Kingdom Hearts: Twilight of Dreams

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Enter: Jerrid Magus

My FF Character is A man Known as Jerrid Magus He is Grandson of Terra, Son of the Phoenix and Diabolos. Jerrid inherited a Trait from his grandmother, The ability to become an Esper. However at first Jerrid is unaccepting of his gift causing his Esper form to become unstable and weaken. The result causes it to split into a 3 lvl Esper that goes in stages of an insect. Mura Esper of dormant Dreamers(Larvae) Meteoris Esper of Hollow Reality(Pupa) and Megidoa Esper of Reality(Mature).
Jerrid was give one Artifact by his mother The Soul Blaze Sword, and one by his father The Dream splitter, in his mature Esper Form the weapons Manifest in to the Esperitoa: The Blade of Forgotten Hope. only this Weapon Can Defeat Diabolos who has gone mad from many centuries of being in the dream world.
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Catching Story its great to make such world from only4 pics love your idea,you know i think your story miss only tow things dont take it seriously cuz i'm not good writer lol,a Motivation to fight dibolos and more characters thats only if you want to go in deep details.
for your drawings i like customs alot really creative, you got to draw his face though,also try to color it in photoshop you will see such huge different,you will feel like your characters come alive lol, waiting your next stuff....
 
After The Final Battle of KH2. The Doors seemed closed all seemed at peace. but as soon as The heroes could sigh a breath of relief....A Black Door appeared before them it looked very odd as if it was staring at them the orb on the door vanished and Sora Was sucked in to The realm of Lost destiny.
As Sora sets foot into the world he finds himself in a laboratory filled with stasis pods. One reads a name "Saphron". as Sora reads it he fades into a flashback. The Flashback reminds him there was a child named Saphron at his home world. Sora ducks behind the pods. as hears a man's voice. ???: it's time to release the final product, once we do We can dispose of the prototypes....hehehehe. The man notices Sora and Calls the guard Celbrens (new Heartless types represent the mind). Sora is forced to flee just as he does the saphron pod opens. and a boy appears with a sickle and a hand like a heartless'. the boy cuts the Celbrens and pushes Sora into a warp pod. as Sora is transported the boy is hit by an odd green flash. This is the prelude
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The Art: The 3 Lords of Origins(Key & Door make, Heartless Dreamer, and Weapon Maker), Lord Veyeus(EDEN Syndicate Leader), 3 Saphron Prototype Clones, The 9 Project D.R.E.A.M. Knights, And True Saphron with true Weapon.
 
Cool art man. I didn't get a chance to read the stories just yet. I'll hit them back in a bit.

But I merged all your topics together. That way, if someone is interested in your work, it's not spread out across 3 different threads in the same board. I kept the Kingdom Hearts title because I figured that would attract the most people. But, if you'd like, I could change the title to whatever you want to reflect this new collection of your stuff. Just PM me if you'd like to discuss it. ^__^
 
Thank You

Thank You, Sir I appreciate it I was afraid of Monopolizing space, also if You think this title will attract more attention then I will take your word for it.
 
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