http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BsjbLLIwEfg
Had too much free time and made a song...
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Oh well, don't be too harsh
				
			Had too much free time and made a song...
If you're in burning need to leave a review of this song in this thread then go on!
Oh well, don't be too harsh

  I like the rhythm that comes in around 0:23, and some of the sound effects that you use in it.  I write/record songs too, but I'm fairly new to digital recording having done analog for most of my life 
, so I'm afraid I can't get much more technical than that.  My only recommendation might be to add a bit more ambient stuff like you did towards the end, but then it also depends on what kind of sound you're going for 
 
 these kind of reviews will improve my skills most surely, havta read these through and make necessary changes to my projects 