Okay, now you've lost me....
The Tale of the Forgotten
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Basically, Felldoh is a good guy. Actually, it's not basic, it's very complicated.
By weaving Felldoh into the story the way I have, I've used a technique that ensures his importance. He is not of the grand importance that Vex or Saix are, for example, but the way I have manipulated the NPCs has guaranteed his involvement in the RP.
Felldoh is A 'Chosen One.' He is not THE 'Chosen One.' There are many 'Chosen Ones.' Chosen One is basically my way of saying what Vex, Felldoh, you, and some others are. In this sense, it adds prophecy to the story, but in a flexible way.
However, I have also manipulated the story so that Felldoh has a foot in both campsites (or footpaw, in this case). His morals define that he is on Vex and Zeria's side, but also define that he stay with Julius. The thing is, I am not going to reveal which side he joins, not yet. Why? Well, for starters, it adds to the story. Secondly, it provides excellent flexible material for you guys to RP with.
Basically, I have taken the straightforward storyline and manipulated it to entwine multiple destinies, and all these destinies lead to one of two events: Destruction of the Gem of Darkness or the loss of the Gem of Light. Whichever side prevails, Vex, Julius, Saix, and Felldoh are the huge keys. I have basically done what Julius has done, but in a much more complicated and less sinister way.
By weaving Felldoh into the story the way I have, I've used a technique that ensures his importance. He is not of the grand importance that Vex or Saix are, for example, but the way I have manipulated the NPCs has guaranteed his involvement in the RP.
Felldoh is A 'Chosen One.' He is not THE 'Chosen One.' There are many 'Chosen Ones.' Chosen One is basically my way of saying what Vex, Felldoh, you, and some others are. In this sense, it adds prophecy to the story, but in a flexible way.
However, I have also manipulated the story so that Felldoh has a foot in both campsites (or footpaw, in this case). His morals define that he is on Vex and Zeria's side, but also define that he stay with Julius. The thing is, I am not going to reveal which side he joins, not yet. Why? Well, for starters, it adds to the story. Secondly, it provides excellent flexible material for you guys to RP with.
Basically, I have taken the straightforward storyline and manipulated it to entwine multiple destinies, and all these destinies lead to one of two events: Destruction of the Gem of Darkness or the loss of the Gem of Light. Whichever side prevails, Vex, Julius, Saix, and Felldoh are the huge keys. I have basically done what Julius has done, but in a much more complicated and less sinister way.
If I'm actually coming back into the RP, how will I appear? Just a thought.
Ooookay......?
I sent you a PM of how your post should be Arthvader. I gave you the beginning of it, now you develop the rest of it. Just apply all you've learned in our battle and this RP will run smoothly.
Yaaay! Arth is coming back! *bows to Julius* thx for letting him come back!
Actually you should thank Lost Soul. He is Mr. Boss here. Thanks Lost Soul. 
Thankies, LS! We lurrrrrrv ya! 
The only thing I don't like about Hera's little old man story is how he created he "educated Taharka" in the ways of the Gems.
Note that Taharka has a master, an 'Unspoken' as it were. Taharka is also a Guardian (which I hinted at during the start, then bluntly put it quite recently). Therefore, Taharka would need no such tutelagé, seeing as he's spent his entirel lifetime with the Gems before their ultimate corruption/decimation.
Another thing, Julius, how have you achieved such a powerful military rank without the behest or authorisation from either the Imperial leader (Unspoken), or the High General (Taharka)? It doesn't make any sense. As far as I can see, it just... happened.
Zeria, how are you able to throw around these "Cross Slashes" without even appearing physically tolled or mildly exerted? You seem to fling this ability around like you would a dirty cloth. And you constantly asking questions in the middle of conversations? There was clearly interaction taking place when your character demanded somebody explain everything to her... which is just rubbish if you ask me.
Arth, I hope to god you don't mess the fuck up this time. It's been a pain in the arse being in this RP because of your awful posts.
Phew.
Also guys, I've had a talk with Shen and I'm going to remove her post in which she directly interacts with me. I'll obviously edit my post to reflect this change, so it'll be a little... well, I'll try to make it not-so uneventful or pointless. Relatedly, I think the main party should head for the next Shrine now. I think it houses the Water Gem.
Note that Taharka has a master, an 'Unspoken' as it were. Taharka is also a Guardian (which I hinted at during the start, then bluntly put it quite recently). Therefore, Taharka would need no such tutelagé, seeing as he's spent his entirel lifetime with the Gems before their ultimate corruption/decimation.
