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[SU/D] Seekers of Power
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Name: Lucille Branwick
Title/Alias: n/a
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: September 17, 1989
Place of Birth: Boston, Massachusetts
Current Residence: Boston, but staying in a New Bedford hotel due to family reasons
Resides With: No one
Zodiac Sign: Virgo
Race: Caucasian (British, Irish, and German ancestors)
Nationality: American
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Weight: 145 pounds
Height: 5'6''
Skin Tone: Pale
Eye Color: Light Blue
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Appearance (picture optional):
link in case the picture doesn't work
Blood Type: A negative
Body Type: Average in nearly all ways. She is by no means over or under weight.
__________________________________________________ __________________________
Personality: Lucille isn't overly nice, though she doesn't go out of her way to be cruel either. She feels that very little is worth doing if it won't benefit her in some way, and she has no problem using anything at her disposal to get her way. Able to count on one hand the amount of times she's done something purely for another, it's no wonder she's got a terrible reputation for being selfish and cold, despite how charming she can be when she wants something. Only adding to her reputation is the tendency to feel that everyone around her is of lower intelligence and not worth her time. However, once one has convinced Lucille that they're worth her oh-so-valuable (in her eyes, at least) time, she'll do what she can to help you... if it isn't too much of an inconvenience to herself, of course.
First Impression: People look at Lucille as a cold, quiet, and calculating person who only cares for herself.
Distinguishing Marks: A long, white scar runs from the base of her neck to the bottom of her left shoulder blade.
Religion/Spiritual Views: Baptized as a Lutheran, but does not follow a specific religion
Political Affiliation: neutral
Style: Dressing in what one could consider “business attire” most of her time, Lucille abhors most casual dress and is more comfortable in a suit than in jeans.
Attire: Lucille favors black pinstriped pants paired with crisp looking dress shirts and a blazer to match the pants. Her shirts vary only slightly in color, following the pattern of dark, cool colors. A simple silver chain with a small cross on it hangs around her neck, a gift from her mother. Her long hair is generally swept up into a neat bun or, at the very least, pulled back from her face. As for shoes, she prefers to get creative. Her footwear is the one aspect of her appearance she isn't strict on, and she spends more of her paycheck on shoes than she cares to admit. If she's working, her shoes will be expensive and tasteful. During leisure time, however, she wears bold bursts of color... but only below the ankles.
Special Talents/Abilities: Lucille excels at self preservation, willing to do anything to keep herself safe. She's also incredibly efficient at getting things done. Though out of practice, she also learned to play the piano as a child, and dabbled in ballet to make her mother happy.
Weapons: If there is any way to avoid it, Lucille does not fight. Her physical strength is decent due to frequent gym visits, but she has no training in any weapon form. Her power can be used as an offensive tool, however she prefers to diffuse situations before they even begin to escalate.
Strengths: Lucille's greatest strength is her ability to outsmart most opponents and overcome difficult problems with her intelligence. If one can consider wealth to be a strength, Lucille possesses a fair amount of that as well. She can also be extremely charming if she must, though usually she can't summon the emotion.
Weaknesses: Obsessing over the smallest flaws, Lucille has a problem leaving anything incomplete or imperfect. Her perfectionism has caused issues for her in the past and continues to do so, especially when combined with a superiority complex.
Vitality: A few hits can take Lucille down with no problem, provided you can actually land them on her, and not what you think is her.
Speed: Lucille's speed is average like her body type, meaning she can run and dodge if she has to. She would prefer not to bother, though.
Stamina: Being a fit young “lady,” Lucille can keep up a running or fighting pace for a decent amount of time.
Reflexes: Somewhat slow on the uptake, Lucille's quite easy to take by surprise, though her reflexes are better if she's concentrating or paying attention to her surroundings.
Fighting Style: If at all possible, Lucille avoids any sort of fighting. When a fight is inevitable, she first attempts to outsmart her opponent through use of her power to manipulate her surroundings. In a situation where avoidance or manipulation does not work, Lucille fights with whatever she has on hand. She's not trained with a specific type of weapon, so she makes due with small improvised things.
Magic: Lucille's power is the manipulation of illusions through shifting light particles. She doesn't make anyone think they're seeing something, instead changing the appearance of the light particles in front of and around an object. Preferring not to get into the mechanics behind her power, Lucille simply says she creates illusions, even if that's not what she's doing.
Other Skills: (see Special Talents/Abilities)
Favorite Food: Pasta
Least Favorite Food: Red meat of any kind
Bad Habits: Being judgmental, feeling superior to those around her, being extremely impatient
Job/Occupation: Head of the Marketing department at a bank rivaling her father's
Past Occupations: none
Activities/Organizations: Holder
Speech: Higher class, as she was taught growing up. She speaks like a snob and knows it, quite happy with her results.
Quote: “What exactly am I going to get out of that?”
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Relationship Status: Single
Relationship History: Small flings in high school and college, and one
Family:
Mother: Carrie Anne Branwick – fashion designer; frequently tries to get into her daughter's life in any way she can
Father: Rhys Emerson Branwick – banker in a large corporation; never has the time of day for his family
Cousin: Tammi Elizabeth Rollins – recently deceased; reason for Lucille's presence in New Bedford
Personal Adversaries: None; she doesn't put forth the effort to specifically hate anyone.
Close Companions: Only those who will benefit her; none currently.
