La Vie en Rose - Sabriel's Graphics
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I like the simpleness of this piece. And the colors work VERY well, and the brightness is just right, it's not too bright, nor too dull. I also like the smudging effects you got going on towards the right side. The text is kinda hard to read, but the placement is very nice.
Let me first say the color scheme on this one doesn't compliment the picture at all. It would have been better with a yellow-ish type of color for the background. However, I do like the smudging around Roxas. And the duplicate on the left looks a little bit out of place from the whole thing. Once again, the text placement is very nice.
~Credit goes to ~illbewaiting on deviantArt for the original image~
I like the simplicity of this piece but overall it does look a little washed out. Try Image>Adjustments>Curves to make it look a little bit less washed out, and to make roxas stand out more. Text is nice, good placement but as Riyoku said it is a little bit hard to read.
~Tried a different style~
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I likew the style you're going for here, and I think the background colour is...unusual, but it still works. I see you used a smudge tool =) try to use the smudge brush setting on 'scatter' its just a different type of smudge but I think it will really suit the tag. I'm never a big fan of the duplicate on the side, but this is the first time I've actually seen it work. so good job! I'd like to see more from you =)
Nice work on both of these.
They have a very peaceful aura about them and the colours you've used work really nicely with the atmosphere of it all.
They're both simple and clean looking and I love the fonts you've used. <3
I particularly like the first one.
Nice colours and it looks so soft in the background.
Gorgeous lighting and love the image too. It's a lovely piece of work. =)
Major improvement on the text much, Sab? Very nice.I like the orange coloured one more, it's a very clean signature. I think the blurryness on the green one, behind Sora looked off. Maybe it would've worked if the background wasn't solid green, but it looks "just smurred" now. Can't say anything about the orange one, it's very pretty. =)
I really like this piece, the lighting and colours are gorgeous and the text is really pretty. Perhaps a black/white gradient map or some playing around with photo filters could enhance the signature so it doesn't look so "washed out" but, it's beautiful in it's simplicity.
I like the effects used here, and the text is gorgeous. Perhaps it's a little too empty, maybe a lighting source could have helped? Since the green is a little overpowering.
Definitely prefer the orange/pinky avatars here, they're beautiful as avatars, the lighting really works well with them.
I like what you've done here, it's simple, but very effective. The text is lovely, and I really like only having a border at the very bottom; it's different, but it's very effective for this piece.
I really like what you did with the font here!
The way you did the 'N' looked really cool! The only thing I would suggest is that maybe you put more of a glow around the 'N' to make it stand out a bit more.
When I first saw it I thought you'd missed a letter and hard to look a bit harder to actually see the 'N'. =P
Other than that it's a cute simple piece and having just a border down the bottom looks good, though I'm still more inclined to the border being on both sides.
Other than that it's a lovely piece. =)
Works like this one stand out to me. Your others are good. But it's nice to see something that isn't anime as well, and you happen to be pretty good at it from the looks of it.
Ze text, woman! That improved majorly in that signature. I love how bold it is. It's so out there.
Maybe a nice white border could've helped this signature, and a little effects, but overal very nice and readable text, Sab! ♥