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Name: Kelis
Race: Human/Mystlin
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Occupation: Mercenary/priestess(in training)
Race/ History- Though Humans and Mystlin are practically similar in appearances ,they are very different in abilities and standards.
Mystlin are humans that through the millions of years of existence, have stayed true to the land and its celestial life essence,which is the inner power of every living subject in the world.In other words CELESTIAL is the ability to use the energy of the land and its occupants including but not limited to the abilities that are mentioned next:
WATER,ICE,LIGHTNING,WIND,FIRE,MOUNTAIN,EARTH,LIGHT & DARKNESS.

Due to that decision, they have acquired this gift and perfected it , thus becoming a powerful race with the ability to use the world itself as a offensive and defensive tactic.While each Mystlin has a natural talent for Celestial working, High Priests and Priestess' are the leaders of the Mystlin and are the only ones authorized to use Celestial energy, donning them the title 'Celestials'

They live in small group/ towns across the land that are governed by Humans. Humans and Mystlin live in peace.Though some of them have migrated to Human cities. The main city of Humans is the land of IRATH.
(The human history is well known as most of you are purely that race)

Appearance<o:p></o:p>
-Hair: Dark black straight short hair.
-Eyes: Her eyes are a very light and bright blue. Her eyes turn black due to the intensity of the celestial powers.
-Height: 125 lbs
-Weight: 5 feet 7 inches
-Complexion: very Light tan
-Build: slender in good physical shape. With a normal bust and a narrow waist.
-Noteworthy Features: One tattoo on the back of her neck.
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The representation of the Mystlin.
-Attire: Short dark red tunic the goes down to the mid of her thighs white stockings to her knees , black boots that go up to bellow her knee. She has ribbons wrapped around her right arm(goes from her hand to her elbow) in the colors red black and white. A black leather belt to hold her two daggers. A small chest plate that only covers the top of her upper body . A black leather belt across her back connected to her chest plate to hod her sword. And an black armlet on her left arm.

First impression: Due to her Mystlin heritage she has a beauty like no other. Yet with her attire and neck short hair it gives her and edgy look. She will seem a bit shy at first. She will come off as independent at first. But truly it is just fear of loosing someone that keeps her from getting close to anyone.
Personality: Due to her occupation she is very timid of others and sometimes comes of as cold but she is just really shy . After time she warms up and starts to trust her companions. She is very optimistic and always tries to help others.


Weapons:carries two similar daggers And a sword
daggers:each is 13 inches long, has a straight blade, and the hand guard is made so it follows the blade for 2 inches.
The blade itself has an engraving from hand grip to tip in Mystlin lettering. And the handle is made for optimal grip. .approximately 28 inches long.
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Armor: She wear a small chestplate and a armlet.

Abilities, magics and skills:
Her basic skills are that of a very trained mercenary. Her sword/daggers skills and close quarter combat are very well respected in the mercenary community. When it comes to her Mystlin abilities. She is very limited for now. Her Celestial ability is not fully developed. For now all she can do is defy gravity a bit. She can’t fly but she can jump very high and do many aerial attacks. Also her interaction with the land is developing well. She can some-what communicate with other species and can sense danger. Her powers derive from the earth itself, to the light and darkness comes from inner power and strength. After she uses a powerful ability she will feel fragile. Because her powers are attacking and defensive powers she has a huge limit.Celestial power does not include healing powers. If she is hurt she will have to resort to potions or medical attention. She also has combined her physical attacks with her celestial attacks, thus making them seem as one.




History: Kelis was raised by her father (a war hero during his days he helped the Humans fight against a savage race that claimed war over the Humans and Mystlin 20 years ago for the land and resources). They lived in one of the large Human city of Jalvines.He taught her how to defend herself and put her through rigorous training. After years and years of training her father decided to sign her into the military. With his credibility and her skills she would enter with high rank. But at the age of 17 her father became terribly ill and died shortly after that. Before his death he gave her a letter written in Mystlin language .At that time she did not understand, so she made that her goal. She denied acceptance into the military and decided to find out what the letter meant. She couldn’t find the answer in her city due to the fact that no one could read such a language. So she took her father’s sword and daggers and set off to find out what the letter is about. Shortly after the beginning of her journey she met a mercenary group and joined them for some quick jobs to gain money and experience. After many years of searching at the age of 20 she stumbled across the Mystlin village Darcerres. She asked someone to read and translate this letter. The letter was written by her birth mother a Mystlin. A very well known high celestial(priestess). When the villagers find this out they ask her to stay. They let her known that her mother passed away while in battle with the Kelosith. Her father came to the village where her mother lived and took Kelis into the city for protection. After learning this Kelis stayed with the villagers. And the villagers welcomed her as one of there own. They knew of her Celestial potential and decided to do a “blessing”(a ceremony for young priest and priestess)After her ceremony as a priestess(where she received the marking of a Mystlin).She trained with the Mystlin Knights as a warrior as well and learned how to control her powers though she has a a lot to learn she was starting to understand her Celestial powers. At the age of 21 she wanted to find to be on her own. She couldn't call herself a human nor a Mystlin. She wanted to find out what she can about her two heritages and her mothers and even her fathers history. So she left the safety of the village and set of on her journey to discover who she was