____________________________________________________________________________
History: Lucille was born into a charmed life. Her parents held off on having children until their careers were well established, with her father quickly rising in the banking world and her mother a well respected up-and-coming fashion designer. Even with her break for pregnancy, Lucille's mother Carrie continued her work, hiring nannies to take care of her daughter. This didn't particularly bother Lucille though, as she had her mother or father when she truly needed them, and at least one of them attended every school event, ballet performance, and piano recital she participated in. Always a happy child, Lucille soon realized she could do something other people couldn't, and she began to practice using her power at about age 12. From here on out, as she grew stronger and stronger in her manipulation, creating illusion, Lucille began to succeed even more than she had in the beginning of her charmed life.
Having her example set by her father who would do nearly anything to get ahead in his work, she started using her power to get what she wanted. It started with small stuff, like getting out of trouble with her teachers or parents, but as she continued through high school, it applied to scholarships and college applications, and even further. Through the use of her powers, Lucille secured an internship at a very large bank rivaling her father's for Boston's most prestigious. Continuing with her work at the bank after her internship, she quickly rose through the ranks while in college, and was offered a high position in Marketing after graduating. Less than a year later, Lucille is the head of her department, tricking, conning, and charming people as a way of life.
Just a few days after Christmas of 2012, Lucille's family received a letter telling them that her cousin from New Bedford had died in a curious manner. Lucille, strangely interested in her cousin's tragic fate, packed her bags and headed for New Bedford to see what was going on and to organize her cousin Tammi's things. Due to complications, she's stranded there indefinitely, working from her hotel room until further notice.
I'll add more if you want it but I'm lazy. If this'll do I'm going to leave it.
Title/Alias: n/a
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: September 17, 1989
Place of Birth: Boston, Massachusetts
Current Residence: Boston, but staying in a New Bedford hotel due to family reasons
Resides With: No one
Zodiac Sign: Virgo
Race: Caucasian (British, Irish, and German ancestors)
Nationality: American
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Weight: 145 pounds
Height: 5'6''
Skin Tone: Pale
Eye Color: Light Blue
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Appearance (picture optional):
link in case the picture doesn't work
Blood Type: A negative
Body Type: Average in nearly all ways. She is by no means over or under weight.
__________________________________________________ __________________________
Personality: Lucille isn't overly nice, though she doesn't go out of her way to be cruel either. She feels that very little is worth doing if it won't benefit her in some way, and she has no problem using anything at her disposal to get her way. Able to count on one hand the amount of times she's done something purely for another, it's no wonder she's got a terrible reputation for being selfish and cold, despite how charming she can be when she wants something. Only adding to her reputation is the tendency to feel that everyone around her is of lower intelligence and not worth her time. However, once one has convinced Lucille that they're worth her oh-so-valuable (in her eyes, at least) time, she'll do what she can to help you... if it isn't too much of an inconvenience to herself, of course.
First Impression: People look at Lucille as a cold, quiet, and calculating person who only cares for herself.
Distinguishing Marks: A long, white scar runs from the base of her neck to the bottom of her left shoulder blade.
Religion/Spiritual Views: Baptized as a Lutheran, but does not follow a specific religion
Political Affiliation: neutral
Style: Dressing in what one could consider “business attire” most of her time, Lucille abhors most casual dress and is more comfortable in a suit than in jeans.
Attire: Lucille favors black pinstriped pants paired with crisp looking dress shirts and a blazer to match the pants. Her shirts vary only slightly in color, following the pattern of dark, cool colors. A simple silver chain with a small cross on it hangs around her neck, a gift from her mother. Her long hair is generally swept up into a neat bun or, at the very least, pulled back from her face. As for shoes, she prefers to get creative. Her footwear is the one aspect of her appearance she isn't strict on, and she spends more of her paycheck on shoes than she cares to admit. If she's working, her shoes will be expensive and tasteful. During leisure time, however, she wears bold bursts of color... but only below the ankles.
Special Talents/Abilities: Lucille excels at self preservation, willing to do anything to keep herself safe. She's also incredibly efficient at getting things done. Though out of practice, she also learned to play the piano as a child, and dabbled in ballet to make her mother happy.
Weapons: If there is any way to avoid it, Lucille does not fight. Her physical strength is decent due to frequent gym visits, but she has no training in any weapon form. Her power can be used as an offensive tool, however she prefers to diffuse situations before they even begin to escalate.
Strengths: Lucille's greatest strength is her ability to outsmart most opponents and overcome difficult problems with her intelligence. If one can consider wealth to be a strength, Lucille possesses a fair amount of that as well. She can also be extremely charming if she must, though usually she can't summon the emotion.
Weaknesses: Obsessing over the smallest flaws, Lucille has a problem leaving anything incomplete or imperfect. Her perfectionism has caused issues for her in the past and continues to do so, especially when combined with a superiority complex.
Vitality: A few hits can take Lucille down with no problem, provided you can actually land them on her, and not what you think is her.
Speed: Lucille's speed is average like her body type, meaning she can run and dodge if she has to. She would prefer not to bother, though.
Stamina: Being a fit young “lady,” Lucille can keep up a running or fighting pace for a decent amount of time.
Reflexes: Somewhat slow on the uptake, Lucille's quite easy to take by surprise, though her reflexes are better if she's concentrating or paying attention to her surroundings.
Fighting Style: If at all possible, Lucille avoids any sort of fighting. When a fight is inevitable, she first attempts to outsmart her opponent through use of her power to manipulate her surroundings. In a situation where avoidance or manipulation does not work, Lucille fights with whatever she has on hand. She's not trained with a specific type of weapon, so she makes due with small improvised things.
Magic: Lucille's power is the manipulation of illusions through shifting light particles. She doesn't make anyone think they're seeing something, instead changing the appearance of the light particles in front of and around an object. Preferring not to get into the mechanics behind her power, Lucille simply says she creates illusions, even if that's not what she's doing.
