in electricity. The electricity can only be channeled through the Zanpato and their arms, allowing the user to enhance their attacks and overall cutting power with it. If contact is made with an enemy, they are paralyzed for a short amount of time.



Typhoon Render
The user releases a set amount of spiritual power that swells up under the target and starts whirling and whipping, making a small tornado and puts the target in the air. Depending on how much spiritual power is used with this technique, it can make the difference between a tornado and a Typhoon and how far up the target will go.
 
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You're sure you want your character to have only three moves?
 
Yes, I'm sure.
 
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