Help on Bios!

[Shadowfaith]

A forum without an RP section is like heresy to me. Not even worthy for me to set my eyes on such forums.

Anyway glad to know we have one more "adviser"(critique/etc)

Totally, nothing interests me as much as RPGing. I get to use my imagination to come up with a character and see a world through their eyes =D

But thankies ^-^

And sure I'll join the club Hera! =D

 

[DKnight]

welcome to the group SF.
Oh and Hera I changed my user name, so you might want to change that in the list.

 

[Hydracula]

Okay, I finished writing enough to post it here (as you'll see there's one section incomplete)

I'd like advice

http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/showthread.php?p=303848#post303848

 

[Danijel]

I need my bio to be criticized.
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/hall-of-warriors/danijel-s-hall-of-heros-and-villains-19846.html
Please, be gentle

 

[Hera Ledro]

Fox, Julius, DKnight, and Shadow!

WHAR ARE YOU MY CRITIQUERS

 

[AlchemistFox]

I R HERE

Ill get right on it

 

[Danijel]

Ok, I saw Foxes Nag-Won-Do, but now I also want another critic check my bio again, just to be sure everything will be A-okay.
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/ha...ins-19846.html

 

[AlchemistFox]

*GHASP*

DOST THOU DOUBT MEH!

HAHAH, don't worry, it is ok. as different persons, notice different things.

I myself, specialize in the magic part.
and as your char has no magic per se, it is not a char for me to really unleash my 'Nag-won-do" ^^

Well, considering the activity of the otehrs.
I honestly have to say, that I assume that the next 'checkup' you will get, will be the approval itself from Hera.
But one can always be lucky.

 

[Hera Ledro]

It is being looked over as we speak. Thank the gods for Word document

 

[Dean Winchester]

Sorry Hera, I was kinda busy.

Note to members: Feel free to PM if you want your bios to be revised. Of course, only Hera has the seal of approval.

 

[DKnight]

I'm here. been busy with end of the semester work. I guess it's time to get started then.

 

[AlchemistFox]

This is posted up for approval as well.
So; Im sorta hoping to have it nagged at first, so that Hera will have it easier.
Even if it is approved before someone nags at it.
Id be happy to have a nag PM'ed to me.
As I always striver for a better character.

http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/hall-of-warriors/red-fox-bio-s-11243-page4.html#post359215

 

[DKnight]

ok then I'm on it. I'll give it a look over and get back to you soon.

 

[Fair_Game]

It seems I tried to join once in the past but had nothing to critique. Now I go out and break the rules and critique someone on my own and Hera asks me to join!

Ah well, its not important how it happens but yes, I would like to critique RP bio's.

Anyone interested?!

 

[Hera Ledro]

I dub thee critiquer of FFF *makes an exaggerated dubbing movement*

Welcome to the team, Fair_Game

 

[Silver Shadow]

hmm this looks interesting, well i would like someone to critique my bio before the mods do so i can edit it and say i got it right first try lol. but really i would like someone to check it for me.
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/the-barracks/shadow-s-rpb-bio-21338.html#post381713

 

[AlchemistFox]

Ok, as Im back to FFF, Im reviving this thread.
If you want to have your character "nagged" at, before you send it for approval.
Feel free to do so here, but know this, I do not have hte authority to approve any character, I can just help getting it there.

 

[Mehaha]

Mind critting?

http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/the-heroes/van-magus-byron-31301.html#post566622

 

[Dean Winchester]

Well I might give it a shot since you asked. But know that I will not give it an approval unless another RP Moderator gives it a look.

 

[AlchemistFox]

It is too late dude, I already did it ^^

EDIT
He ALSO signed up for approval, the post is like 1 min apart ^^