Other Skills: (see Special Talents/Abilities)
Favorite Food: Pasta
Least Favorite Food: Red meat of any kind
Bad Habits: Being judgmental, feeling superior to those around her, being extremely impatient
Job/Occupation: Head of the Marketing department at a bank rivaling her father's
Past Occupations: none
Activities/Organizations: Holder
Speech: Higher class, as she was taught growing up. She speaks like a snob and knows it, quite happy with her results.
Quote: “What exactly am I going to get out of that?”
__________________________________________________ __________________________
Relationship Status: Single
Relationship History: Small flings in high school and college, and one
Family:
Mother: Carrie Anne Branwick – fashion designer; frequently tries to get into her daughter's life in any way she can
Father: Rhys Emerson Branwick – banker in a large corporation; never has the time of day for his family
Cousin: Tammi Elizabeth Rollins – recently deceased; reason for Lucille's presence in New Bedford
Personal Adversaries: None; she doesn't put forth the effort to specifically hate anyone.
Close Companions: Only those who will benefit her; none currently.
____________________________________________________________________________
History: Lucille was born into a charmed life. Her parents held off on having children until their careers were well established, with her father quickly rising in the banking world and her mother a well respected up-and-coming fashion designer. Even with her break for pregnancy, Lucille's mother Carrie continued her work, hiring nannies to take care of her daughter. This didn't particularly bother Lucille though, as she had her mother or father when she truly needed them, and at least one of them attended every school event, ballet performance, and piano recital she participated in. Always a happy child, Lucille soon realized she could do something other people couldn't, and she began to practice using her power at about age 12. From here on out, as she grew stronger and stronger in her manipulation, creating illusion, Lucille began to succeed even more than she had in the beginning of her charmed life.
Having her example set by her father who would do nearly anything to get ahead in his work, she started using her power to get what she wanted. It started with small stuff, like getting out of trouble with her teachers or parents, but as she continued through high school, it applied to scholarships and college applications, and even further. Through the use of her powers, Lucille secured an internship at a very large bank rivaling her father's for Boston's most prestigious. Continuing with her work at the bank after her internship, she quickly rose through the ranks while in college, and was offered a high position in Marketing after graduating. Less than a year later, Lucille is the head of her department, tricking, conning, and charming people as a way of life.
Just a few days after Christmas of 2012, Lucille's family received a letter telling them that her cousin from New Bedford had died in a curious manner. Lucille, strangely interested in her cousin's tragic fate, packed her bags and headed for New Bedford to see what was going on and to organize her cousin Tammi's things. Due to complications, she's stranded there indefinitely, working from her hotel room until further notice.
I'll add more if you want it but I'm lazy. If this'll do I'm going to leave it.
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Errrr... Since yesterday. >_> I'll be getting my bio up soon, I hope. Also, Lucille is totally going to be my character's plaything. Just saying. I am so excite!
Oh lordy. I hope her body is ready for this.
And from what I know of your bio, it should be interesting. And long. /snicker
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Ladies and gentlemen... I am writing a villain. He will be the greatest villain I shall ever write. Thank you, nightmares. I needed that.
Due to this, I will be calling dibs on three powers: The power to make eight tendril like arms grow from his back, the power to control metal, and flight. Diar will still be your main villain, however.
As for the villain having three powers, I really like my villains OP. Which is why I only let people I trust be villains.
As for the RP, here are how things will be going down:
I kind of want the RP to last a while. At first I wanted it to be short, which is why I didn't put much thought into a plot, and why I was really only wanting a handful of people to be in it. However, it got kind of big and even brought a couple of people back. Now I kind of want this to last a bit longer and be a bit bigger. (DAT INNUENDO)
As you know when the RP begins, it will be shortly after midnight. The first few hours of the RP will be a prologue of sorts where characters are introduced to the readers. Then everyone goes to sleep, and the next day begins and shit. Let's try to avoid large scale combat/destruction right off the bat. Let's instead focus on developing characters and a solid plot and then we can get to that.
I'll be more than happy to answer questions when I get home tomorrow.
Snooch to the nooch.
EDIT: Upon thinking about it, I will not be making that character. At least not for this RP. Perhaps a different one.
Ladies and gentlemen... I am writing a villain. He will be the greatest villain I shall ever write. Thank you, nightmares. I needed that.
Due to this, I will be calling dibs on three powers: The power to make eight tendril like arms grow from his back, the power to control metal, and flight. Diar will still be your main villain, however.
As for the villain having three powers, I really like my villains OP. Which is why I only let people I trust be villains.
As for the RP, here are how things will be going down:
I kind of want the RP to last a while. At first I wanted it to be short, which is why I didn't put much thought into a plot, and why I was really only wanting a handful of people to be in it. However, it got kind of big and even brought a couple of people back. Now I kind of want this to last a bit longer and be a bit bigger. (DAT INNUENDO)
As you know when the RP begins, it will be shortly after midnight. The first few hours of the RP will be a prologue of sorts where characters are introduced to the readers. Then everyone goes to sleep, and the next day begins and shit. Let's try to avoid large scale combat/destruction right off the bat. Let's instead focus on developing characters and a solid plot and then we can get to that.
I'll be more than happy to answer questions when I get home tomorrow.
Snooch to the nooch.
EDIT: Upon thinking about it, I will not be making that character. At least not for this RP. Perhaps a different one.
