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.: The Darker Side of Me :. [Sign Up/Discussion]

Before we begin, I am going to request one thing: Mods, please lock if this is in the wrong place, this has already been done, or if it just isn't a good idea.


I have posted this on several forums, and it went by fairly successfully, and so I hope that you will enjoy it as well.

Also, Too long; Didn't read: Read the Red. You're welcome.


It would be very odd indeed if you suddenly discovered you had a duplicate.
Every human is born unique. Each attribute of a person- eyes, skin, lungs, hands, smile- are all one-of-a-kind. You live your life knowing that nobody walks like you, nobody has your face or your insides, except you. You're different. A total one-off. Never to be repeated.
Right?


It's a very strange feeling to see somebody who looks like someone you know. A person who has a face or an expression similar to that which belongs to a loved one can make you stop and think. There are over six billion people in the world and there have been thousands of millions before them. Of course there's going to be similarities eventually.
But identical?


Not possible. Not possible.


But...


What if- and I'm just groping in the dark here- what if there's something like... like... a parallel world that's identical to ours? Well, nearly identical. Maybe a little different; this is Mother Nature, after all. What if you and me and him and her have duplicates? Alternates? Wouldn't that be strange? What if they did everything we did, at the same time, in the same way? Like a mirror? Wouldn't that be strange? What if they smiled when we did? They laughed when we did? Had their heart broken and cried and screamed and clawed at their faces and bedcovers when we did? What if they had the same parents that we did? The same friends? The same enemies and lovers and hobbies and fantasies? The same habits, the same ticklish spots, the same way of eating and drinking and the same little way that you flutter your lashes at those that make your heart pound? Wouldn't that be strange?
Wouldn't it?


Of course, I'm just groping in the dark here.




Hello and welcome to The Darker Side of Me.
I hope to go far with this, so read on, try not to
get confused, and ask if you have any questions.
First up though, I'd like to lay down a few rules.
No spamming, flaming or trolling. These
may be obvious but they're very important. I
don't want to see mindless posts, inane insults
or a pitiful attempt to wind us up. Thank you!
Please use good grammar and spelling.
I understand that not everyone is perfect but I
also understand that there is such thing as MS
Word with a built in spell/grammar check. Use it.
No one/two liners. Hopefully you'll be able
to write more than that. Interact with people. Tell
how your character is feeling. Description! Whoo!
That's about it for now. Everything else is obvious.
I look forward to seeing some sign-ups!




Now!


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Belysning, Year 2074


Dear Diary,


I feel stupid but mummy told me to write a diary so I did. She said it would keep me ocupyed occupied. She said she doesn't like it when I bother her in the evenings when she's trying to watch her programmes on TV and she's eating her biscuits and her nice food that she says she doesn't eat but I always see her eat it when daddy isn't here.


I don't know what to write.


Etelani x
...


Dear Diary again,


I told mummy I don't know what to write so she said to introduse myself and I said that's silly because this is a book and it can't really understand what I'm writing but she said don't be silly Lani so I started writing. She calls me Lani instead of Etelani which is my name. I don't know why. Mummy is lazy.
My name is Etelani but I already said that and I don't have an eraser so I'll carry on. I live in Porsuele in a big country called Belysning and it's pretty and big. It has lots of trees and animals and the king is very nice to us. That's what mummy says. Mummy says she likes the king. I said she can't like the king because she doesn't know him and she said she does know him because he's our ruler. I said I have a ruler in my pencil case. She said don't be silly Lani.
My hand hurts now.


Etelani x
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Dear Stupid Diary,


I told mummy I don't want to write in you anymore but she said I have to. I think I may throw you away and say Slik ate it. Slik is our dog. He's very big and he's not really a dog he's more of a wolf.
Mummy says I should talk about myself so I will. I am ten years old and I have brown hair and green eyes. Porsuele is small and it has lots of markits markets and it's very pretty. There is lots of towns but Porsuele is the best even though it isn't a big city like Oovlay. Mummy says it isn't spelt Oovlay it's spelt Uevlei but I think that's silly. She thinks I'm silly.


Etelani xxx
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...
...


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Morke, Year 2074

Dear Diary,


Mummy is making me write a diary. I don't want to. Mummy says it's because I annoy her. I think she's annoying. She thinks I'm silly. She's the silly one, eating all the bad foods that make her fat when daddy tells her not to.


I'm not going to write just to show her.


Etelani
...


Dear Diary again,


Mummy says she doesn't care if I don't want to write. She's making me write. I have to put stupid things about myself like my name and where I live. She can't even call me by my name. She calls me Lani. I don't like it when she calls me Lani.
My name is Etelani not Lani. I live in Denchan in a big country called Morke. I don't like it here because it's dirty and there's lots of crime. Mummy says our country has gone to the dogs. I don't know what that means. She says she hates the govar goverrment. I said I did too. She told me to stop being silly.


I don't want to write because my hand hurts.


Etelani
...


Dear Stupid Diary,


I hope my wolf eats you because this is boring. I shall write about myself anyway. I am ten years old. I have brown hair and green eyes. Denchan is a small town with markets. Denchan is a bad town but they're all bad towns, especially Oovlay. It's spelt Uevlei but I don't write it like that.


I am feeding you to Slik.


