My Character: Xavier Royale

[Zexion_01]

Name: Xavier Royale
Age: 28
Race: Human
Class: Samurai
Weapon: Long sword ( a little like Sephiroth's )
Appearance: Tall, long black hair (in eyes!), Long black jacket with red symbol on, black trousers, belt, Sword on back, scar on face, red eyes, black gloves tattoo on left arm, sinister expression
Personality / Bio: Xavier is seen as many as a loner. He is skilled in the dark arts of swordplay and in sticky situations can wield his sword with true skill. He is not much of a ladies' man, but college years he was known to have a fan club. He hides his emotions well although he has strong feelings for the sommoner Maria. He travelles with Maria on her pilgramige to Zanarkand to defeat Sin as her Guardian.

I will be making an RP about him soon, so stay tuned.

 

[Tidus Blade]

Nice character, no so detailed but still nice, BTW sephiroth's sword is called musamune i think

 

[Serge68]

Well, your grammar needs work, and your character needs a bit more detail. Your personality and bio need tons more work, detail, and depth so you know, we can actually have a reasonable idea of what's going on with him.

What else... Oh yes! Instead of making a character fit to the model somebody like Auron or Sephiroth, you should try to do something to make him more of your own. How about two long daggers instead an abnormally large sword, or maybe even the thing that makes a samurai a samurai: A daisho.

A daisho consists of a katana (the shorter sword) and a wakizashi (the longer sword) and are the token symbol of the samurai status. Oh, and so you know, (and just in case you get any ideas) Sephiroth is NOT a samurai.

On the bright side though, this character has tons of potential. If you work at this character more, he might make a good battler in the circus section of this site.

 

[Dark Child]

I think he knos Seph isn't a samurai, he was saying he has an outrageously large sword like Sephiroth.

You should put alittle more detail into it so we can get a better understanding.

 

[Vradica]

It's a start, and you may have something here. However, I suppose it goes without saying that it could use a lot of work, mainly in expanding the fields of this character's attributes. On the otherhand, this character, as you stated, is designed for a certain RP, and I am guessing that you're leaving him as he is for the sake of character development, which is okay.

 

[FireFrenzy]

Serge you made a small ish mistake the bigger sword is the Katana and the smaller one is the Wakazashi...

As for the concept of the character, IMHO, people with oversized swords are about as over done as snipers that can go invisible... FF7 kinda ruined the concept, and whats upw ith people going to zanarkand on FFX rippof trips? cant anyone make up anything original anymore??

This isn't ment to dis your work i have seen far worse and if i really hated it you wouldnt be able to sit for a week (i have perfect the spanking over internet machine)