Thank you everyone, I appreciate the comments so much
The comments make me want to keep improving so I love reading them! <3
here is a new one.
I wish I placed the text differently, I tried to make it look like she was holding it but i failed. Otherwise I think I did ok with the rest.

here is a new one.
I wish I placed the text differently, I tried to make it look like she was holding it but i failed. Otherwise I think I did ok with the rest.