If you can tell me what you think this is my first ever RP character. And I just went with what i thought would fit.>_<
 
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This isn't too bad actually.
and for a first, it is rather good.

there might be a few things I would nag on. But im not gonna, since this RP is not that strict.
Also. Since this is your first character. In assuming that it is your first RP'ing experience.
or at least one of the few first

Well. do no fear. This is one of the reasons I made the RP.
For training.

So. enjoy, and have fun.

Kelis is [APPROVED]
 
Name: Crane Valentine
Race: Half human/Half demon
Gender: Male
Age: 21
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Hair: Red and Blue streaked shoulder length hair, Crane usually wears his hair in a straightened fashion and has it swept over his right shoulder, but when he goes into battle he customarily ties it back as a tradition of his ancestors.
Eyes: Deep crimson coloured eyes, but there is a strange marking in his right eye in the shape of a wolf’s head.
Height: 156cm
Weight: 60kg
Complexion: He is completely tanned from head to foot but has a slight blueish tinge to his skin, the texture of his skin is of that of sand, he also has enough muscle to be as hard as a rock if he tensed his muscles, there are scars on his back from his extensive training from when he was a childsoldier, they are all long scars that reach from the back of his neck to the bottom of his spine.
Build: Crane’s build is that of a very athletic person due to his being very agile and due to the carrying of heavy loads, he tries very hard to contain the mass of muscle within his tight fitting shirt but has much trouble.
Noteworthy Features: Crane has a fair few noteworthy features such as a tribal tattoo on his left shoulder running across to his right hip to try and disguise the scars on his back. He also has a deep scar running across his left eye from when he was mugged in the city of veo. He also has a trinket that never leaves his side it is a trinket his mother gave to him before she died tragically at the hands of a psychotic gang of thieves who shot her for a measly twelve Gil, the trinket is in the form of a small ceremonial dagger he has on a chain around his neck. The way that he walks due to the scar on his chest near his heart and his slight limp from a severely broken leg.
Personality: Crane doesn’t have many friends to hang around with but when he is with his few friends he will act happily and go along with them were ever they go, but if one of them does something Crane thinks is over the top he wont refrain from beating him down to a bloody pulp as a lesson for his over the top prank.
First Impression: At first impression Crane may seem hard to get along with but once you sit down have a drink and talk with him you will find he isn’t so bad. Most people would cower away from him or run for cover. In bad situations he will seem like a hero he will put his life on the line to save the endangered people. People will find him easier to talk to in bad situations.
Weapon(s): Cranes choices of weapons are a single traditional katana, with a lions head carved into the hilt. He also carries a small sawn off Rifle with laser sights and a scope.
Armour: Cranes choice of armour is an oversized buckler strapped to his back for protection, and a buckler strapped to his right arm, these have been coated with a clay coating so they give the enemy the appearance that they have broken the shield but have only cracked the clay. Other than those two shields he has only the tight leather trousers and long tight white sleeveless hooded shirt he wears as armour.
Magic: Crane doesn’t have the power to use any form of magic.
Abilities/skills: Crane has few sword skills inherited from his fathers side of the family, the abilities have been passed down for four hundred years. Crane has the skills of a true samurai, he has the ability to use the sword to distract his enemies with a solid beam of light then while there blinded rush them from behind. Crane can also combine the katana with another smaller blade which turns his Katana into a double ended sword. He also has a skill that he uses for wood chopping but should really be used as a skill on the battle field, it uses his body heat to heat the blade to burn and slice through any enemies.
Quick History: There are sections of this characters history that will be revealed over the course if this RP but I will give you the chance to see the mystery surrounding his demon form.
Cranes history has been a jam-packed sixteen years there has never been a dull moment in his life, Crane was born to the leader of the prestigious samurai family of the isikuga clan, Raiken Valentine formerly named Raiken Isikuga, Cranes family name changed when his father was chased out of the clan by the outlaws who now use the name as an illegal trading name, Crane’s mother was a waitress at a local bar Raiken used to visit on a regular basis until they decided after years of talking and dating they ran off to the city of Vria (pronounced Ria) and after two years they had Crane and moved back to there hometown, the tragic death of his mother died when Crane had just turned two and his mother was returning home from work when she was mugged by a group of thieves, because of her resistance and her threatening to report them resulted in her being shot outside her home and being looted of as mentioned earlier a measly twelve Gil, after the tragic shooting Crane ran out to see what the noise was and found his mother bleeding on the doorstep this is when Crane receives the trinket he carries with him at all times and also when Crane realises he hates any and every thief in existence, after this event in his history his father receded into a state of dependency on alcohol. This is when Crane was rescued by a kind lonely woman who saw how miserable he looked and saw the state that he looked like and decided to help him have a proper life. He helped the kind lady who was later revealed to be a ex thief who was wounded by a gun shot to the leg, even though Crane despised thieves he found a place in his heart for her, she raised him like a son. Until the city fell into a state of war against which was fought with the neighbouring city of Veo which lasted till Crane got to his sixteenth birthday, when the war started the cities defences weren’t strong enough to handle any attacks from the prestigious armies of Veo so they called upon the children of the city to fight for them, this is where he came to get his skills as a Samurai, while most other children chose the weapon of their choice Crane used the sword his father had bestowed upon him to use in his time of need. He earnt himself the nickname “The demon blade” (this holds some clue as to why he became half demon), because of his ability to deflect most of the bullets and strikes fired and swung at him. Once the war had finished and at the age of seventeen Crane moved to a small village outside of the city to get away from the fighting, this is where he trained his fighting even more till one day whilst fighting in a village tournament his training sword shattered due to a heavy blow from his opponent and friends club, which caused a shard of the super sharp silver blade to be lodged in between his ribcage and into his heart, Crane fell into a near death state during which he had a vision involving him selling his soul to Hades and in return recovering fully from his injuries, two days after this he woke up from the near death state without a scratch on him, but he looked and seemed different when he stood on his leg he could feel a slight amount of pain around his hip, when he looked he could see his leg was deformed.
When Crane asked what happened to his leg the local Blacksmith just glared at Crane as if to say “you don’t remember what you did to our village”. Crane had wreaked havoc in the village when he lost control of his body during his near death state and proceeded to mercilessly kill the mayor and his entire family.
. After this Crane was treated as an outcast, and was forced to move back to his home city, but was forced into hiding when he was chased by his ex-comrades who he deserted in the after years of the war, who he had sworn to protect forever. After this he had to build his strength in hand to hand combat by building his muscles to the way they are today, because even though his former comrades where trying to kill him he didn’t want to spill more of their blood then necessary. Crane was slowly begging to feel like there was a war being waged inside of his body this was when he had another “visit” from Hades telling him what he had forgot to tell him the time he was revived.
that he was revived as a half demon
. His father got in touch with him to say he only had a few more days to live, due to an infection of his father’s liver due to all of the drink he had ingested over the years. Before his father died Crane visited his bedridden wreck of his father to speak with him and say he was sorry for not visiting before, this was when he was told to avenge the name of the isikuga clan.
 