Etelani




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"There is a world beyond Belysning.
I know this for a fact. It's not just beyond- it's connected. Occasionally, the veil between the worlds becomes so very thin that I could nearly... reach right through. What's on the other side?
Think of the veil as a mirror.
... Of sorts.
I know that Belsyning has a copy. Or, we're the copy. Possibly. Unlikely. We're better. That much is clear. But... it's very fascinating. So... intriguing. I could... sew them together. It wouldn't take much, we're already so very entwined. All it'd take is a few more stitches. I wonder what would happen?
It'd rather like to find out."



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The year is 2074 in Belysning, a generally peaceful country that supports populations of different races. Vegetation is plentiful in this country, and the different races generally do not have any disputes with one another. They live as one with and in respect to nature, and education is available to everyone in both the countryside and cities. Technology is very advanced in the cities and the capital, while the people of the countryside have basic facilities such as bathrooms, computers and machinery. Magic is not uncommon that some people are gifted with Magicks, while others are not. As with every society, there is the royalty, the rich and the commoners, but Belysning is prosperous, and the people are satisfied with their lives. Technology, Magic and Nature live as one in Belysning. All is well.
Until that day; the moment the gates connected to Morke opened.


All hell broke loose.



The first sign of the connection was an initially mild earthquake that transformed into a shaking one. The people were frightened, but there were no reported casualties. However, the very next day, monsters started appearing in Belysning. Monsters were uncommon, though there were different races of monsters, some hostile and aggressive and some peaceful. But they did not possess the violent aura these monsters had. The innocent who do not possess the skill of Magicks were slaughtered, while those who did tried to protect the rest from the monsters' merciless waves of attacks.
Then, the humans came. This was when the people of Belysning noted a grave point. They had complete duplicates in Morke. They looked like them, they walked like them, and they sounded like them. Hell, they were even capable of mirroring their actions and movements at the same time!



They were their Shadows.


Alas, that was not good. Not when they had that ominous and aggressive nature instilled in them, bursting with hatred. Growing up and struggling to survive in a ruined world like Morke, they had regarded violence as a natural part of themselves. What's a better solution to a brooding anger dormant within them than venting their ire on their peaceful counterparts' world? When the Shadows came to the same understanding that they were the duplicates, they were triggered by the jealousy due to the fact that their counterparts were living in a harmonious environment while they suffered in their world. Determined to take over Belysning as their own, they started wreaking havoc along with the monsters.


This was not a matter of subduing them anymore, it's the fact that we're going to have to go out there and fight for our damned lives with ourselves.


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FACTS
-You are a resident of Belysning.
-Your physical shadow harbours your Morke duplicate.
-If your Shadow wants to become animate, it can switch with you at will, unless you fight back hard enough.
-When switched, you become the Shadow, and your Morke duplicate becomes completely animate.
- The longer one of you stays as a Shadow, the darker your personality becomes. You may decide to switch with your shadow to stop them becoming even more twisted, but then you shall become more tainted yourself.
-You and your Shadow can hear each other's thoughts and feel each other's intentions at all times.
-You have a choice. Either you can accept that this is how it's going to be; find and fight the force that has connected the worlds; or join that force and make sure that you and your duplicate stay connected for all eternity.




T H E G O O D G U Y S


So you wanna be a good guy, huh? Nice choice.


Places to Start in


Unfortunately, I lack the artistic capability to draw out a map for everyone, however, if someone who is artistic would be so kind as to draw one up, that would be great.




Nearest to Macabre Inc.
Uevlei
Capital City


nearest to Uevlei
Porsuele
Yanahan
Beridwen
Main/Large Towns


nearest to the borders
Aelfield
Aldlake
Belmill
Byiron
Deepmist
Doredge
Dracacre
Elfhedge
Eriland
Faydell
Flowernesse
Freymont
Linedge
Lindblum
Moorvale
Moonbrook
Rayham
Raywick
Stonemarsh
Swynhaven
Westeredge
Wildehill
Small Towns/Villages


And of course there's countryside and woods etc for you to begin in.


Accepted Good Guys:

Dai ( The Welsh Paddy )
Eile ( Levont Fon Lavin )
Lilwen ( Lady Branson )



Pending good guys




Reserved good guys






T H E B A D G U Y S


The force that connected the two worlds is actually a syndicate- Macabre Inc.- based in the capital of Belysning, Uevlei. They appear to be a company that creates high-tech equipment for households- which they do- but they are also responsible for money-crazed murders, terrorizing groups of people and doing anything to get rich. Headed by an intelligent, darkly interesting character and his cronies, this group of nutcases is available to be joined. Go ahead.
"Macabre Inc. specialise in home-based technology with the smarts of professional machines. We thrive to meet your every expectation for everyday life by using ground-breaking research for our inventions that aim to fit into every household."


