The Soul Spear

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The Soul Spear

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The Story

4 years into a war, the Gisarlian Empire begen developing chemical weopons to hinder the Kingdom of Alaterier. Yet even after 5 years, they were unable to develop a successful weapon. In the 10th year of the war a huge explosion gripped the main Gisarlian weapons factory. From the factory a mist began flowing across both lands until they were covered. The mist settled for 3 days then disappeared. Everything seemed fine.
The mist gave birth to the soul-less and bodies with multiple souls. They were called 'The Soul-people'. The only age group affected was between 15 and 20. These people began to develop powers of destruction and life. They were feared and hunted down.
The 2 Kingdoms became 1 and ended the war, they began to help the people, of the now called Razzier lands, rid the world of these souls. 50 years into the future the lands flourished, and the Soul-people were believed to be gone.
However, the mist had changed peoples genetics. Now the next generation of Soul-people have begun. Once a person reaches 15 there soul will either dissolve into nothingness or split in to two seperate halfs to share a body. Many will grow through this stage and nothing will happen.
In the early years of the soul-people, a mystical prophet looked into the future. All she saw was a spear. It was widely beieved by both the former empires that a demonic spear was brought from an unknown land. A warrior possessed with the spear is said to be able to remove a soul from a body, instantly defeating them. Little is known of wether the spear actually existed or wether it was just a tale.
Many of the soul-people would love such a weapon, they could rid themselves of they're other selves. But if one were to find the spear which would live and which would die?

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It's all your fault!' he snapped at apprantly no one.
There he was half covered in rubble inside a small crator. Dust filled the air. His eyes were covered by his black thick (and now dirt filled) hair. He needed to see, he flicked back his head. His hair revieled his grey eyes, he look around his arms and legs were completely covered with rocks and dirt. His chest showed through, it was bloody and cut. The cut's were oozing with blood. He tried wriggling free, pained seered up through his left leg, it was either broken or a large gash ran across it.
Ahh come on, Steadler, he wanted to fight us. Let me take control ...
'Thermesa!' he groaned trying to remain in control, in his minds eye Steadler invisioned himself, a light figure wearing a crown, standing above another figure, this one dark.
Fine but I could crumble these rocks for you ...
'I don't need your help, Thermesa, just be quiet,' he muttered trying to pull his hands free.
The dust began to clear, Steadler notice a body. The one who tried to kill them in the forest, his blade had fallen to the ground. The body was mutilated with it's clothes covered in blood. It's arms had been sapped of all life, they were now bones. The other body had two hand prints on it's bald head, Thermesa had tried to kill the brain.
Pains rang up from Steadlers chest, he shook both hands free of the rubble. He rose them above his chest light shining from them, the thick cuts began to close and the blood slowed then stopped. Exhaution suddenly crept up, Steadler past out...
He awoke later in the night.
Steadler pushed himself up with his hands, his left leg throbbed still but he was glad to feel that it had stopped bleedily whilst he slept.
Steadler began sleepily rolling the rocks and stones of his legs, pain throbbed each time he hit his leg. He stumbled to his feet, his weight on his right leg.
'Yagggggggghhhhhhh!!' someone screamed in the distance, their vioce carrying through the forest outside of the once capitol, Valactia.
Steadler threw himself against the crator wall. He began to climb, thoughts riddled his mind, Should I help? Can I help with my leg like this? Will I be able to heal my leg?


(Okay hope you guys like)
 
The sea was calm and wind was breezing gently. A ship was sailing towards the coast to that is near, once capitol city, Valactia. On ship there were crew members steering the ship, looking through binoculars, sweeping the ship and drinking ale. Few minutes later, when the crew members where ready to anchor the ship, a man, captain, comes out from his room. By the single look the man could make child to cry. The ship has anchored and the boats have been released on water, and then the captain yells out...

Captain: ''Hurry up you slimes, the reward awaits our arrival at Valactia.''

Crew: ''YES, CAPTAIN!''

The captain descends with rope ladders on the boat and stands still on it while the crew members, on the same boat, where pulling an oar towards the coast. There where 7 boats that hold 4 crew members including the boat on which the captain was that was ahead of others. Three minutes later they arrived at the coast, they tied up the boats and then captain yelled again...

Captain: ''Be ready, who knows what will we meet at the city.''

Captain draws out his rapier and starts walking through the forest towards Valactia, and the crew members where following him.
 
