Original Vengeance Of The Dark {Discussion Thread}

[Ezio Auditore]

This here is the thread where ya'll can post your criticism/compliments and stuff Hope you enjoy, I'll be writing more and more so look forward to it

 

[Mitsuki]

First reply! Just finished reading Chapter 2. ^^ Good stuff there, Julius, although you made my character somewhat...annoying. =P But I can see myself acting that way truth be told. Anyway, it's a good intro of Julius and Mandi as well. Keep it up and can't wait to see the rest.

 

[Amizon]

Uh, Mits? It's Danny aka Rene Skylar ...

I'd been trying to get around to posting in here, but only just did now. Good first two chapters, I'm loving the whole Danny and Damon thing going on. Write more soon, por favor!

 

[Mitsuki]

What the...I don't know why I put 'Julius' there, but I know it's Danny because we talked about the story a bit before. xD I think I was thinking about the character Julius in the story and somehow got it all mixed up.

Anyway, great job, Danny! xD

 

[Bambi]

I love your character already Suki xDD

Good stuff Danny, had my complete attention there, great attention to detail too, I had it all pictured nicely in me old noggin

 

[Ezio Auditore]

Wow that really is a compliement if I even managed to capture your total attention Kelly

I'm writing up the next chapter now

 

[Rorolina Frixell]

*humps chapter*

Most sexiful, keep them coming Danneh

 

[Zeria Iiyasei]

XD Ohlawl.
Danneh! I lurveded the new chapter! Descriptive, yet not overdone. Great detail too. Gives me lots of mental pictures. I lewk forward to the next chapter, ne.

 

[Bambi]

Exciting new chapter Danny, I was really feeling the suspense there, keep it up dude!

I groaned when I saw the length of it I 'l admit, but it was a really easy read and didn't feel half as long as it looked xD

 

[Sabriel]

Me wants a part.

Anyways, great effort and detail put into it. I can see you have a really good talent at writing. Keep it up.

 

[Zeria Iiyasei]

^_____^ Great again, Danneh! Long, but interesting. Never a dull moment. I await the next chapter, ne. ^.^

 

[Amizon]

Brilliant two chapters, Danny! I loved how Vikki just strode in there and acted all enigmatic, but protective. Can't wait to read more!

 

[Amizon]

Just read the newest chapter and I loved Kelly's introduction! Please write more soon, mate.

 

[Amizon]

Nice to see you back from your temporary hiatus. I'd call myself being on one too, but that's obviously a strike you know full well about. Interesting chapter, so Sonny's in this chapter now? Brilliant action. Loved the jokes about Danny and Damon. Kelly seems so sure of herself. The story is becoming shrouded in mystery ... write more soon, friend!

 

[Eight]

Nice one lawl. I like how you described the battle, though I figured out you based Sonny's weapons and attacks of Dissidia Zidane.

More soon. 8F

 

[Bambi]

Haha you've got me to a T.... I don't have a stupid laugh though, I resent that comment

Liked the introduction of Sonny, awesome face off there, really enjoyed reading it. Don't leave it so long next time