Leader


Head Admin
(I will take many reserves for this spot and choose which sign-up I believe is best.)
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Assistant Admin
(I will take many reserves for this spot and choose which sign-up I believe is best.)
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Leading Agents
1


2


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Accepted Members




Pending Members




Reserved Members


Sign up sheet:
Name: (Obvious.)
Age: (Again, obvious. No limits here.)
Gender: (Again, obvious.)
Personality: (How does your character act? Think?)
Duplicate Personality: (Please remember that it's a duplicate, only slightly darker. Describe the little differences. Your duplicate will become progressively worse as the RP goes on.)
Appearance: (An image is allowed IN A LINK, PLEASE, but description is a must.)
Duplicate Appearance: (Facial features, eye colour, hair colour etc must be roughly the same [unless hair is dyed, nose is broken, scars or whatever] but as for clothes, you can go to town and buy some throughout the RP.)
History: (Only a few sentences are required, but keep it at a minimum of 4 lines. If you want to write more, please feel free to do so.
Abilities: (Okay, nothing TOO amazing, please. Remember, you're basically a citizen.)
Weapons: (No more than three, please.)
Other: (Anything else you wanna add?)


 
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You shouldn't give up on this RP; I think the concept is very interesting~ I just saw your thread today, so I guess I'm a bit late... ^^; Also, I've never really RP'd before, so I'm not sure how my skills would be, but I do like creative writing! :3

Some questions:
1) Are you looking for a certain number of members for this RP, or can it start off with a few?
2) Should I PM you my character details, or just post them in the thread itself along with my RP entry?
3) You mention that we can have up to 3 weapons - Are we expected to attack the bad guys or conquer the syndicate throughout the course of this RP?

*Note: If regular posts aren't supposed to be here, I don't mind editing this one when I make an RP entry.
 
You shouldn't give up on this RP; I think the concept is very interesting~ I just saw your thread today, so I guess I'm a bit late... ^^; Also, I've never really RP'd before, so I'm not sure how my skills would be, but I do like creative writing! :3

Some questions:
1) Are you looking for a certain number of members for this RP, or can it start off with a few?
2) Should I PM you my character details, or just post them in the thread itself along with my RP entry?
3) You mention that we can have up to 3 weapons - Are we expected to attack the bad guys or conquer the syndicate throughout the course of this RP?

*Note: If regular posts aren't supposed to be here, I don't mind editing this one when I make an RP entry.
You are free to post your sign ups either in the thread or in the PM. If you feel that you would rather have me accept/decline/reserve in a PM, then feel free to do so, and I will not post your sign up unless told otherwise, but your name will be under the "Accepted list."

No, there is no specific number of people for this RP, only in certain positions of the RP (Such as the Leading Agents, Head Admin, etc.)

Throughout the course of the RP, since it would be very boring if you didn't, you are expected to fight monsters and the bad guys later on. YOu may even fight off your Shadow with your weapons as well, So yes, you are expected (And may be mandatory) to fight off the bad guys.

I should also clarify that this is also a discussion Thread. I will not start the actual RP unless I truly believe I have enough members to have it run successfully, though I may accept more members as the RP goes on.
 
Name: Dai Tywyll

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Personality: A nomad of sorts, Dai isn't the sort of person who mixes in with any "cliques", but rather the sort of person who likes to be friends with anyone. He is kind, well-mannered and very sociable.

Duplicate Personality: Outwardly, he is pretty much exactly the same as his counterpart. Inwardly, however, he is more domineering and controlling.

Appearance: He looks several years younger than he actually is, and generally likes to keep himself looking smart and trendy. He has long, brown hair that reaches down to his shoulders, though he ties this back in a ponytail, and a neatly trimmed goatee. He isn't very tall, but he is quite stocky due to all the heavy lifting he does at the farm. Overall, he is quite a handsome and healthy looking young man, but lacks any truly remarkable features. He could be considered to be quite 'average' in appearance. His wardrobe consists of clothing that is comfortable to wear, but somewhat formal. His usual dress code would be considered 'smart-casual'.

Duplicate Appearance: Exactly the same as his counterpart, though he lets his hair hang freely and his goatee is thicker and more unkempt. The differences with this appearance come from how he holds himself. He generally looks more intimidating, with his head held high, his shoulders tense and spaced evenly and his eyes piercing and cold.

History: Dai was actually born to a rich family in Uevlei. His father was a hardware designer for Macabre Inc. and was responsible for developing gadgets that advanced home-based technology. He has helped revolutionise the use of renewable energy with revamped house-hold appliances that run purely on 'green energy'. His mother was a geography teacher, but was an expert translator for various cultures across the globe and had sometimes helped in establishing ties with other cultures, thus boosting the economy with more jobs and more trade.

So, upon the day of Dai's birth, his family were very busy. His father was almost never home, and his mother had to temporarily give up her job in order to raise him. It was common for many mothers to go through post-natal depression, and his mother was no different. However, it had such a massive impact on her mental health. She began to hallucinate, and would often seen Dai as a grotesque monster. This eventually led to her attempting to drown Dai, believing he was evil and not of this world.

Fortunately for Dai, a friend of the family had been around to witness this, and promptly got the authorities involved. Dai then spent a short period of time in an orphanage before being adopted by a young couple who hadn't been able to concieve a child of their own.

Needless to say, Dai does not remember any of this. But his adoptive parents loved him as if he were their own flesh and blood, and he was very well looked after. The couple were a man and woman by the name of Hadyn and Ffion. They lived and worked in a farm in Beridwen, which is where Dai also came to call home. Growing up, he was well educated, and in his teens he was introduced to the working aspect of living on a farm. And so, he spent his life in Beridwen; occasionally travelling to the neighbouring towns of Porsuele and Yanahan to trade crop, livestock and dairy produce.