Jin took out a piece of paper from his pocket, and looked at it yet again.
He where to steal an artifact, from the guards in the city of Valactia.

"The Amulet if Argonk, eh?" he sorta asked himself.
this was an amulet, he didn't really care what it did, his job where to get it, and return it to his contractor. And get his 2000 gold.

"well. the guards ARE using plate mail" he grinned to himself. as he neared the town

"Lets see. The barracks are..... There" he said to himself, as he looked at a city map, that was posted at a random brick wall.

He would have to wait until night, then search for a guard named Lagos, he was the one that had the amulet.

So, Jin started to wander town, awaiting nightfall.
 
'Yagggggggghhhhhhh!!' someone screamed in the distance, their vioce carrying through the forest outside of the once capitol, Valactia.
Steadler threw himself against the crator wall. He began to climb, thoughts riddled his mind, Should I help? Can I help with my leg like this? Will I be able to heal my leg?

Steadler reached the top of the small crater and pulled himself out, his left leg stung as it thuded into a tree nearby.
He swore, as tears swelled up in his eyes.
Steadler groaned and pulled himself up, looking for his pack. It hadn't moved, still inbetween the two trees that he was going to sleep between.

Another scream stretched through the forest, a little north of his position.

Steadler stumbled across to his bag, he thudded into the soft grass. Pain showing in his eyes as he ripped open the small bag. He grabbed out his bread and cheese, also water.

After swallowing down a small amount of food, Steadler ripped off the deep grey (and blood soaked) left leg of his pants. More pain filled him.

The gash was smaller then he had expected, only running from the outside of the leg near his waist down to his knee. He poured water along the cut, cleaning out any infection. He held down a shout of agony.

Steadler steadied his back aginast a tree and began to heal his leg, only in quick short bursts.

'Aghhhhhhhhh!' a third scream, this moving closer to Valactia.
'Yeah, yeah. I'll be there in a minute,' Steadler winced, energy slowly being sapped.
 
After randomly wandering about, surveying the layout of the place. This should be an easy heist. Since all neclases had a metal chain, it should be hardly anything to speak about.

He climbed to the roof, in a nearby ladder, witch was lying next to the wall.
Ans he crept closer to the edge, which was closes to the barracks.

there he sat, hoping to find out who Lagos was.
There was a tubby (T) guard outside, and shortly after Jin arrived, a Well Trained (WT) one came along


WT: "eyh.."
T: "What?"
WT: "your shift is up"
T: "Oh, yeah. i guess you're right."

Jin sat there. listening
"who the hell is Lagos" he thought.

WT: "Oh, lagos. one more thing"
T (Lagos) : "what?"
WT: "nah.. nothing.. you go rest"

A grin grew across Jin's face.
"There we go." he thought

when the 2 guards parted, Jin started to follow Lagos. Skillfully staying in the shadows and avoiding attention.
At some time following him. Lagos entered a building.
"now.. where is this?" Jin thought, looking for a sign

"Sign: Living Quarters"

"aww.. crud" Jin though, as he sat down.
"well. lets see here... their armor is of metal.." he realized again, as a Grin grew across his lips.
"this will be easy" he thoguth, as the grin still got wider.

Later that night, Jin started looking into different windows, after some time. He finnaly found Lagos room.

"Gotcha" he smiled, to the sleeping guard.
He entered silently. looking for the neclase.
"There it is.. on the nightstand"

He concentrated on the chain, and the neclase followed it, til it came to Jin's hand, He grabbed it, and put it in a leather poutch.

Suddenly the guard awoke.

"What? is that you, Lorg?" he asked in a daze. Though, upon opening his eyes. and spotting Jin "who are you. why are you here?" He said with a raised voice.
"Umm.... room service?" jin asked, hoping he still was in a daze.

Lagos looked over on the nightstand "where is my neclase" He shouted
"umm.. you put it somewhere?" Jin replied, still hoping for the dazed effect-

Lagos took a deap breath. it was clear. He was going to call the guards.
Jin used his magic to lift up Lagos's curiass, and smashing it HARD in him.
although all this. "GUAR--!!*" *CRASH!!*

"oh.. crap.. i gotta get out of here" Jin thought to himself Someone had to have heard that.
While Legging it, he heard someone from the door inside
"STOP THIEF!!"

yeah, who where actually gonna stop after this. Jin gave it his all. and Ran.
 
