My character: "Aiden Aphelion Schtauffen"
Well….uhh…ahh….whatever…Here is my RP Character:
*Someone please close the thread with my other character. Thank You..."
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fficeffice" /><o>I created this character yesterday and I want to know your opinions and suggestions. Any advice that you give me will be gladly accepted.</o>
<o>*Pictures taken from the Photobucket. Thanks to the one who made this images.</o>
Name: Aiden Silverlake Schtauffen
Known as: “The Ghost” or as “Aphelion”<o></o>
Race: “Human”<o></o>
Gender: Male<o></o>
Class: Swordsman <o></o>
Age: 19
Weapon: Long Swords<o></o>
Weapons’ Name and descriptions:<o></o>
A)”The Fearless”: A four feet long sword that was given to Aiden by his father at the age of fourteen. The sword’s blade is engraved with patterns of angels and ancient scriptures at both sides of the silver colored blade. The hilt of the sword is made of the finest wood and is covered in a silver and gold alloy. The structure of the sword is highly strong increasing its endurance to the highest levels. Most of the sword’s defensive cover for the hand is made of gold and silver with engravings of dragons and angels. This sword is truly master piece worthy of Kings.
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<o>*After a certain point in his journey, Aiden will find the legendary sword “The Arkam”, after that, Aiden will be able to wield two swords at the same time.
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B) “The Arkam”: A legendary four feet long sword corrupted by evil that was sealed a long time ago by the strongest sages of the known world. The power of this sword is so great that even the demons fear its power. This sword is made by the strongest materials known in the world and is also known for not losing his sharpness ever. The blade is made of mythril, the strongest material in the world, and is engraved at both sides of the blade with ancient inscriptions that tell the history of an Ancient Battle, written in a forgotten tongue that was long lost in the pages of history. The hilt of the blade is black and it has a ruby at the end of it, decorated with patterns of black and gold wings. Unfortunately, this sword was corrupted in an ancient battle by evil, a battle that will be revealed later to the master of this blade. Due to the sword’s corruption, “The Arkam” now emanates an evil glow that is sealing the sword’s true power. In the hands of the unworthy, this sword will turn against its wielder and consume him in dark flames, but in the hands of the true hero, the sword’s curse will be lifted, and “The Arkam” will recover its full strength once again.
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Appearance: <o></o>
At the beginning of every adventure, Aiden wears his mercenary outfit. The outfit is well depicted in this picture:
At the beginning of each quest, Aiden wears his mercenary outfit:
Aiden when he is wearing his mercenary uniform.
Second appearance: After finding the legendary armor of the sages, Aiden changes his appearance, his hair color turns purple and his eye color can change depending on his feelings.<o></o>
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<o>Second Appearance of Aiden</o>
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<o>Third Appearance: This is the result of using the full power of the legendary sword “The Arkam”. After unleashing the full power of the holy sword, Aiden suffers a great transformation. His eyes turn red and his hair color changes to white. To Black angel wings grow on the back on Aiden, and his body is covered by the legendary Divine Armor. This armor is made of pure gold and it is known as the strongest armor of the world. Engravings of dragons, angels, and ancient inscriptions cover the armor’s surface with such a beauty that it is believed that this armor was created by God itself.
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Aiden is the son of the King of Arnazil, the legendary warrior known by the name of Andrial Revan Silverlake. After reaching the age of ten, Aiden received training in almost all types of combat, but the young prince skills excel in his swordsmanship. After his birthday at the age of 16, his father entrusted him with the family’s treasure, the legendary sword “The Fearless”. At the age of 17 his father’s kingdom was attacked by the Dark Armies of Arekia. After countless battles, the army of Arnazil was on the verge of defeat. Fearing the possible and imminent defeat, King Andrial used his last resource, the legendary sword “The Arkam”. Using the sword’s power he was able to defeat the enemy’s commander Morpheus which was wielding the cursed blade “Refensid”. This dark sword emanated an evil aura so great, that it was believed that the sword “Refensid” was able to control the mind of whoever dares to grab its cursed hilt. At the end of the battle between Andrial and Morpheus, the cursed blade was shattered, and both warriors disappeared, supposedly killed by the explosion of evil energy. Because of that, the holy sword was possessed by the cursed sword’s power. The battle was over, the Armies of Arekia were defeated, and a battle was won at the cost of the King’s life. The young prince Aiden became the new King but after some years, Aiden left his kingdom in the hands of his mother and began a journey to explore the known world.<o></o>
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Personality: Aiden was a cheerful young man, but after his father’s disappearance, he became antisocial and a bit cold. He doesn’t talk too much unless he knows the person he is talking to. After his father went missing, Aiden finds it hard to express his feelings to others and he has lost almost all of his friends. Regardless the fact that he can be quite a loner, Aiden is a true friend to those close to him and he will be willing to sacrifice his own life for the safety of his friends.<o></o>
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Abilities: He is an excellent swordsman with little skills with magic. The only spells he knows are the basic ones; Fire, Blizzard, and Thunder. These spells, however, will increase in power during Aiden’s journey.<o></o>
Limits :
A) Over Rush: He dashes towards his enemy and then he deals a series of devastating attacks one after another, (20 hits). Then, before the last hit, Aiden steps back and he rush again towards his enemy, slashing through the center of his enemy.