Abilities: Dai doesn't have any magical abilities. At least, none that he is really aware of. However, he sometimes senses some primal power stirring within him. It worries him sometimes, but nothing has ever come of it and so he has come to accept that feeling as a perfectly normal part of his life.

His duplicate, however, can tap into this power. With it, he can render himself "invisible" when amongst a lot of shadow. (I say invisible, but it's kinda hard to describe. He just has a way of making people want to avoid paying any attention to him what so ever.)

Weapons: Dai often arms himself when travelling. He is very skilled in the use of a staff and daggers, so when he does arm himself, it is usually with a long, wooden staff, and a pair of daggers. Occasionally he may switch one or more of these out for, maybe a bow and arrows, for he does spend some of his free time at the pub competing against other archers and has developed quite a talent for it.

Other: Dai's bond with his duplicate is rather up-close and personal. Sometimes it feels like there is a mental battle going on between himself and his duplicate. He has a vague idea of his duplicate's intentions, and it doesn't bode well for anyone, let alone himself. He attempts to exert control over this, and it is rather like supressing strong emotions. There have been cases where a darker side to him has emerged (resulting in him suddenly, and without explanation, being nasty towards someone), as if his duplicate is trying to possess him.
 
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Name: Dai Tywyll
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Personality: A nomad of sorts, Dai isn't the sort of person who mixes in with any "cliques", but rather the sort of person who likes to be friends with anyone. He is kind, well-mannered and very sociable.
Duplicate Personality: Outwardly, he is pretty much exactly the same as his counterpart. Inwardly, however, he is more domineering and controlling.
Appearance: He looks several years younger than he actually is, and generally likes to keep himself looking smart and trendy. He has long, brown hair that reaches down to his shoulders, though he ties this back in a ponytail, and a neatly trimmed goatee. He isn't very tall, but he is quite stocky due to all the heavy lifting he does at the farm. Overall, he is quite a handsome and healthy looking young man, but lacks any truly remarkable features. He could be considered to be quite 'average' in appearance. His wardrobe consists of clothing that is comfortable to wear, but somewhat formal. His usual dress code would be considered 'smart-casual'.
Duplicate Appearance: Exactly the same as his counterpart, though he lets his hair hang freely and his goatee is thicker and more unkempt. The differences with this appearance come from how he holds himself. He generally looks more intimidating, with his head held high, his shoulders tense and spaced evenly and his eyes piercing and cold.
History: Dai was actually born to a rich family in Uevlei. His father was a hardware designer for Macabre Inc. and was responsible for developing gadgets that advanced home-based technology. He has helped revolutionise the use of renewable energy with revamped house-hold appliances that run purely on 'green energy'. His mother was a geography teacher, but was an expert translator for various cultures across the globe and had sometimes helped in establishing ties with other cultures, thus boosting the economy with more jobs and more trade.
So, upon the day of Dai's birth, his family were very busy. His father was almost never home, and his mother had to temporarily give up her job in order to raise him. It was common for many mothers to go through post-natal depression, and his mother was no different. However, it had such a massive impact on her mental health. She began to hallucinate, and would often seen Dai as a grotesque monster. This eventually led to her attempting to drown Dai, believing he was evil and not of this world.
Fortunately for Dai, a friend of the family had been around to witness this, and promptly got the authorities involved. Dai then spent a short period of time in an orphanage before being adopted by a young couple who hadn't been able to concieve a child of their own.
Needless to say, Dai does not remember any of this. But his adoptive parents loved him as if he were their own flesh and blood, and he was very well looked after. The couple were a man and woman by the name of Hadyn and Ffion. They lived and worked in a farm in Beridwen, which is where Dai also came to call home. Growing up, he was well educated, and in his teens he was introduced to the working aspect of living on a farm. And so, he spent his life in Beridwen; occasionally travelling to the neighbouring towns of Porsuele and Yanahan to trade crop, livestock and dairy produce.
Abilities: Dai doesn't have any magical abilities. At least, none that he is really aware of. However, he sometimes senses some primal power stirring within him. It worries him sometimes, but nothing has ever come of it and so he has come to accept that feeling as a perfectly normal part of his life.
His duplicate, however, can tap into this power. With it, he can render himself "invisible" when amongst a lot of shadow. (I say invisible, but it's kinda hard to describe. He just has a way of making people want to avoid paying any attention to him what so ever.)

Weapons: Dai often arms himself when travelling. He is very skilled in the use of a staff and daggers, so when he does arm himself, it is usually with a long, wooden staff, and a pair of daggers. Occasionally he may switch one or more of these out for, maybe a bow and arrows, for he does spend some of his free time at the pub competing against other archers and has developed quite a talent for it.
Other: Dai's bond with his duplicate is rather up-close and personal. Sometimes it feels like there is a mental battle going on between himself and his duplicate. He has a vague idea of his duplicate's intentions, and it doesn't bode well for anyone, let alone himself. He attempts to exert control over this, and it is rather like supressing strong emotions. There have been cases where a darker side to him has emerged (resulting in him suddenly, and without explanation, being nasty towards someone), as if his duplicate is trying to possess him.
I fail to see any flaw in this. How you executed this, and how you managed to form your own headcanon for one of the cities, is actually pretty interesting. I love your history as well, and it's much different from the typical "abused for a long time and eventually lived on his own" histories that I've seen in other role plays.