Steadler dressed quickly, not long after the third scream he had heard movement around him. It could just be animals but he wasn't taking any chances. His leg wasn't fully healed but he called walk. His fresh clothes were warm against the coldness of the forest in the evening.

He checked his pask, no clothes remained, he left it and pulled the grey hood over his head and his long sleeves down. He was going to investigate the second scream.

He set out through the dark forest, he had left the empty bag behind. He limped slightly as he crept.

A body lay silently in the middle of a clearing. Whoever it was they were dead. Their eyes white with fear, mouth open.

'Damn, I'm too late ...' muttered Steadler. He crept over to the body. 'It looks like the boy died of ... fear.'

Indeed, the young boy look only 8 or 9 years old, he had no wounds but his heart had stopped.

Only one creature can do this Steadler .... a Wraith
'I know, Thermesa,' he muttered pulling himself away from the body.

A Wraith here, Why?
'What are the guards of Valactia doing? they have no lord, they must be protection something ...' Steadler realised, 'But what?'
The spear ... we learnt of it here, makes sence that it could be here as well ...
'Maybe your right, Ther..'
As always.

Steadler crept through the forest, towards Valactia.
 
Captain and his crew were nearing the city. It was night already. There were two guards in front of the gates. Captain stopped and so did the crew. He says...

Captain: ''Leave those two to me, you stay here and when I blow up the gate we enter.''

Captain went alone towards the two guards. As he got close one of the guards says...

Guard: ''HALT! Who are you and state your business.''

Captain: ''I am Yaldamar and I'm here to take the wealth of this city!''

Guards drew their blade but Yaldamar was able to impale one of the guards through the opening of helm right into the head. The guard falls down and another guard was charging at him. Yaldamar's rapier turns on fire and slashes guards armor leaving the mark of fire. Yaldamar quickly pushes him to the gates and the starts running away from the guard.

Guard: ''What the...!''

KABOOM!! The guard exploded and also made a small hole on the gates. Yaldamar and his crew went through the gates and into the Valactia city.
 
Jin was running. He looked behind, it seemed as he had around 10 guards, or so after him.

After some running, he game to a big gate. Though, blocked on the sides as well. A dead end.

"Fuck" jin said to himself.
Then he suddenly heard some screaming on the other side, thogh, he didn't have time for that, there was a small group in front of him.

"We got you now. Thief" One of the guards stated.
Jin walked closer to the gate, and heard a "What the.."
Jin, slightly confused, wondering what was happening. His question was answered.

The thud of the guard hitting the door, then.

ga-DOOM!
Jin was sent backwards, a few meters. As he managed to get back on his feet.
As the dust faded, Jin saw a man, leading several others.

He looked like your typical bad guy, and the fact that he just entered the blown hole, made it more clear.
He had to be a pirate.

Jin got up, and looked around for 2 secs, there was no way he could win this.

He took out 2 marbles, and made a cylinder of them.
Holding on to it, he (magically) lifted himself to the roof of the nearest building. And faded in the shadows.
 
Yaldamar and crew entered the city. As he entered Yaldamar saw a person flying away on the nearby building and fleeing. But that person left ten guards behind him that were probably chasing him. Yaldamar's pirate crew drew they're rapiers, sabers and other weapons. Then Yaldamar yells out...

Yaldamar: ''Fight fellow pirates, soon we will fill the ship with wealth this city holds!''

All the crew members grunted and went to fight the guards. There were twice more pirates than guards so the chances where great. Yaldamar also joined the struggle. There were two guards charged at Yaldamar, but then Yaldamar started to swing his rapier around. The more he was swinging the blade the faster it get. Attacking guards where taking heavy damage, and as Yaldamar stopped swinging the rapier, the guards felled down lifelessly. Soon all ten guards where down, with only one pirate down.

Yaldamar: ''Seperate into groups and go search the city, I will be fine alone.''

Crew: ''Aye, aye sir!''

Pirates divided into four groups with five members and head through the city while Yaldamar was left alone to search the city.
 
Steadler crept through the forest, towards Valactia.
KA-BOOM! An explosion came from ahead of him.
'Damn,' he muttered, 'what now?'
He drew both of his daggers as he reached the edge of the forest. Steadler looked up to see the Wraith, a blue jelly-like creature float through the closed gate. The gate had a hole in it.
No doubt the explosion earlier, Steadler.
Guards were dead both inside and out of the gate. Steadler crept in through the hole, a pirate was on the ground.
'Well that explains things.'
The Wraith moved away straight toward the centre of the city.
 