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Subtle-sounds
Ex-Soldier
im sorry that my bio is still unfinished. im having a bit of a mental block with the history section at the minute
+ [NAME] Evrie Padraigan
- {NAME} Serinde Padraigan
+ [Title/Alias] The Siren
- {Title/Alias} Lady Luck
+ [Alignment] Chaotic Good
- {Alignment} Chaotic Evil
+ [Age] Appears to be Twenty
- {Age} Appears to be Twenty
+ [Gender] Female
- {Gender} Female
+ [Date of Birth] November 9th
- {Date of Birth} November 10th
+ [Place of Birth] Dublin, Ireland
- {Place of Birth} Dublin, Ireland
+ [Current Residence] New Bedford
- {Current Residence} New Bedford
+ [Resides With] Serinde Padraigan
- {Resides With} Evrie Padraigan
+ [Zodiac Sign] Libra
- {Zodiac Sign} Libra
+ [Race] Celt
- {Race} Celt
+ [Nationality] Irish
- {Nationality} Irish
+ [Sexual Orientation] Heterosexual
- {Sexual Orientation} Pansexual
+ [Weight] 131lbs
- {Weight} 135lbs
+ [Height] 5'3''
- {Height} 5'3''
+ [Skin Tone] Lightly Tanned
- {Skin Tone} Extremely Pale
+ [Eye Color] Fuchsia
- {Eye Color} Gunmetal Gray
+ [Hair Color] Pale Pink
- {Hair Color} White
+ [Appearance]
http://safebooru.org//images/495/023985a413fe2a7fd2c0099eaccd57d586d57793.jpg?496681
- {Appearance}
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+ [Blood Type] O-
- {Blood Type} O+
+ [Body Type] Busty and Curvy
- {Body Type} Busty and Curvy
+ [Personality]
- {Personality}
+ [First Impression]
- {First Impression}
+ [Distinguishing Marks] Anchor tattoo on left inner thigh
- {Distinguishing Marks} Inverted cross tattoo on right inner wrist
+ [Religion/Spiritual Views] Pirate
- {Religion/Spiritual Views} Pagan
+ [Political Affiliation] Pirate
- {Political Affiliation} n/a
+ [Style]
- {Style}
+ [Attire]
- {Attire}
+ [Special Talents/Abilities] Sings like a nightingale
- {Special Talents/Abilities} Exquisite dancer
+ [Weapons]
- {Weapons}
+ [Strengths]
- {Strengths}
+ [Weaknesses]
- {Weaknesses}
+ [Vitality]
- {Vitality}
+ [Speed]
- {Speed}
+ [Stamina]
- {Stamina}
+ [Reflexes]
- {Reflexes}
+ [Fighting Style]
- {Fighting Style}
+ [Magic]
- {Magic}
+ [Other Skills]
- {Other Skills}
+ [Favorite Food] Chicken Teriyaki
- {Favorite Food} Somewhat of a cannibal. Need I say more?
+ [Least Favorite Food] Anything Serinde prepares for her
- {Least Favorite Food} Vegetables
+ [Bad Habits] Constantly fidgets
- {Bad Habits} Eating people
+ [Job/Occupation] Pirate
- {Job/Occupation} Barmaid
+ [Past Occupation] n/a
- {Past Occupation} n/a
+ [Activities/Organizations] Holder
- {Activities/Organizations} Holder
+ [Speech] Speaks with a light Irish lilt. Commanding.
- {Speech}A stronger Irish accent than her twin, but still relatively soft. Has more of a seductive quality.
+ [Quotes] Don't get cocky.
- {Quotes} Bite me.
_____________________________________________
+ [Relationship Status] Single
- {Relationship Status} Single
+ [Relationship History] Childhood boyfriend - dead (possibly eaten by sister)
- {Relationship History} Everyone and their mother (Literally in some cases)
+ [Family] Serinde - only known living
- {Family} Evrie - only known living
+ [Personal Adversaries] Serinde
- {Personal Adversaries} Evrie
+ [Close Companions] Serinde
- {Close Companions} Evrie
________________________________________
+ [History]
- {History}
- {NAME} Serinde Padraigan
+ [Title/Alias] The Siren
- {Title/Alias} Lady Luck
+ [Alignment] Chaotic Good
- {Alignment} Chaotic Evil
+ [Age] Appears to be Twenty
- {Age} Appears to be Twenty
+ [Gender] Female
- {Gender} Female
+ [Date of Birth] November 9th
- {Date of Birth} November 10th
+ [Place of Birth] Dublin, Ireland
- {Place of Birth} Dublin, Ireland
+ [Current Residence] New Bedford
- {Current Residence} New Bedford
+ [Resides With] Serinde Padraigan
- {Resides With} Evrie Padraigan
+ [Zodiac Sign] Libra
- {Zodiac Sign} Libra
+ [Race] Celt
- {Race} Celt
+ [Nationality] Irish
- {Nationality} Irish
+ [Sexual Orientation] Heterosexual
- {Sexual Orientation} Pansexual
+ [Weight] 131lbs
- {Weight} 135lbs
+ [Height] 5'3''
- {Height} 5'3''
+ [Skin Tone] Lightly Tanned
- {Skin Tone} Extremely Pale
+ [Eye Color] Fuchsia
- {Eye Color} Gunmetal Gray
+ [Hair Color] Pale Pink
- {Hair Color} White
+ [Appearance]
http://safebooru.org//images/495/023985a413fe2a7fd2c0099eaccd57d586d57793.jpg?496681
- {Appearance}
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+ [Blood Type] O-
- {Blood Type} O+
+ [Body Type] Busty and Curvy
- {Body Type} Busty and Curvy
______________________________
+ [Personality]
- {Personality}
+ [First Impression]
- {First Impression}
+ [Distinguishing Marks] Anchor tattoo on left inner thigh
- {Distinguishing Marks} Inverted cross tattoo on right inner wrist
+ [Religion/Spiritual Views] Pirate
- {Religion/Spiritual Views} Pagan
+ [Political Affiliation] Pirate
- {Political Affiliation} n/a
+ [Style]
- {Style}
+ [Attire]
- {Attire}
+ [Special Talents/Abilities] Sings like a nightingale
- {Special Talents/Abilities} Exquisite dancer
+ [Weapons]
- {Weapons}
+ [Strengths]
- {Strengths}
+ [Weaknesses]
- {Weaknesses}
+ [Vitality]
- {Vitality}
+ [Speed]
- {Speed}
+ [Stamina]
- {Stamina}
+ [Reflexes]
- {Reflexes}
+ [Fighting Style]
- {Fighting Style}
+ [Magic]
- {Magic}
+ [Other Skills]
- {Other Skills}
+ [Favorite Food] Chicken Teriyaki
- {Favorite Food} Somewhat of a cannibal. Need I say more?