I'm very interesting to see how Dai will adapt in this RP.

ACCEPTED
 
I'm very interesting to see how Dai will adapt in this RP.

I'm interested in seeing how he'll adapt also. :D I've left myself with so many possibilities, it could go anywhere. I think I'm going to have a lot of fun with this character. :)
 
Hmm. After taking a look at the story line. I'm a bit more interested now. Only question is this. Is it modern technology like what we have now or futuristic technology like the star ocean series?
 
I'm not too sure myself, actually. Making my character, I kinda went along with an assumption that it is quite futuristic. Ahri states that the people tend to live as one with nature, so naturually I assumed that most of their technology would be fueled by 'green energy'. Like solar, wind, hydro, etc, and also having zero-emissions from transporation and factories, or whatever.

So I don't know. Correct me if I'm wrong! :monster:
 
I am writing this post as there seems to be lack of interest (sort-of) and feedback. So just to let you know, I find the general story/setting/theme to be absolutely brilliant. If I wasn't as busy as I like to think that I am, I would be more than keen to join in. Yet it is so bloody fascinating for me to an extent where I am having a battle with my duplicate who would skip all the business meetings, lectures at uni, band practises, gigs and social responsibilities in addition to hobbies (loads of different sports) just to give a go at this. However I guess my rational side will decide not to join this, which is unfortunate as I do believe that this RP should deserve more attention and members. In any case, don't worry and best of luck! :P

Just know there are people out there who appreciate this sort of cool stuff, even if they don't join in themselves. ( On that matter, I might join on a sunny day which may be tomorrow and may be never).

Cheers,
Johnny
 
Hmm. After taking a look at the story line. I'm a bit more interested now. Only question is this. Is it modern technology like what we have now or futuristic technology like the star ocean series?
I guess I forgot to mention it; how advance your technology is will vary on which city you start in. When I get the chance, I will specify which city is which (For example, Beridwen is a more Rural environment that relies mostly on farming whereas
Uevlei rely on "futuristic" technology and, yes, "green" technology.


I am writing this post as there seems to be lack of interest (sort-of) and feedback. So just to let you know, I find the general story/setting/theme to be absolutely brilliant. If I wasn't as busy as I like to think that I am, I would be more than keen to join in. Yet it is so bloody fascinating for me to an extent where I am having a battle with my duplicate who would skip all the business meetings, lectures at uni, band practises, gigs and social responsibilities in addition to hobbies (loads of different sports) just to give a go at this. However I guess my rational side will decide not to join this, which is unfortunate as I do believe that this RP should deserve more attention and members. In any case, don't worry and best of luck! :P

Just know there are people out there who appreciate this sort of cool stuff, even if they don't join in themselves. ( On that matter, I might join on a sunny day which may be tomorrow and may be never).

Cheers,
Johnny
Thank you for your feedback, and it is rather disappointing that you decided not to participate. Perhaps maybe you'll reconsider. :griin:
This RP isn't complete; As I said, the official RP will start when enough people have joined and I have finished any changes that I plan to add. I will keep everyone posted ^_^
 
Hey Ahri i'm new to this forum and have been searching the internet for a place like this since getting the internet back. Just saying that i've read through this RP concept and I am very interested in joining. It's very late and i'm probably going to be busy over the next couple of days but will begin writing up a character for this as much as I can. I hope this keeps open i'd love to get involved. :)
 
Hey Ahri i'm new to this forum and have been searching the internet for a place like this since getting the internet back. Just saying that i've read through this RP concept and I am very interested in joining. It's very late and i'm probably going to be busy over the next couple of days but will begin writing up a character for this as much as I can. I hope this keeps open i'd love to get involved. :)
'Tis not a problem, take as much time are you need. The Sign Ups aren't going to be closed for a while, so take as much time as needed ~

 
Mine will be more along the line of current technology. Well, I put it off long enough.

Name: Eile Mizer

Age: 19

Race: Human

Gender: Female


Appearance:


Everything she wears is green. Her cowboy hat that sits on her forest green hair that falls down and stops at her waist. Her upper attire consist of a long sleeve shirt and jacket that stops just above of her midriff. Her short shorts is also green as stocking/legging starts a few inches down from her short shorts and reaches to her shoes. The stocking/legging has 4 brown belts strapped at the top of the legging/stocking as her shoes has heels on them and is as green as the rest of her outfit which she has come to name the Flame rider Outfit.On her hands are green fingerless gloves which is green as well. Her various weapons that she has are all green. Pretty much, you will never find her without some sort of green on her or nearby

Duplicate appearance: Pretty much the same, but instead of green, it's red.

Personality: Eile is a down to earth girl with a stubborn personality. She does not prefer to have friends, but she will not go so far as to outright refuse friendship if it's offered.

Duplicate personality: Her duplicate is more of an energetic girl with a easy go lucky personality. She prefers to surround herself with as many friends as she can. But it tends to be more sardonic at times.

Weapons:
1. A 50 caliber sniper rifle that can, by command, changes into a scythe with firing capabilities.