ok, since I have already read this profile.
I hope for you, that you didn't edit anything ^^

For now. your character is [APPROVED]
 
alright. I'll need everyone that wants to join in the battle in Gondon or whatever we're calling the place before my next post.
 
well. I only have 2 things to nag on (nagging is not a bad thing ^^)

it is the telekinetic magic
this can be extremely powerful.
and should be out under some limits.

Like, limits to size of objects, length of time he can hold them in the air.
For ideas on what I mean.
rad my character Aloc <- link


the 2nd thing, is that I'm assuming he uses a quiver to hold the arrows.
the description of the weapon, and arrows is fine.
just ad the quiver, and the maximum amount of arrows it can hold.

fix these 2 things, and I'll have another look
 
Hey guys I’ve been following your never ending RP and its really good. I was thinking if I can join you guys. I’ve done some RP before but this is the first time I do it in a thread

Name: lufes

Age: 20

Race: Elven

Apperance: Lufes is a 6’0 tall, 150 lbs elf. his ears are pointed and pin back his eyes are white and his pupils are a misty grey. He has blue/black hair that reaches about to his chin semi choppy. Lufes is average built and has a tattoo of his families crest on is right fore arm which is a star with two arrows crossing in the bottom. He has light skin.

Notable marks: his families crest in his fore arm

Clothing: he wears a royal blue fitted 3/4 t shirt and black pants with a chrome belt buckle. he has a strap going across his chest from right sholder down to left waist that hold his bow in on his back. over that he has a midnight blue cloak with three silver chains holding it together.

