Renero "Rene" Skylar

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Rene Skylar's Bios

Because i've been gone for a long while I decided to create a new RP characterand here he is

ORPG/URPG/RPB - ORPG and URPG

Name: Renero “Rene” Skylar
Title: The Lost Orphan
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Date Of Birth: 26<SUP>th</SUP> of January
Job: Mercenary
Theme Songs:
Chasing cars - Snow Patrol
Stay Together For the Kids - Blink 182
Rockstar - Nickleback

Appearance:

Rene Skylar is a young tall man who has a lot on his conscious. His eyes are startling blue and his eyebrows are brown and slim. He has small ears and a small nose. He has regular sized mouth which is slightly pink. He has a medium sized frame and powerful but not at all overly sized muscles

Hair Colour: Light brown
Hair style: Medium length spiky
Eye colour: Startlingly blue
Height: 5 feet and 11 inches tall
Weight: 190 lbs
Complexion: Caucasian, but slightly darker because most of his work is outside under the sun.

Build: Rene is strong and his muscles are moderately defined. His parents died when he was a baby and he was taken to an orphanage in the country, because of this he learned to walk for a long time meaning he can journey for quite some time.

Attire: Rene usually wears his travelling clothes when he journeys and in battle, his clothes consists of:
A white vest worn underneath a red sleeveless jacket.
Baggy blue pants.
White trainers.

His formal clothing, which he wears at occasions that require him to look smart consists of:
A black tuxedo, nothing special, just your everyday black tuxedo.

Personality: Rene is an energetic young man who can be very naïve and reckless and more times than not he will run into battle without thinking about the consequences. He is a very proud man and will fight anyone so long as it is head on and a fair fight, he hates anyone who uses trickery to fight. He is also very good natured and can earn the trust of most people. Whenever there is a girl he likes he is often shy around them and easily distracted. Rene can easily be provoked when people push the right buttons and most of the time will retaliate with either brute force or a wicked tongue (though most of the time he will mess this up and end up making a fool of himself). In a battle when he knows he is outmatched he will often become extremely nervous with obvious signs such as scratching th back of his head, moaning about his life and how he gets into these situations or his voice will become shaky and he'll make crappy jokes that usually provoke the person/people attacking him anyway.

Weaponry: Guardian Blade - This is his primary weapon. He inherited this from his family. The blade itself is around 150 cm long and the hilt is around 20 cm long, the blade’s width is around 15cm thick. It is extremely sharp and he carries it on his back.
It’s main element is fire.

Hiruya - A gun. This is Rene’s long range and usually his back-up. He hates using it but he will if he has to. The gun is the same length as a sawn-off shotgun except it has a quicker reloading time and shoots faster and further. The handle is blood red with a lion design on it. He carries this on his right thigh in a holster.
It’s main element is thunder

Magic:

Rene prefers fire magic which is why most of his magic is fire based but he
also has a small selection of white magic.
Cure - Everyone knows what cure does :D But to make this clear all it does is heal things like small cuts and bruises - This only takes a little mana - This appears from Rene palm as a light green light, it hovers over the wound and glows green slightly before healing the wound
Cura - Same as above but can heal larger cuts and mend bones to a certain extent for example it wouldn't be able to mend a broken leg or arm but perhaps a few ribs. - This takes a moderate amount of Mana and tires Rene slightly - This appears from Rene palm and like cure it glows green but Cura glows a lot more brightly than Cure.
Fire - A basic ball of flame strikes the enemy - This takes very little Mana - This appears from Renes hand as a small ball of flame.
Fira - A stronger version of fire - This only takes a little more Mana than Fire and only makes Rene slightly tired - This, like Fire, appears from Renes hand as a ball of flame, it is also a lot larger and brighter than Fire
Firaga - The strongest version of fire. - This takes a lot of Mana and can make Rene quite tired - Firaga can be used in two ways, he can either shoot a massive ball of flame towards his enemy or cast a ring of fire around his enemy and constrict them, blocking there movement and burning them intensely.
Flame shots - This is basically either fire, fira or firaga casts mulitple times in rapid succession. - Depending on how many he creates this can take either a little bit of Mana or a lot and can tire him only slightly or majorly - This is usually used like shooting balls of flames from his palm, using both hands he will throw either Fire, Fira or Firaga flame balls at the enemy
Explosion - Causes an explosion next to the enemy and can cause massive damage - This takes a whole load of Mana and can tire him extremely a lot - This attack shoots two long lines of fire from his fists, he will then bring his hands together making the flames like whips, as soon as thedifferent flames connect they will cause a massive explosion