Abilities
Eile learned the basics of using her Sniper Scythe. But for the most efficiency, her doppelganger has the best results with it.
Recoil Slash: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can cut through flesh with ease.
Recoil Jump: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can jump higher then normal under the power of the sniper rifle's recoil.
Recoil Acceleration: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can move forward at a faster rate.
Stabilizing fire: Using the blade portion of the scythe as a tripod, Eile can fire the gun portion of the scythe with ease.

History: Eile was born in the city of Ueviel among one of the richest families in the city. She had everything handed to her in her life and she despised it. It was like that until she hit the age of 15 when she started to learn how to use a gun, under super strict supervision. Her parents were against the idea at the time, but as time went on, they sort of gave in as Eile became more proficient in it. This bothered them slightly. But at the age of 18, Eile moved out of her parent's place. Despite her objections, her parents gave her 1/4 of their entire fortune. The first thing she did with the money was open a gun store. With her job/home secured, Eile took the time to just enjoy her life and build her own network of close friends. This is the current life of Eile at the age of 19.
 
Name: Lilwen

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Personality: Known to be quite a reliable, hard-working and focused individual however she can be stubborn and worryingly naive at times. Pleasantly approachable.

Duplicate Personality: Very similar to above but not so approachable. Has a more introvert and devious nature about her.

Appearance: Most of her attire is tailor made from her hometown. Her hair is a very dark moss green colour, worn loosely adorned with a yellow ribbon intertwined within a braid on the left. Has somewhat unconventional 'prettyness' to her features. She has a petite and lithe frame but also has a lean sculpted muscular physique from her years of vigorous training.

Duplicate Appearance: Physically the same although she appears more rugged and relaxed. Her eyes far more scrutinizing and wears an almost permanent scowl across her face.

History: Born in the village of Faydell. Her parents are both blessed with artistic skills. Her father is a sculptor who makes his earnings from requests mostly of the rich people of the city, her mother a tailor who produces very fine quality goods and is usually a favoured of the village for customised garb.
Evidently Lilwen was raised comfortably but possessed no skills similar to that of her parents. She was however always very quick on her feet and grew with a passion for investigative and combat training from a young age. Her parents never questioned why but sought a mentor for their daughter and let her fulfill her wishes freely.

In her late teens Lilwen travelled to Uevlai alone on countless occassions and volunteered herself for various 'low risk' tasks and assignments for an organization in the city. "The doors of opportunity multiplied over the last couple of years as she diligently continues to work on to improve her skills and flourishes with her growing potential". (Or so she believes...)
In between her arduous, unpaid tasks and assignments, Lilwen struggles to earn for herself in the meantime thus travels lightly to nearby towns in her few spare hours as a trade merchant selling her mothers goods unfortunately having to use most of the earnings on the inns for food and to rest.

Abilities: Currently deciphering amateur, combat skills.

Weapons: Dagger, bow & arrow. (Both wooden and technologically advanced). Used for hunting wild animals hitherto used for multiple other purposes. She is quite skilled with these weapons but not as well as she should be considering her strenuous training over the years.


Edit: Open to any suggested tweaks and changes, this is my first character so i'm expecting a few flaws.
 
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Yet it is so bloody fascinating for me to an extent where I am having a battle with my duplicate who would skip all the business meetings, lectures at uni, band practises, gigs and social responsibilities in addition to hobbies (loads of different sports) just to give a go at this.

Pssh, you don't need all that. :P Haha. Aaah, obviously there are more important things that go on in life. I guess it's all just a matter of trying to maintain a balance with doing all the things you want.

But yeah, on topic...

Just made some slight changes to my character bio. Nothing major, it's just that I noticed it had gone into a big lump of text when I copied and pasted it here, so I spread it out a bit more to make it more readable. Also made him two years younger, not that that's gonna have any impact on things at all.

By the way, I can create a world map if you like. Wouldn't be anything fantastic, but I can draw one out on MS Paint that could be of use.
 
Pssh, you don't need all that. :P Haha. Aaah, obviously there are more important things that go on in life. I guess it's all just a matter of trying to maintain a balance with doing all the things you want.

But yeah, on topic...

Just made some slight changes to my character bio. Nothing major, it's just that I noticed it had gone into a big lump of text when I copied and pasted it here, so I spread it out a bit more to make it more readable. Also made him two years younger, not that that's gonna have any impact on things at all.

By the way, I can create a world map if you like. Wouldn't be anything fantastic, but I can draw one out on MS Paint that could be of use.

That would be amazing if you did <3 I'll donate 500 gil to you if you wish =] Nothing too fancy, I just want a map that's readible and easy to follow and understand.

Mine will be more along the line of current technology. Well, I put it off long enough.

Name: Eile Mizer

Age: 19

Race: Human

Gender: Female


Appearance:


Everything she wears is green. Her cowboy hat that sits on her forest green hair that falls down and stops at her waist. Her upper attire consist of a long sleeve shirt and jacket that stops just above of her midriff. Her short shorts is also green as stocking/legging starts a few inches down from her short shorts and reaches to her shoes. The stocking/legging has 4 brown belts strapped at the top of the legging/stocking as her shoes has heels on them and is as green as the rest of her outfit which she has come to name the Flame rider Outfit.On her hands are green fingerless gloves which is green as well. Her various weapons that she has are all green. Pretty much, you will never find her without some sort of green on her or nearby

Duplicate appearance: Pretty much the same, but instead of green, it's red.