+ [Least Favorite Food] Anything Serinde prepares for her
- {Least Favorite Food} Vegetables
+ [Bad Habits] Constantly fidgets
- {Bad Habits} Eating people
+ [Job/Occupation] Pirate
- {Job/Occupation} Barmaid
+ [Past Occupation] n/a
- {Past Occupation} n/a
+ [Activities/Organizations] Holder
- {Activities/Organizations} Holder
+ [Speech] Speaks with a light Irish lilt. Commanding.
- {Speech}A stronger Irish accent than her twin, but still relatively soft. Has more of a seductive quality.
+ [Quotes] Don't get cocky.
- {Quotes} Bite me.
_____________________________________________
+ [Relationship Status] Single
- {Relationship Status} Single
+ [Relationship History] Childhood boyfriend - dead (possibly eaten by sister)
- {Relationship History} Everyone and their mother (Literally in some cases)
+ [Family] Serinde - only known living
- {Family} Evrie - only known living
+ [Personal Adversaries] Serinde
- {Personal Adversaries} Evrie
+ [Close Companions] Serinde
- {Close Companions} Evrie
________________________________________
+ [History]
- {History}
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Caitlyn You’re accepted. I couldn’t see anything wrong with it.
Miss Fortune I’m looking forward to reading yours. Hurry up.
Miss Fortune I’m looking forward to reading yours. Hurry up.
Subtle-sounds
Ex-Soldier
techno... can you pm me a few pointer for what your looking for in the history im having a total mind block and cant think of anything... your help would be greatly appreciated
I'm not really too worried about history. To be honest, no matter the RP it's a section I struggle in. Just describe how your character got their power, and what they're doing in New Bedford and you're good enough as far as I'm concerned.
Gavin, I was looking over your bio again after you told me about your other character. After doing so, I couldn’t help but notice a few things which made me realize HOW THE FUCK I LET IT SLIDE. Let’s take a look at some things.
Your character is 6 foot and only 128 pounds? Is he a skeleton? You can keep that if you’d like but… fuck. That’s a skinny ass dude.
Your talents, I can let slide… mostly. Poison Resist as a skill? That is not a skill.
Weapons: Chain Spike? Fine. Flash Bombs? No. Shock Mine? No. Throwing Knives? Yes. However 12 of them at 8 inches each… no. Where is he keeping all of these?
Because of this huge as fuck error in judgment on my part, I’m going through everyone’s bio again. Soon there will be a post up with all of the characters that are accepted.
If your bio is not on the list, you are not in the RP.
Your character is 6 foot and only 128 pounds? Is he a skeleton? You can keep that if you’d like but… fuck. That’s a skinny ass dude.
Your talents, I can let slide… mostly. Poison Resist as a skill? That is not a skill.
Weapons: Chain Spike? Fine. Flash Bombs? No. Shock Mine? No. Throwing Knives? Yes. However 12 of them at 8 inches each… no. Where is he keeping all of these?
Because of this huge as fuck error in judgment on my part, I’m going through everyone’s bio again. Soon there will be a post up with all of the characters that are accepted.
If your bio is not on the list, you are not in the RP.
Subtle-sounds
Ex-Soldier
ill get working on the history right away and im not trying to be mean or anything but the knives... its possible that he carries all of them in a leg pouch... or even in holders on the inside of a jacket. im sorry i just play rogues with throwing knives an awful lot in d&D so i know all about stashing throwing knives even at 8 inches long all the above is plausible for storage so if Gavin is willing to edit his equipment i dont see why that should be wrong... also i would say that poison resist can be a skill also... if his character has deliberately trained his body and his immune system to be able to fight off certain poisons ((similar to virus innoculations perhaps?)) i would say it was a skill. however if he meant it as an inherant ability then id say no to it being a skill... so gavin i suggest you make the following changes and techno i hope this hasnt annoyed you, your decision is final after all ^^;
While talking to Ringo on Skype, I made a neat list of everyone who has been accepted. I'll update this every time a new character is accepted, and I think he's going to be putting it into the first post as well. If he doesn't, I'll post with a link to this post when I update.
As Ringo said above, if your character/name isn't on the list, your bio is not accepted and you're not in the RP. Some of you have incomplete bios, and others were unrealistic/Ringo rejected you for other reasons. Talk to him, as I'm just the messenger. I'm also as close to positive as I can be that I haven't missed anyone after three run-throughs of the RP.