Personality: friendly, Outspoken, witty, funny, Curious, bubbly, He like interacting with people, Sometimes his big personality gets him into trouble. impatiant

First impression: very confident on what he stands by, but with his sarcastic hurmor its hard to know wether his serious or not

Weopons: Of course being an elf he has a bow. Its angrave with vines which symbolized the town hes from. His bows are green with a chrome arrow head. he has a brown leather quiver that hold for now 50 arrows.

Magic: The only magic Lufes posses is telekinetic . He can control and munipulate objects to his advantage but he cannot control an object that is possesed or being held by someone or something ( expample; Someone holdin knives, sword etc, etc. it has to be free standing) he cannot hold an object in the air for a long time, its too much for his mental state. he only uses it when somethings in the way or comming towards him

Attacks: His physical attack is as basic as a simple ranger. He specializes in long ranges . Also when he runs out of arrows he can use the bow it self as a weapon

Quick history: Lufes was born in the town of Trif where eleves live in peace and out of harms way. its very enriched with greenery, he spent his child hood mastering the bow and arrow and his telekinetic. But he quickly left when he found out he was going to be recruited to join Trift D’fens squad Being the free spirit that Lufes is, Now hes just travels the land in hope of his own adventures. Lufes is a little naïve when it comes to having a enemy. He understand the concept of having an enemy but never felt an enemies wrath.

Thnx for your time and if have any question on my character or its need to be change please feel free and let me know
 
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well.
if you could please deleted the FIRST post that contained your character.
he don't need to be there twice ^^

As for now.
Your character is [APPROVED]
have fun in NERP (Never Ending RP)

The best way to enter the RP now.
is to enter the town from the opposite side, and note the smoke.

or something like that ^^
 
Just to note. This rp is mostly to help you get you or your characters ready for other rps. if you get a comment from myself red fox or lady eterna. we are not picking on you, we are just there to help you get into good rping habits.
 
Cool well here's my character profile that I want to try!

ORPG and/or RPB

Name: Solber Antilienious, goes by Sol
Title: Novice Dark Knight
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 13

Appearance:

- Hair: Sol's wavy and unkempt, blonde hair spills over a crimson headband that ties in a short knot at the back of his head. Usually he keeps the front of his hair chin length and the back cropped short excluding a single spot at the base of the cranium that sprouts a shoulder length rat tail. The headband sports a metal plate with an ensignia with the runic word for 'Novice'.
- Eyes: Pale blue eyes surround an impossibly dark pupil.
- Height: 4'11"
- Weight: 113 lbs
- Complexion: A lifetime outdoors has blessed Sol with firm youthful flesh, almost totally unblemished and slightly tanned. Aside from the occasional freckle he's fairly clean.
- Build: Short and scrawny, but strong enough to heave his heavy weapon of choice about. The bit of muscle he has complements his athletic physique.
- Noteworthy Features: Always wears a fingerless glove over his right hand, embedded in the back hand of the glove are two dark stones that swirl with a mysterious life. (Dusk Stones are the captured souls of fallen warriors Solber has two, which isn't bad considering how hard they are to get)
- Attire: When not participating in training or battle, Sol opts to wear simple plainclothes for his everyday life. A leather tunic cinched with twine around the neckline, built explicitly for the many before him and their varying sizes. Burlap pants adorn his legs coupled with a quarter inch rope around his waist for a belt.
Personality: Boisterous and lewd, and often very loud. Sol tends to skip over difficult tasks mentally, rushing to the reward at the end and as a result usually misses out. Not one to take much serious except his training and even then he's quick to give up when things get difficult. Recently, however his father's master has spooked him into taking a bit more active concern with overcoming his disasterous fear of failure. Youthfully niave but dubuously enjoys laughter and as such seeks approval from his peers by acting the clown.
First Impression: When first met, Sol appears to be illiterate and simple. Childish and of little use to his peers. Even when fully suited in his Dark Knight armor he appears relatively useless. His actions come off childish, and his humor comes off slightly missing its mark. Fun and energetic and possibly someone worth hanging around.

Weapon(s):

Main Weapon - a 34' Unnamed steel Bastard Sword. Through extensive training it can be evenly weilded one handed or two, and has the added benefit of being able to deliver the maximum range of power without crippling Sol's dark arts.

Back-up weapon - Unnarmed. Trained to be able to fight even when without a weapon at the ready. Fighting style closely resembles a combination of boxing and grappling. Completely unhinders his ability to use dark arts.