Personality: Eile is a down to earth girl with a stubborn personality. She does not prefer to have friends, but she will not go so far as to outright refuse friendship if it's offered.

Duplicate personality: Her duplicate is more of an energetic girl with a easy go lucky personality. She prefers to surround herself with as many friends as she can. But it tends to be more sardonic at times.

Weapons:
1. A 50 caliber sniper rifle that can, by command, changes into a scythe with firing capabilities.

Abilities
Eile learned the basics of using her Sniper Scythe. But for the most efficiency, her doppelganger has the best results with it.
Recoil Slash: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can cut through flesh with ease.
Recoil Jump: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can jump higher then normal under the power of the sniper rifle's recoil.
Recoil Acceleration: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can move forward at a faster rate.
Stabilizing fire: Using the blade portion of the scythe as a tripod, Eile can fire the gun portion of the scythe with ease.

History: Eile was born in the city of Ueviel among one of the richest families in the city. She had everything handed to her in her life and she despised it. It was like that until she hit the age of 15 when she started to learn how to use a gun, under super strict supervision. Her parents were against the idea at the time, but as time went on, they sort of gave in as Eile became more proficient in it. This bothered them slightly. But at the age of 18, Eile moved out of her parent's place. Despite her objections, her parents gave her 1/4 of their entire fortune. The first thing she did with the money was open a gun store. With her job/home secured, Eile took the time to just enjoy her life and build her own network of close friends. This is the current life of Eile at the age of 19.

I really, really, like this, but I can't help that her personality lacks a little bit. I understand that personalities and histories are a pain, but I can't help but feel like there can be more development in the history. I also understand that you are free to add backstory and such as the RP goes on. Why were her parents so against it? Where are her parents now? What inspired her to use a gun?

I will reserve this for the time being =] I apologize for making this a hassle.

RESERVED

Name: Lilwen

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Personality: Known to be quite a reliable, hard-working and focused individual however she can be stubborn and worryingly naive at times. Pleasantly approachable.

Duplicate Personality: Very similar to above but not so approachable. Has a more introvert and devious nature about her.

Appearance: Most of her attire is tailor made from her hometown. Her hair is a very dark moss green colour, worn loosely adorned with a yellow ribbon intertwined within a braid on the left. Has somewhat unconventional 'prettyness' to her features. She has a petite and lithe frame but also has a lean sculpted muscular physique from her years of vigorous training.

Duplicate Appearance: Physically the same although she appears more rugged and relaxed. Her eyes far more scrutinizing and wears an almost permanent scowl across her face.

History: Born in the village of Faydell. Her parents are both blessed with artistic skills. Her father is a sculptor who makes his earnings from requests mostly of the rich people of the city, her mother a tailor who produces very fine quality goods and is usually a favoured of the village for customised garb.
Evidently Lilwen was raised comfortably but possessed no skills similar to that of her parents. She was however always very quick on her feet and grew with a passion for investigative and combat training from a young age. Her parents never questioned why but sought a mentor for their daughter and let her fulfill her wishes freely.

In her late teens Lilwen travelled to Uevlai alone on countless occassions and volunteered herself for various 'low risk' tasks and assignments for an organization in the city. "The doors of opportunity multiplied over the last couple of years as she diligently continues to work on to improve her skills and flourishes with her growing potential". (Or so she believes...)
In between her arduous, unpaid tasks and assignments, Lilwen struggles to earn for herself in the meantime thus travels lightly to nearby towns in her few spare hours as a trade merchant selling her mothers goods unfortunately having to use most of the earnings on the inns for food and to rest.

Abilities: Currently deciphering amateur, combat skills.

Weapons: Dagger, bow & arrow. (Both wooden and technologically advanced). Used for hunting wild animals hitherto used for multiple other purposes. She is quite skilled with these weapons but not as well as she should be considering her strenuous training over the years.


Edit: Open to any suggested tweaks and changes, this is my first character so i'm expecting a few flaws.

The only problems I see with this one are occasional grammar problems, but other than that, it seems fair enough. I'd like to know more about her history, but because it appears most of my questions appeared to be answered, and I expect to see some answered if you are to participate in the RP, I believe you are accepted. =]

ACCEPTED
 
Revamp work. XD

Name: Eile Mizer

Age: 19

Race: Human

Gender: Female


Appearance:


Everything she wears is green. Her cowboy hat that sits on her forest green hair that falls down and stops at her waist. Her upper attire consist of a long sleeve shirt and jacket that stops just above of her midriff. Her short shorts is also green as stocking/legging starts a few inches down from her short shorts and reaches to her shoes. The stocking/legging has 4 brown belts strapped at the top of the legging/stocking as her shoes has heels on them and is as green as the rest of her outfit which she has come to name the Flame rider Outfit.On her hands are green fingerless gloves which is green as well. Her various weapons that she has are all green. Pretty much, you will never find her without some sort of green on her or nearby

Duplicate appearance: Pretty much the same, but instead of green, it's red.

Personality: Eile is a down to earth girl with a stubborn personality. She does not prefer to have friends, but she will not go so far as to outright refuse friendship if it's offered. She has more of a caring side to her considering the weapons shop she now owns and will make sure that everyone that goes to and from her shop comes out in one piece.