Another thing, Julius, how have you achieved such a powerful military rank without the behest or authorisation from either the Imperial leader (Unspoken), or the High General (Taharka)? It doesn't make any sense. As far as I can see, it just... happened.
Zeria, how are you able to throw around these "Cross Slashes" without even appearing physically tolled or mildly exerted? You seem to fling this ability around like you would a dirty cloth. And you constantly asking questions in the middle of conversations? There was clearly interaction taking place when your character demanded somebody explain everything to her... which is just rubbish if you ask me.
Arth, I hope to god you don't mess the fuck up this time. It's been a pain in the arse being in this RP because of your awful posts.
Phew.
Also guys, I've had a talk with Shen and I'm going to remove her post in which she directly interacts with me. I'll obviously edit my post to reflect this change, so it'll be a little... well, I'll try to make it not-so uneventful or pointless. Relatedly, I think the main party should head for the next Shrine now. I think it houses the Water Gem.
Because I haven't seen your post in ages XD. I am just a captain though, and I haven't seen you pointing someone with a higher rank in the manor 
I need a map to know where the hell is the rest of the army to regroup. We need to look for more gems.
I need a map to know where the hell is the rest of the army to regroup. We need to look for more gems.
>.< i'm soz if i have confused you.
you see, her Cross Slash is like a spark of her energy shot through her blades when ripped in an "X" formation. Thus, the attack only has enough "umph" to scar. It's not like she's pouring half of her energy into it each time. And second, when she's asking questions while fighting and other things are going on, she's enquiring as to why they are happening. Like, what started this, and who started it, and why did it start?...stuff like that.
Did that clarify anything? =/
you see, her Cross Slash is like a spark of her energy shot through her blades when ripped in an "X" formation. Thus, the attack only has enough "umph" to scar. It's not like she's pouring half of her energy into it each time. And second, when she's asking questions while fighting and other things are going on, she's enquiring as to why they are happening. Like, what started this, and who started it, and why did it start?...stuff like that.
Did that clarify anything? =/
Fair enough about the Cross Slash then, but this still eggs at me. You've done it quite a lot and it just... wouldn't happen when a heated conversation is taking place amongst other people. I just find it ridiculous.
XD LS I'm playing as Damian in this one. lol. just for future reference.
Well then make that clear in the post XD. Instead of sayinf just he all the time make sure it's evident that Damian is the one preforming the actions. In all honeslty I forgot so thats why I said sylar.
:devil: hehe my bad well here I go to make my nextpost as Damian. oh yeah BTW My Sylar character is Damian's brother anyways
He never is. You should know that by now. Give it a week or two, you'll have to boot him out again.
I know he won't disappoint me, if he does I'll be the first one to ask him to leave.
Well, expect to ask him before the RP's over with.
*sigh*
I hate saying this, because it sounds like I'm flaming, but it has to be said. Please note that none of this is intended to be personal or offensive or anything like that, and is only based off of observation.
Arth, you've REALLY got to pull up the slack. Not only are you declining again, but you're basically spitting in Julius and Red Fox's faces. They worked to help you out, and now you're going straight back into your old ways without a second thought. That is a major diss to Julius and Fox, because they put out the time to help you improve.
Seriously, you have to get better Arth. I don't want to see you kicked out of the RP, but if it comes to that, it will come to that. All decisions left to Soul, of course.
And on that note, Julius, in your last post you did a bit of god-modding yourself. I still haven't posted where Felldoh was going to be, but you assumed that he was in the infirmary. Would you mind editting that post a bit?
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Correction. Would you mind editting those last couple posts?
I hate saying this, because it sounds like I'm flaming, but it has to be said. Please note that none of this is intended to be personal or offensive or anything like that, and is only based off of observation.
Arth, you've REALLY got to pull up the slack. Not only are you declining again, but you're basically spitting in Julius and Red Fox's faces. They worked to help you out, and now you're going straight back into your old ways without a second thought. That is a major diss to Julius and Fox, because they put out the time to help you improve.
Seriously, you have to get better Arth. I don't want to see you kicked out of the RP, but if it comes to that, it will come to that. All decisions left to Soul, of course.
And on that note, Julius, in your last post you did a bit of god-modding yourself. I still haven't posted where Felldoh was going to be, but you assumed that he was in the infirmary. Would you mind editting that post a bit?
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Correction. Would you mind editting those last couple posts?
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