Armor: Usually Sol wears his stable boy attire, however in the event he is able to prepare for battle/training he wears his Dark Knight armor. The set includes a full body dark metal chainmail suit, a red and black breastplate with the Antilienious family crest engraved in its center, a crimson cloak that attaches at the breastplate and stretches down below the knees, and leather boots that cover up to the knees.

Magic:

Dark Fire - Requires one free hand to cast for one full minute (turn) of uninterrupted concentration. Can only be cast twice as it uses up 1 Dusk Stone per use. Solber Antilienious summons a ring of fire from the antimatter plain. The ring appears roughly 2 feet in diameter and spirals towards its intended target at a quick pace.

Dark Flash - Requires one free hand to cast for two full minutes (2 turns) of uninterrupted concentration. Can only be cast once as it uses 2 Dusk stones per use. Solber summons an orb of pure antimatter that quickly envelopes a space of 20 meters in all directions effectively causing a pure darkness blackout.

Abilities/Skills:

Dark Sight - Sol is able to see in the dark at half visibility without a delay of becoming accustomed to the darkness.

Darkness Slash - Requires one free hand to cast but has no casting time. Can only be used 4 times per battle as it requires half the Soul power of a Dusk Stone to use. Sol annoints his sword (or fist) in the unholy antimatter and leaves a residual shockwave that travels at the speed of sound towards its intended target. After the initial slash and residual shockwave, the antimatter force surrounding Sol's weapon evaporates. The shockwave is only as damaging as his weapon and can be completely stopped by a light magic deflection.

Soul Capture - Recently Fallen enemies can be captured into regular stones and create additional Dusk Stones however, if Sol performs the ritual he is completely incapacitated during and after lasting a full five minutes (Turns). Souls captured this way become permanent additions in his inventory.

Darkness Bomb - Requires one free hand to cast and one full minute (turn) of uninterrupted concentration. Can only be used 1 as it drains all remaining Dusk stones. A 6 inch orb appears in front of Sol's free hand, the moment it is dropped it creates a 360 degree shockwave with a force equal to that of a blow from Sol's weapon. The shockwave dissipates after 20 feet.

Quick History: Sol was born into a family rich with heritige, his father's family all came from a long line of Dark Knights. Each one serving themselves as their one true master and took on mercenary work wherever they could, never questioning their powers and never seeing the dark lord that waited in the shadows. When Solber was born his father and mother both rejoiced, he is the youngest brother of four with the other three all being girls. After the first six years of life on his families farm he was shipped out to take on tutilage under his father's original Master, and Solber's Grandfather.

Sol shows some potential at making a decent Dark Knight, however his grandfather isn't quite convinced that his grandson can handle a truely challenging mission and as such spent much of his time waiting for a spark of interst in Sol. As it stands, Sol is trying to prove himself worthy of wearing his family armor...


Thanks for giving it a look...I feel like I got really blah about the history but I had to write the whole profile twice...internet explorer ate my first copy...
 
Death to IE
get Fire Fox ^^

Well. Your profile is [APPROVED]

The best way to enter the RP, must be traveling, and ending up in the town.

please read all the previous posts, at least the last ones (last 2 pages or so)
so that you know what is happening, and what you can relate to
 
Cool thanks, and yeah I'd have to convince my partner here that Firefox isn't scary first...shrugs...

I'll probably post up something tomorrow...writing that bio tuckered me out. Gnight!
 
Arthvader said:
Hey Red Fox, am I allowed to enter this rp?
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I'm not sure. You have redeemed yourself.
but since you stopped posting in the RPB we started (at my own forum)
Im not sure.
I know I nca read the various RP's. but it would have been better if you had continued to RPB with me.
as practice for us both.
 
Ok I'm sort of getting lost with everything that is happening. I need to know who all is performing an attack on me before I write my next post. It is getting more confusing as people just enter in. and remember this fight can't last forever, and Sceler does have to get to Nimble so we can move along. In other words it has to get down to only Nimble attacking at one point.
 
Okies.

Zotok is making a Spin attack, where he spun around, and using the momentum to attach from the lower left, towards the upper right.

the new guy, is making a "body smash" effect, trying to push you over.

That is it, as far as I know.


Sylar said:
Just to note. This rp is mostly to help you get you or your characters ready for other rps. if you get a comment from myself red fox or lady eterna. we are not picking on you, we are just there to help you get into good rping habits.
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Yes peeps.
he is right.
we do not mean to be arses. we are giving you guidelines.
This is especially when it refers to G-modding, and powergaming.
 
oho, I may have to go back and reword what I wrote, Solber's target was Zotok!

I meant for him to be defending Sylar!

If anyone gets time could they help me figure out what I should have done to be more clear...maybe if I used names it would have helped?
 
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