My character

[Aselia]

Name:Grand Sorceress Edea
Age: unknown
Hair Color: Black
Eye color: yellow
Limit Break: Frozen Lionheart
Element: Ice

 

[Vradica]

Would you like my opinion on this character?

 

[Gaaramaster]

how...original.......(note the sarcasm)

 

[Tethar]

Not a bad start Edea but try to flesh it out with some background info about your character and info on thier fighting style and such things.

Vincent your comment was totally uncalled for and you will be warned for it.

 

[Gaaramaster]

I was just saying that her chaacter shouldn't be exactly like a character from FF. I was saying it should have some details to differ her character from Edea.

 

[Tomara]

Are you sure you want to be a character that already exists? I always prefer making an original character, because it gives you much more freedom

 

[Aselia]

well... Edea is my fave ff character... but it really isn't the same Edea... my character is the same in name and appearance only.

Her fighting style and personality are totally different than FF8's Edea.

For example, my Edea uses a "living sword" much like that of Ivy's in soul calibur... also: my Edea, while she does utilize the powers of a Sorceress, she relies heavily on physical attacks instead of all magic as ff8's edea does...

 

[Serge68]

It might help a bit more if you ellaborate on this. What does her sword look like? What's her personality like? How did she learn her skills? You know, that kinda' stuff.

Oh, and you limit break "Frozen lionheart" sounds kind of interesting. I'd love it if you could go in depth.

 

[Aselia]

ummmm... welll.... my frozen lionheart is a lot like like squall's limit break Lionheart, and it also impales them with icicles and freezes them.... and the sword looks like this....

but the blade is blue instead of red...

i'll update more later... i dont have time now...

 

[Tidus Blade]

I advise you describe your character's skills, magic and history, gives the character more character....... or personality