B) Divine Swords: Wielding two swords, Aiden runs towards his enemy dashing from left to right, dealing devastating attacks one after the other. After landing 30 hits on his enemy, he steps back, jumps high into the air and then he comes down slashing with both swords while leaving a trail of blue fire behind.
C) Holy Judgment: Aiden’s most powerful attack. After unleashing the legendary sword’s power, Aiden jumps high into the air and then he slashes his opponent from different sides after each hit, again and again. After landing 40 hits, he merges both swords into one and then he jumps into the air and he comes down with a crushing blow leaving behind a trail of blue and red flames in the form of pair dragons, one red and the other blue.
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The origins of the twin blades:<o></o>
It was said that a long time ago, the world was ruled by an ancient sorcerer named Refensid. This evil man was so cruel, that he killed his own family in order to achieve absolute power using a forbidden ritual. The sages of the known world knew that if this dark man remained ruling the land, humanity would surely face its end. Using the most powerful of the ancient spells, the sages were able to create the mystical sword “Arkam”. This sword, however, was not strong enough to destroy the evil sorcerer. The sages then began to create yet another sword that was called “The Nameless”. The Nameless was created in order to seal the sorcerer’s power inside of its blade. Then, after creating both blades, the sages entrusted the holy weapons to the legendary warrior whose name was lost in the pages of history. This young man clad in a silver armor, went to the castle of the sorcerer. At the last tower of this dark fortress, the young knight faced the Evil Sorcerer Refensid in clashing battle. Wielding both swords, the young knight was able to defeat Refensid. When the young knight was ready to seal the evil of Refensid, the dark sorcerer used his last strength in order to corrupt the soul of the young knight. After that, the young knight sealed the evil sorcerer inside of the “Nameless”. Fearing that the corruption of the dark sorcerer would lead him to destroy his own world, the young knight performed an ancient ritual in order to seal his own soul inside of the legendary sword Arkam and with it, destroy this dark castle. The soul of the knight was sealed inside of the Arkam and it was purified by the holiness of the blade. Soon after the sealing of both souls, the knight’s spell also began to destroy the dark castle. A few moments later, the castle was left in ruins and both swords vanished. The legend says these swords were destined to return once again…..the details of their return were lost in the pages of history….<o></o>
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Well….uhh…ahh….whatever…Here is my RP Character:
*Someone please close the thread with my other character. Thank You..."
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fficeffice" /><o>I created this character yesterday and I want to know your opinions and suggestions. Any advice that you give me will be gladly accepted.</o><o
>*Pictures taken from the Photobucket. Thanks to the one who made this images.</o>Name: Aiden Silverlake Schtauffen
Known as: “The Ghost” or as “Aphelion”<o
></o>Race: “Human”<o
></o>Gender: Male<o
></o>Class: Swordsman <o
></o>Age: 19
Weapon: Long Swords<o
></o>Weapons’ Name and descriptions:<o
></o>A)”The Fearless”: A four feet long sword that was given to Aiden by his father at the age of fourteen. The sword’s blade is engraved with patterns of angels and ancient scriptures at both sides of the silver colored blade. The hilt of the sword is made of the finest wood and is covered in a silver and gold alloy. The structure of the sword is highly strong increasing its endurance to the highest levels. Most of the sword’s defensive cover for the hand is made of gold and silver with engravings of dragons and angels. This sword is truly master piece worthy of Kings.