Yaldamar hears someone's footsteps behind him, he turns around and see a young lad carrying daggers. He points at the lad with his rapier and says...

Yaldamar: ''Begone young lad, you don't want to end up like this guards here.''

Points at ten guards lying in front of him.
 
Yaldamar: ''Begone young lad, you don't want to end up like this guards here.''

Points at ten guards lying in front of him.

Steadler looked up at the man.
'Who are you?' Steadler asked with caution, 'and I don't care about these guards.'
Come on ... let me out ... let me kill...
'Shut up, Ther...' he muttered, then said alound to the stranger, 'I'm hunting a creature that crept in here.'

He looked down the rapier and towards the older man holding it, Steadler smiled and asked 'Let me pass?'
 
Seeing that young lad had no intention to fight but he was going to hunt some creature, Yaldamar replied while turning his back to Steadler...

Yaldamar: ''You may go and kill this creature, but not without me. I will accompany you to hunt the creature. But if you try to stab my back, you will end up stabbed.''

Yaldamar turns a bit so he can look at Steadler and awaits his reply.
 
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OOC: you DO know that you just made the floating creature, go past both me, Yaldy, AND his crew. without anyone noticing.
Try and be more careful later.
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"Hmm, this pirate dude isn't someone to trifle with. I'd better stay clear of him"
Jin thought to himself, as he lied on top of the building.
"Hmm, creature, what is that" He continued thinking \.

Then, as a flash from the sky.
"Perhaps there is money in this" He thought, as a grin grew on his lips.
He decided to follow them, since he could fly, in a way, he should be really silent.
And they shouldn't be able to hear him.
 
Woops Sorry Fox, *kicks self*
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'I have no intention of killing you, so if you want to come along .... do so.' he answered
But I want to .... I want to rip off his ...
'Look be quiet Thermesa,' he muttered as he walked past the older man.
Turning his head slightly, he removed his hood and black hair flopped out, and looked at the pirate with his grey eyes 'What's your name?'
 
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Steadler: ''What's your name?''

Yaldamar: ''My name doesn't matter now, but if you wanna know it its Yaldamar.''

Yaldamar makes three steps forward and says...

Yaldamar: ''We better go now, this city is already alerted by mine and my crews presence.''
 
Yaldamar. Steadler ... why, why did you allow him to join us ... I know you want me to kill him and drag him into an ally. Yes, now let me take contol, yes that's a good boy, ye fun yes. Steadler Give me the body!
'Be quiet, Thermesa,' Steadler snapped at her.
There was quiet before she asked, Why not kill him? He brought more people into the city for the Wraith to kill, but I supposed he evened that up by killing these guards. Kill, now, kill, now, kill, now, kill, now, kill, now ...
'SHUT UP THERMESA!' Steadler yelled as he began to walk toward the city.
 
Steadler: ''SHUT UP THERMESA!''

Yaldamar's face shows confusion after Steadler yelled. Thermesa? Who is Thermesa? Steadler began to walk and Yaldamar follows him and says...

Yaldamar: ''Whats wrong with you, lad? Oh, and I forgot to ask whats your name.''
 
Yaldamar: ''Whats wrong with you, lad? Oh, and I forgot to ask whats your name.''

'My name is Steadler... don't mind me,' he answered as he walked along. 'Oh, and if you want to know. Thermesa is ....'
Tell him if you dare .... Muh ha ha ... what to evil. Ahhh come on you know you really want to it will be fun, telling some one it will like our old days together getting hunted sharpened sticks. Remember that one time ...

'Thermesa is a ..... soul that lives inside my body .....' Steadler said very slowly ignoring Thermesa. 'She doesn't come out that much ...'

There I told him, now we wait Ther ... but I doubt he'll believe me<!-- / message -->
 
Hearing Steadler's reply about Thermesa, Yaldamar laughs silently while watching Steadler's back. Then he says...

Yaldamar: ''Meh, I saw even stranger things, like the man I fought that looked like an angel but in gray clothing. Turns out he was nothing more than a scientific experiment. So a body with two souls won't surprise me at all.''

Yaldamar sighs while following Steadler and looking at the moon.

Yaldamar: ''This world treasures a lot of strange things.''
 
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