Poetry Faith--By Sesshomarus-4_eva

[Sesshomarus_4-Eva]

One day I was at a friends house and I started singing and thinking of my boyfriend and this is what I thought up, its not finished, but tell me what you think about it.
Enjoy. If it sucks do tell me, I want to know how it turns out, I kinda want to be songwriter.

Faith
Made By
Rachel​

Oh hey baby baby don't you wont me?
cause I want you
Oh baby baby don't you love me?
cause I love you
Baby don't you want to put me in your arms
cause I want you to.
oh I don't know what to do with myself
without you here.
and I dont know, why is it so complicated?
I see you walking down the street
until our eyes finally meet
We talked for while
Oh the way you smiled
Just made me want to cry
Because......

----Chrorus----
I can't believe, your with me
You standing here, really makes that clear
That you are mine, we'll be fine
Oh baby don't you wanna be with me?
because I want to be with you...........
(inserting words later)(songwriter block)
Down the aisle
I see you smile
Just made me want to cry

----Chorus----
Because
I can't believe, your with me
You standing here, really makes that clear
That you are mine, we'll be fine
Oh baby don't you wanna be with me?
because I want to be with you...........

 

[Dark-Angel]

You know. thats good, but i'm only saying that coz i like writing about love and romance and shizz like that despite my male gender. The rythym sounds fine...i take it you're looking for a composer to put that into song for you.