List of Accepted Characters
Technocrat
Alyss Aldan - Female - Teleportation - Holder
Lyra - Female- Pyrokinesis/Fire Control - Holder
Bathoin
Levont Mires - Male - Wind Manipulation - Holder
Mitsuru Kirijo
Altera Zula - Female - Force Field Creation, Electrokinesis, Ephemeron/Laser Generation - Neutral
Candice Blake - Female - Healing - Holder
Tipsynaruto
Anarchia Iilyavich Vesperia - Sevensheep - Female - Vector Manipulation - Holder
Valkyrur
Miranda Lin - Female - None - Seeker
Me Gustith/Channy
Amarillo “Ami” del Bosque Verde - Female; dresses as a male - Telekinesis - Holder
CaitlynAlyss Aldan - Female - Teleportation - Holder
Lyra - Female- Pyrokinesis/Fire Control - Holder
Bathoin
Levont Mires - Male - Wind Manipulation - Holder
Mitsuru Kirijo
Altera Zula - Female - Force Field Creation, Electrokinesis, Ephemeron/Laser Generation - Neutral
Candice Blake - Female - Healing - Holder
Tipsynaruto
Anarchia Iilyavich Vesperia - Sevensheep - Female - Vector Manipulation - Holder
Valkyrur
Miranda Lin - Female - None - Seeker
Me Gustith/Channy
Amarillo “Ami” del Bosque Verde - Female; dresses as a male - Telekinesis - Holder
Lucille Branwick - Female - Illusion Creation and Manipulation - Holder
Subtle-sounds
Ex-Soldier
ok id like to say that ive finished the history, i just hope its good enough for me to be added onto that list just there 
please go to page twelve to read it as i think re-posting it would be just a sorry excuse to increase my post count
please go to page twelve to read it as i think re-posting it would be just a sorry excuse to increase my post count 
Fine, i'll edit it up a touch. Also, am i to assume that since he has a power, you don't like him having tech? Both of them are logical given he has access to military schematics and research. As for where he keeps the knives, jacket would seem a likely option, pockets even, maybe a sheath on his belt. And only 10 are unaccounted for based on bio info; I caq lower it but a dozen seemed a nice number at the time.
Where would you suggest putting Poison resist then? Somewhere under Vitality or under other skills?
Subtle-sounds - There is next to no detail in your bio at all. She lives in Chicago. Why is she in New Bedford? There is no detail at all in personality, weapons, strengths, weaknesses, power, vitality, speed, stamina, reflexes, fighting style, or even magic. In your magic section you claim she uses flame, cyro, and shock bullets. This all falls under an element. There are already characters that use flame, lightning, and ice. I can’t accept that. As for now, your bio is unacceptable.
Which brings me to my next point; we have a lot of Holders in this RP. And I know there is another in the works. As for now, I will only be taking Seekers. I’ve talked this over with my board of directors, and we’ve all agreed.
Gavin AEtherae – If he had a power, tech would still be okay, but to the point of having explosives and mines and flashbombs? This is severely OP and I won’t allow it. The knives I’m willing to let slide. It just seems a bit unrealistic to me. As far as poison resistance, that would be vitality and I would like an adequate backstory as to why your character has this.
Which brings me to my next point; we have a lot of Holders in this RP. And I know there is another in the works. As for now, I will only be taking Seekers. I’ve talked this over with my board of directors, and we’ve all agreed.
Gavin AEtherae – If he had a power, tech would still be okay, but to the point of having explosives and mines and flashbombs? This is severely OP and I won’t allow it. The knives I’m willing to let slide. It just seems a bit unrealistic to me. As far as poison resistance, that would be vitality and I would like an adequate backstory as to why your character has this.
Subtle-sounds
Ex-Soldier
ok il get right on that then ill edit it so that it was an evil keeper that had the powers over Ballistomancy and then a friend of theres tried to take revenge on her and they had the power of technomancy. ill get on it
ill edit it so that it was an evil keeper that had the powers over Ballistomancy and then a friend of theres tried to take revenge on her and they had the power of technomancy. ill get on it 
Heya ringo. I finished my charactr. I dead set wrote the history at 130 int he morning, so sorry if tis choppy and crap.
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/threads/52348-SU-D-Seekers-of-Power?p=997270&viewfull=1#post997270
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/threads/52348-SU-D-Seekers-of-Power?p=997270&viewfull=1#post997270
Here's my second character now.
Name: Lily Saloki
Title/Alias: N/a
Alignment: Neutral
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: August 17
Place of Birth: Paris, France
Current Residence: New Bedford
Resides With: No one
Zodiac Sign: Virgo (I think. Someone correct me on the zodiac sign can you?)
Race: French
Nationality: French
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Weight: 125
Height: 5 feet 5 inches
Skin Tone: Tan
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Light purple
Appearance (picture optional):
Blood Type: B
Body Type: Slim and tone. The stereotypical beach body mainly.
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Personality: Living as one of higher end of the economy pyramid gave her a refine speech and a cool temperament when dealing with others. But don't let that deter you. While many people steer away from her due to her upper class status, she has easily drawn the admire of others due to her caring nature and even sounding judgement. That is still maintained even while under pressure.
First Impression: Many people will see Lily as a kind high class girl.
Distinguishing Marks: Obvious Marks are the Cat hear headbands and cat tail that she always have on.
Religion/Spiritual Views: Catholic
Political Affiliation: None. She hates politics.
Style: Lily, by nature of the higher class status, has access to plenty of top of the line clothing. But out of all of the clothing, she prefers clothing that has Frills on them.
Attire: Lily Saloki wears a modified maid outfit that she gave to a tailor. It was originally a long sleeved maid dress until it was tailored. It became a short skirt Maid dress with the leggings designed after the maid outfit as well.