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>*After a certain point in his journey, Aiden will find the legendary sword “The Arkam”, after that, Aiden will be able to wield two swords at the same time. <o
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><o></o>B) “The Arkam”: A legendary four feet long sword corrupted by evil that was sealed a long time ago by the strongest sages of the known world. The power of this sword is so great that even the demons fear its power. This sword is made by the strongest materials known in the world and is also known for not losing his sharpness ever. The blade is made of mythril, the strongest material in the world, and is engraved at both sides of the blade with ancient inscriptions that tell the history of an Ancient Battle, written in a forgotten tongue that was long lost in the pages of history. The hilt of the blade is black and it has a ruby at the end of it, decorated with patterns of black and gold wings. Unfortunately, this sword was corrupted in an ancient battle by evil, a battle that will be revealed later to the master of this blade. Due to the sword’s corruption, “The Arkam” now emanates an evil glow that is sealing the sword’s true power. In the hands of the unworthy, this sword will turn against its wielder and consume him in dark flames, but in the hands of the true hero, the sword’s curse will be lifted, and “The Arkam” will recover its full strength once again.
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></o>At the beginning of every adventure, Aiden wears his mercenary outfit. The outfit is well depicted in this picture:
At the beginning of each quest, Aiden wears his mercenary outfit:
Aiden when he is wearing his mercenary uniform.
Second appearance: After finding the legendary armor of the sages, Aiden changes his appearance, his hair color turns purple and his eye color can change depending on his feelings.<o
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>Second Appearance of Aiden</o><o
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>Third Appearance: This is the result of using the full power of the legendary sword “The Arkam”. After unleashing the full power of the holy sword, Aiden suffers a great transformation. His eyes turn red and his hair color changes to white. To Black angel wings grow on the back on Aiden, and his body is covered by the legendary Divine Armor. This armor is made of pure gold and it is known as the strongest armor of the world. Engravings of dragons, angels, and ancient inscriptions cover the armor’s surface with such a beauty that it is believed that this armor was created by God itself. Biography: <o
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></o>Aiden is the son of the King of Arnazil, the legendary warrior known by the name of Andrial Revan Silverlake. After reaching the age of ten, Aiden received training in almost all types of combat, but the young prince skills excel in his swordsmanship. After his birthday at the age of 16, his father entrusted him with the family’s treasure, the legendary sword “The Fearless”. At the age of 17 his father’s kingdom was attacked by the Dark Armies of Arekia. After countless battles, the army of Arnazil was on the verge of defeat. Fearing the possible and imminent defeat, King Andrial used his last resource, the legendary sword “The Arkam”. Using the sword’s power he was able to defeat the enemy’s commander Morpheus which was wielding the cursed blade “Refensid”. This dark sword emanated an evil aura so great, that it was believed that the sword “Refensid” was able to control the mind of whoever dares to grab its cursed hilt. At the end of the battle between Andrial and Morpheus, the cursed blade was shattered, and both warriors disappeared, supposedly killed by the explosion of evil energy. Because of that, the holy sword was possessed by the cursed sword’s power. The battle was over, the Armies of Arekia were defeated, and a battle was won at the cost of the King’s life. The young prince Aiden became the new King but after some years, Aiden left his kingdom in the hands of his mother and began a journey to explore the known world.<o
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></o>Personality: Aiden was a cheerful young man, but after his father’s disappearance, he became antisocial and a bit cold. He doesn’t talk too much unless he knows the person he is talking to. After his father went missing, Aiden finds it hard to express his feelings to others and he has lost almost all of his friends. Regardless the fact that he can be quite a loner, Aiden is a true friend to those close to him and he will be willing to sacrifice his own life for the safety of his friends.<o
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></o>Abilities: He is an excellent swordsman with little skills with magic. The only spells he knows are the basic ones; Fire, Blizzard, and Thunder. These spells, however, will increase in power during Aiden’s journey.<o
></o>Limits :
A) Over Rush: He dashes towards his enemy and then he deals a series of devastating attacks one after another, (20 hits). Then, before the last hit, Aiden steps back and he rush again towards his enemy, slashing through the center of his enemy.
B) Divine Swords: Wielding two swords, Aiden runs towards his enemy dashing from left to right, dealing devastating attacks one after the other. After landing 30 hits on his enemy, he steps back, jumps high into the air and then he comes down slashing with both swords while leaving a trail of blue fire behind.
C) Holy Judgment: Aiden’s most powerful attack. After unleashing the legendary sword’s power, Aiden jumps high into the air and then he slashes his opponent from different sides after each hit, again and again. After landing 40 hits, he merges both swords into one and then he jumps into the air and he comes down with a crushing blow leaving behind a trail of blue and red flames in the form of pair dragons, one red and the other blue.
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I think its a pretty solid character with one minor glitch. In my opinion ( which im not trying to force on you) i think you should change the names of his magic spells from ones that exist in final fantasy and come up with some yourself. Just a suggestion though. Other than that great job.