Duplicate personality: Her duplicate is more of an energetic girl with a easy go lucky personality. She prefers to surround herself with as many friends as she can. But it tends to be more sardonic at times with a someone disturbing lack of sincerity for those who injury themselves.

Weapons:
1. A 50 caliber sniper rifle that can, by command, changes into a scythe with firing capabilities.

Abilities
Eile learned the basics of using her Sniper Scythe. But for the most efficiency, her doppelganger has the best results with it.
Recoil Slash: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can cut through flesh with ease.
Recoil Jump: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can jump higher then normal under the power of the sniper rifle's recoil.
Recoil Acceleration: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can move forward at a faster rate.
Stabilizing fire: Using the blade portion of the scythe as a tripod, Eile can fire the gun portion of the scythe with ease.

History: Eile was born in the city of Ueviel among one of the richest weapons manufacturer families in the city. She had everything handed to her in her life and she despised it. It was like that until she hit the age of 15 when she started to learn how to use a gun, under super strict supervision. At the time, Eile felt like it was in her blood to learn how to use a gun. Her parents were against the idea at the time due to the fact that it was falling in line with their work and they wanted to see she go into a non fighting job. To them, they would like to see Eile as a Doctor, but as time went on, they sort of gave in as Eile became more proficient in it. This bothered them slightly. But at the age of 18, Eile moved out of her parent's place with the hopes of building a weapon empire to rival her parents. Despite her objections, her parents gave her 1/4 of their entire fortune. The first thing she did with the money was open a gun store just on the outskirts of the town that she and her family lived in. With her job/home secured, Eile took the time to just enjoy her life and build her own network of close friends. This is the current life of Eile at the age of 19.
 
The only problems I see with this one are occasional grammar problems, but other than that, it seems fair enough. I'd like to know more about her history, but because it appears most of my questions appeared to be answered, and I expect to see some answered if you are to participate in the RP, I believe you are accepted.

Thank you :) Sorry about the grammar errors i'll happily try and correct wherever I can. I haven't written descriptive/stories for a while so I may be a little rusty. I have tried to leave some room for development but plan on doing some side character information soon. :)
 
Revamp work. XD

Name: Eile Mizer

Age: 19

Race: Human

Gender: Female


Appearance:


Everything she wears is green. Her cowboy hat that sits on her forest green hair that falls down and stops at her waist. Her upper attire consist of a long sleeve shirt and jacket that stops just above of her midriff. Her short shorts is also green as stocking/legging starts a few inches down from her short shorts and reaches to her shoes. The stocking/legging has 4 brown belts strapped at the top of the legging/stocking as her shoes has heels on them and is as green as the rest of her outfit which she has come to name the Flame rider Outfit.On her hands are green fingerless gloves which is green as well. Her various weapons that she has are all green. Pretty much, you will never find her without some sort of green on her or nearby

Duplicate appearance: Pretty much the same, but instead of green, it's red.

Personality: Eile is a down to earth girl with a stubborn personality. She does not prefer to have friends, but she will not go so far as to outright refuse friendship if it's offered. She has more of a caring side to her considering the weapons shop she now owns and will make sure that everyone that goes to and from her shop comes out in one piece.

Duplicate personality: Her duplicate is more of an energetic girl with a easy go lucky personality. She prefers to surround herself with as many friends as she can. But it tends to be more sardonic at times with a someone disturbing lack of sincerity for those who injury themselves.

Weapons:
1. A 50 caliber sniper rifle that can, by command, changes into a scythe with firing capabilities.

Abilities
Eile learned the basics of using her Sniper Scythe. But for the most efficiency, her doppelganger has the best results with it.
Recoil Slash: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can cut through flesh with ease.
Recoil Jump: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can jump higher then normal under the power of the sniper rifle's recoil.
Recoil Acceleration: Using the recoil of her weapon's attachment, Eile can move forward at a faster rate.
Stabilizing fire: Using the blade portion of the scythe as a tripod, Eile can fire the gun portion of the scythe with ease.

History: Eile was born in the city of Ueviel among one of the richest weapons manufacturer families in the city. She had everything handed to her in her life and she despised it. It was like that until she hit the age of 15 when she started to learn how to use a gun, under super strict supervision. At the time, Eile felt like it was in her blood to learn how to use a gun. Her parents were against the idea at the time due to the fact that it was falling in line with their work and they wanted to see she go into a non fighting job. To them, they would like to see Eile as a Doctor, but as time went on, they sort of gave in as Eile became more proficient in it. This bothered them slightly. But at the age of 18, Eile moved out of her parent's place with the hopes of building a weapon empire to rival her parents. Despite her objections, her parents gave her 1/4 of their entire fortune. The first thing she did with the money was open a gun store just on the outskirts of the town that she and her family lived in. With her job/home secured, Eile took the time to just enjoy her life and build her own network of close friends. This is the current life of Eile at the age of 19.

Much better. =] I still somewhat feel like it's lacking, however, I expect that you will answer any other questions we may have about Eile when the RP starts, as I understand that you're very limited on how long and how much you can actually describe. I look forward to seeing your character participate.

ACCEPTED
 
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