[SU/D]Liberation of Tritis

Technocrat said:
@Oli I like the bio, but there are few things in it that don’t match up to what I had in mind with the villain. Firstly, she’s a full blooded Elf. The King was human. She has to be at least half-human. Considering the fact that Natalia gets grief from people because she’s a Halfling, it would probably be best if she’s full human. However, that’s up to you.

The history is okay for the most part. However, the way I have the story planned, it’s kind of required that your character be returning to the castle with the intention of taking things over. I really do want a truly evil villain for this.
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The elf things not problem(Kinda just assumed they'd be an upper class race). As for the evil thing I planned on it stemming from her father's black magic experimentation on her versus just having a bad temper and snooty personality. Kinda figured it bring fun twists and all that mumbojumbo. I'll change her if it doesn't sound like a fit but not soon. Im having internet issues
 
I think I'll let it fly. Just change her race up and you're good. However, I can't accept her until I get any potential bios for the princess. If I don't get any or if they're not as good as yours, then you're fine.
 
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