Special Talents/Abilities: Lily is a decent user of the Vovinam martial arts and uses two combat ready metal fans with ease.
Weapons: She can use her feet/fist and two combat ready (light but extremely durable) metal fans 13.5 inches closed and opens into a 25.5 inch half circle
Strengths: A Flexible fighter that can excells more in dodging attacks, countering, and hitting enemies at various pressure points on the human body instead of overpowering the enemy.
Weaknesses: Being a dodge and counter fighter makes her more vulnerable to stronger attacks. (7-10 non knockout blows and 4-6 knockout blows) that does not excel in overall strength or speed. She also have no response to range attacks, forcing her to try and get to close range before she can make an attack
Vitality : Read weakness
Speed : she can run as well as an average semi athletic runner, but not for a long period of time.
Stamina : Lily has a decent stamina that allows her to run and fight for a period of time. Nothing comparable to a person who has done sports throughout their life.
Reflexes : Great reflexes that allows her to dodge attacks with relative ease.
Fighting Style : Voivnam. Lily learned the style since she always had a soft spot for fans. She can use both fans with ease to fend off any attackers.
Weapons :
Her Fist and Feet and two Combat ready metal fans (light and extremely durable) 13.5 inches closed and opens into a 25.5 inch half circle.
Magic : Water Manipulation Using the Erg of magic, Lily can control the water around her to the point of Freezing, Evaporation and the sort. She can also pressurize it to either push an enemy away or towards her. Another advantage of pressuring the water is the fact that if it is pressurized enough, it can match industry water cutters which can cut through the softer metals like copper, and iron. Of course using water manipulation carrys a huge risk. 3/4 of the human body is comprised of water. If Lily uses Water Manipulation 10 to 15 times without having anything to drink, she will die from dehydration. That being said, she can offset the restriction but her absolute max is 15 usage.
Other Skills : N/A
Favorite Food: Earl Grey Tea.
Least Favorite Food: Pumpkins
Bad Habits: None
Job/Occupation: Student
Past Occupations: N/a
Activities/Organizations: Martial Arts, Drinking various tea, HOLDER
Speech: Lily's high class speech is obviously refine due to her economical status. But even among the high class, her speech is more along the lines with the common people.
Quote: "Why don't you sit here while I sip the tea of victory."
"Are you hurt? Yes? That's why you should not attack a lady like myself."
____________________________________________________________________________
Relationship Status:
Relationship History: She had a few relationships with both genders, but none were lasting.
Family:
Mother: Amelia Saloki: Founder of the International Student Life Organization. (Previous holder of Wind Manipulation) Age 37
Father: Ryan Saloki: Politician Age 39
Personal Adversaries: N/A
Close Companions: None
___________________________________________________________________________
History: Lily Saloki was born to Ryan Saloki and Amelia Saloki. A good portion of her life was seen as she was taught how to act in the high class. This persisted until the age of 7.
At age 7, both of her parents could not stay with her all the time, so with the aid of the maids in the household, Lily learned the basics of cleaning the house and such. One of the butlers was practicing Vovinam in a quiet area when she stumbled upon him. Asking what he was doing, he stated that he was practicing. Growing more curious at the second, she asked the man if he could teach her. The man agreed and started to teach the young Lily everything he knew.
At age 15, Lily found out that Amelia left the country for a business meeting through the paperwork on her desk. Within one of the paperwork, a picture of an Asian boy stood out. Looking at the letter that came with it, she came upon the name of Levont Mires. It also showed that among the paperwork, one line struck as odd. "New container of the Wind Manipulation."
Not knowing what it meant, Lily waited until her mother came home. Confronting her, Lily asked about the boy. Amelia sighed as she told Lily that it was a blessing and a curse and that she does not look into it. Lily ignored the warning and asked to go learn in the same school and live in the same area as Levont Mires. Things started to escalate until water suddenly shot out of Lily's hands, cutting through the bookshelf. Amelia's eyes widen as she suddenly understood what was going on while Lily looked confused. Amelia quickly told Lily about her new status as a holder and decided to send Lily over to New Bedford.
Using various connections and such, Lily was set up to be living in the apartment building across the street of Levont as well as funded for her education and anything else Lily might need. The day before Lily left for New Bedford, Amelia stopped Lily and told her that she was not to let Levont know about Ameilia and Lily's ties to her and instead act as a middle man to Levont and Amelia. Lily agreed and soon enough, she was flown to New Bedford.
Two years has passed since she was sent to live in New Bedford. During that time, Lily acquired some new accessories (i.e Cat ears neuro sensing headband and cat tails that acted in sync to Lily's thoughts) and grew to understand and properly use her Water Manipulation while at the same time, spoke to Levont Mires as a classmate and middle man. But during December, Lily experience bouts of fatigue that plagued her since the age of 15. Thinking nothing about it, Lily continued to go about her business.
It is now Janurary 13,2013 and Lily is now ready to aid Levont in any way she could.
Name: Lily Saloki
Title/Alias: N/a
Alignment: Neutral
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: August 17
Place of Birth: Paris, France
Current Residence: New Bedford
Resides With: No one
Zodiac Sign: Virgo (I think. Someone correct me on the zodiac sign can you?)
Race: French
Nationality: French
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Weight: 125
Height: 5 feet 5 inches
Skin Tone: Tan
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Light purple
Appearance (picture optional):
Blood Type: B
Body Type: Slim and tone. The stereotypical beach body mainly.
__________________________________________________ __________________________
Personality: Living as one of higher end of the economy pyramid gave her a refine speech and a cool temperament when dealing with others. But don't let that deter you. While many people steer away from her due to her upper class status, she has easily drawn the admire of others due to her caring nature and even sounding judgement. That is still maintained even while under pressure.