Skill and abilities:
Abilities – Most of Rene’s attacks are swordsmanship based and therefore are all just pure skill and don’t need energy or any other form of energy to use but the few that do require energy use Mana. His skills are as follows:

Jump Slash - This skill is similar to Cloud’s Braver but instead of jumping then slashing he will charge forward and jump and slash at the same time. Most of the time Rene uses this as a finisher against larger fiends - This is a swordsmanship skill and doesn't require any form of energy

Blade Storm - This attack is when Rene will charge at the enemy and slash the person several times in quick succession. He often uses this in a close, intense battle with an extremely good swordsman as it will usually wear them down quickly

Whirlwind Blade - This attack is used when he’s surrounded, in one quick slash he twirls his blade around his body slashing everyone around him. This also can appear as though a small whirlwind with metallic flashes is raging around him. - Depending on the way he uses it it can use no Mana or a lot

Gunman’s Blitz - Using his gun he will jump into the air and shoot as many times as possible at a single powerful monster or several people. When he concentrates hard he will shoot blue light instead of bullets and can cause explosions of light blinding and paralyzing any enemy who isn't hit by the actual beams. - Depending on how he uses it, the attck can take no Mana or a lot

Flame Shot - Using magic and his gun he will fire at the enemy with a bullet with fire magic casted on it. When he uses a lot of his Mana instead of just a small ball of fire a small comet will appear and decimate the enemy - This usually only takes a little Mana

Background:
When he was only a baby his parents were murdered by bandits, somehow Rene was saved and taken to an orphanage in Asei Village, as he grew up there he learnt the ways of the swordsman from a teacher called Anerro Lingham. When he was 15 Anerro was slain in battle when he enlisted to fight in the Seseu army against Albadran Empire. Ever since then he has journeyed, trying to find his own way in life.
Ambitions: Ever since he was young he has wanted to become the worlds greatest swordsman. It is also his dream to become a hero.

Fears: The only thing that scares Rene is the possibility of losing someone he is close to.

Likes: Rene loves to read books, he also likes forests and quiet, a side effect of living in the foresty terrain of Asei Village.

Dislikes; Scumbags and thieves, anyone who uses trickery to fight and backstabbers.

First impressions: When most people meet Rene for the first time they are usually put off by his brightness, he can often appear too naïve or self-confident for some people, but most of the time people like him because of his gentle nature and kind heartedness.
 
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Odd...I don't remember seeing this one before. Ah well, time to look it over.

With your curative skills, you have to state:

A. How much they heal for (make this reasonable and NOT reminiscent of the games); and
B. How much energy they take. (Also applies to the rest of your magical abilities).
C. Appearance of the skills.

Lastly, I'm thinking we need a bit more in terms of Personality, and you need a First Impression section altogether.

[NOT APPROVED]

Good luck with it ;)
 
Completed the suggestions. Didn't really understand what you meant by appearance of skills but I tried to make them look better and also there is a First Impression section at the very bottom which i've highlighted and underlined for you :)
 
Odd, I could have sworn I posted in here...

Well, anywho, I've got a critique being written now, along with Mayuri's.
 
Since Red XIII did not post up that critique, I'll post up a few suggestions:

Please rename your Cura, Curaga, etc skills. It was recently agreed upon by myself and Red XIII that RPers within the RPB need to strive for as much originality as possible, so we are disallowing names from Final Fantasy games. Just rename the skill names, and that issue will be fixed.

Otherwise, the only issue I see with this bio are confusing mentions of energy costs. You mention several times that 'depending on use, it can use no mana or a lot of mana], if you can, please elaborate more on the energy costs for those abilities, so we can better understand them.

Just fix those, and you should be all good to go for approval. =)
 
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