Poetry Emotion of Joy

[Sexy Beast]

I challenge the people who comment to put up their own interpretation.

An emotion of joy
A feeling that I thought I’d never have

It wasn’t until you came into my life
That my being became more than a shell
It became more than emotional hell
It became something.

We had laughed with each other
And we have laughed at each other.
Our memories were some of the best
And our love was more than a jest,
But tonight I sleep alone.

I have lost you to father time
I still hold a tight grip to your special dime.
Your physical presence might be gone,
But your spirit lives on and on in my heart.

I once had an emotion of joy
A feeling that I thought I’d never have.
Now it is gone forever.​

 

[nomad]

You're challenging me to interpret your poem? Is it a riddle or something? What's the challenge in commenting on a poem?

 

[Sexy Beast]

I was just saying that I want to know what people(who post/comment) think the poem is about...aka their own interpretation.

 

[nomad]

It's about losing something that improved your life. I refuse to guess what the "something" is.

It is a very vague poem, though. Don't be afraid to open up a little more with your poetry. Writing is, after all, intended to be read by others most of the time. If you're willing to share, just go all the way and share what you really mean in the poem. The poem will be stronger if it doesn't need to be paired with an explanation.

 

[Shael-BurizaDo]

<Just Inside Licks, Lastly, Yesterday's Envy Shown>

i met you, somehow
do you remember? was i there?
this is not about our bet, something i intend, her
barley softly movement, i use hair
or maybe i just forgot, something, there
could always move pretend, sentiment, i care
of sometimes, lazy, and never unfair,
either or, breathe or chore, lightly
perhaps just a brush, a tear, this there
memories or share, remember?
i will be your toy, until
you cannot, use me, dare

 

[Sexy Beast]

uhh, what exactly does that have to do with commenting on my poem? If this is your own poem, then you should post it in your own thread and not in mine.

 

[Shael-BurizaDo]

I challenge the people who comment to put up their own interpretation.

An emotion of joy
A feeling that I thought I’d never have​

It wasn’t until you came into my life
That my being became more than a shell
It became more than emotional hell
It became something.​

We had laughed with each other
And we have laughed at each other.
Our memories were some of the best
And our love was more than a jest,
But tonight I sleep alone.​

I have lost you to father time
I still hold a tight grip to your special dime.
Your physical presence might be gone,
But your spirit lives on and on in my heart.​

I once had an emotion of joy
A feeling that I thought I’d never have.

Now it is gone forever.​

sorry for posting my true interpretation, words are always poetry, to me, so i will vacate then, that was my emotion of joy, after reading your words, if you want an interpretation that does not sound poetic, i find that absurd, so go ahead and delete my post, or whatever, just tryin' to give feedback, i meant no insult, or hesitation

 

[XxemoloverxX]

wow that sounds deep

 

[XxemoloverxX]

how did you write something so cool like that?

 

[Sexy Beast]

sorry for posting my true interpretation, words are always poetry, to me, so i will vacate then, that was my emotion of joy, after reading your words, if you want an interpretation that does not sound poetic, i find that absurd, so go ahead and delete my post, or whatever, just tryin' to give feedback, i meant no insult, or hesitation

Lol, when I ask for comments, I generally ask for a non-poetic form of comments, and not another poem. Even though your intentions of your interpretation was good, I find it highly offensive when someone does a poem as a comment to one of my poems, but meh you didn't know that, so it's not a big problem. Just keep that in mind next time. =)

Also, what you find absurd, I find very interesting and quite pleasing to read.

 

[Shael-BurizaDo]

Oh, yikes, I understand now...

You asked for comments and non-poetic words...

I was confused by the use of the word challenge, I find comments and non-poetic words really easy and not challenging at all. Sorry for offending you.