First Impression: Many people will see Lily as a kind high class girl.
Distinguishing Marks: Obvious Marks are the Cat hear headbands and cat tail that she always have on.
Religion/Spiritual Views: Catholic
Political Affiliation: None. She hates politics.
Style: Lily, by nature of the higher class status, has access to plenty of top of the line clothing. But out of all of the clothing, she prefers clothing that has Frills on them.
Attire: Lily Saloki wears a modified maid outfit that she gave to a tailor. It was originally a long sleeved maid dress until it was tailored. It became a short skirt Maid dress with the leggings designed after the maid outfit as well.
Special Talents/Abilities: Lily is a decent user of the Vovinam martial arts and uses two combat ready metal fans with ease.
Weapons: She can use her feet/fist and two combat ready (light but extremely durable) metal fans 13.5 inches closed and opens into a 25.5 inch half circle
Strengths: A Flexible fighter that can excells more in dodging attacks, countering, and hitting enemies at various pressure points on the human body instead of overpowering the enemy.
Weaknesses: Being a dodge and counter fighter makes her more vulnerable to stronger attacks. (7-10 non knockout blows and 4-6 knockout blows) that does not excel in overall strength or speed. She also have no response to range attacks, forcing her to try and get to close range before she can make an attack
Vitality : Read weakness
Speed : she can run as well as an average semi athletic runner, but not for a long period of time.
Stamina : Lily has a decent stamina that allows her to run and fight for a period of time. Nothing comparable to a person who has done sports throughout their life.
Reflexes : Great reflexes that allows her to dodge attacks with relative ease.
Fighting Style : Voivnam. Lily learned the style since she always had a soft spot for fans. She can use both fans with ease to fend off any attackers.
Weapons :
Her Fist and Feet and two Combat ready metal fans (light and extremely durable) 13.5 inches closed and opens into a 25.5 inch half circle.
Magic : Water Manipulation Using the Erg of magic, Lily can control the water around her to the point of Freezing, Evaporation and the sort. She can also pressurize it to either push an enemy away or towards her. Another advantage of pressuring the water is the fact that if it is pressurized enough, it can match industry water cutters which can cut through the softer metals like copper, and iron. Of course using water manipulation carrys a huge risk. 3/4 of the human body is comprised of water. If Lily uses Water Manipulation 10 to 15 times without having anything to drink, she will die from dehydration. That being said, she can offset the restriction but her absolute max is 15 usage.
Other Skills : N/A
Favorite Food: Earl Grey Tea.
Least Favorite Food: Pumpkins
Bad Habits: None
Job/Occupation: Student
Past Occupations: N/a
Activities/Organizations: Martial Arts, Drinking various tea, HOLDER
Speech: Lily's high class speech is obviously refine due to her economical status. But even among the high class, her speech is more along the lines with the common people.
Quote: "Why don't you sit here while I sip the tea of victory."
"Are you hurt? Yes? That's why you should not attack a lady like myself."
____________________________________________________________________________
Relationship Status:
Relationship History: She had a few relationships with both genders, but none were lasting.
Family:
Mother: Amelia Saloki: Founder of the International Student Life Organization. (Previous holder of Wind Manipulation) Age 37
Father: Ryan Saloki: Politician Age 39
Personal Adversaries: N/A
Close Companions: None
___________________________________________________________________________
History: Lily Saloki was born to Ryan Saloki and Amelia Saloki. A good portion of her life was seen as she was taught how to act in the high class. This persisted until the age of 7.
At age 7, both of her parents could not stay with her all the time, so with the aid of the maids in the household, Lily learned the basics of cleaning the house and such. One of the butlers was practicing Vovinam in a quiet area when she stumbled upon him. Asking what he was doing, he stated that he was practicing. Growing more curious at the second, she asked the man if he could teach her. The man agreed and started to teach the young Lily everything he knew.
At age 15, Lily found out that Amelia left the country for a business meeting through the paperwork on her desk. Within one of the paperwork, a picture of an Asian boy stood out. Looking at the letter that came with it, she came upon the name of Levont Mires. It also showed that among the paperwork, one line struck as odd. "New container of the Wind Manipulation."
Not knowing what it meant, Lily waited until her mother came home. Confronting her, Lily asked about the boy. Amelia sighed as she told Lily that it was a blessing and a curse and that she does not look into it. Lily ignored the warning and asked to go learn in the same school and live in the same area as Levont Mires. Things started to escalate until water suddenly shot out of Lily's hands, cutting through the bookshelf. Amelia's eyes widen as she suddenly understood what was going on while Lily looked confused. Amelia quickly told Lily about her new status as a holder and decided to send Lily over to New Bedford.
Using various connections and such, Lily was set up to be living in the apartment building across the street of Levont as well as funded for her education and anything else Lily might need. The day before Lily left for New Bedford, Amelia stopped Lily and told her that she was not to let Levont know about Ameilia and Lily's ties to her and instead act as a middle man to Levont and Amelia. Lily agreed and soon enough, she was flown to New Bedford.
Two years has passed since she was sent to live in New Bedford. During that time, Lily acquired some new accessories (i.e Cat ears neuro sensing headband and cat tails that acted in sync to Lily's thoughts) and grew to understand and properly use her Water Manipulation while at the same time, spoke to Levont Mires as a classmate and middle man. But during December, Lily experience bouts of fatigue that plagued her since the age of 15. Thinking nothing about it, Lily continued to go about her business.
It is now Janurary 13,2013 and Lily is now ready to aid Levont in any way she could.
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