Help on Bios!

Sorry. I haven't read the changes, I just read what you stated in the post ^^

Well. if you have done what I said
then I say post it here on FFF:
and post a link to the post in "Bio approval: Waiting list"
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/hall-of-warriors/bio-approval-waiting-list-9917.html

and await Hera ^^
he might have more things to state.

NOTE, I am NOT a moderator, I can NOT approve it.
I'm just here to help. Thus making it easier, or giving it a bigger chance to get approved.
 
Oh hey do you have to pass a test to be one, I'd like to try! I'm pretty thorough and though I haven't got the writer bone, I've got the editor bone definately!
 
Hey Hera I still plan on helping out with this. You can put me back on the list. the only reason I wasn't too involved before was because there was a period without anyone wanting help.
 
@ Sylar

Oh, lol, my bad xD Sorry bout that.

@ Fair_Game

Hmm. I don't know you too well, much less your critiquing skills. To give me an idea of the way you critique, choose an unapproved bio from here and send me a PM with a critique of it. I'll see how it is, and see if you can do a critique.

I wouldn't ask this, but I only heard of you today XD I've known the others for a while ^_^
 
Looks like I'll have to wait for the next one, Julius hit em all! He's a machine!

But yeah, I'd love to give 'er a go.

Quick question I've got a character concept (one I drew) but its kinda lacking personality, history etc.

I guess the concept was combine a Predator with an Insect and squash in some Iron Man. I was sitting in my thinking chair and started listing off whatever thoughts came to mind, and I ended up on the word 'lancer' so I started drawing a lance then the rest just came out of nowhere.

I think it looks pretty BA so I decided I really want to run with it. Any advice on how to flesh it out a bit? I'm hoping to make a dynamic character, and really really try not to make him overpowerful.

He's going to have futuristic armor, a lance that starts as a short sword with a long handle for easy storage, a antimatter shield and some way to perform a super jump, something like 'if he creates an antimatter barrier ontop of another it causes a miniature explosion'. Is any of this stuff allowed? Or is it too powerful?
 
well it depends on what effect the antimatter has. There are more than one ideas on antimatter and what happens when it comes in contact with matter. The super jump should be fine, but you will have to limit the height/ distance of the jump. and give some sort of idea of how high up the character can fall from without harm since you want to use the superjump. The whole lance from short sword is perfectly fine, but you'd have to explain how the transition is made.

if you need anyhelp with coming up with a name for the character or race I might be able to help you with a visual or better description.
 
o_O

Guys, maybe there's been a misunderstanding of the critiquing stuff ^_^

Have these people PMed you to critique? While I love what you've done, we should still wait for people to PM you or for them to post in here, asking for a critique. We can't just assume they want it, or they will start trying to get you guys for pseudo-modding ;)

Be careful kiddies :P
 
Hey I posted up my new character bio here : http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/hall-of-warriors/scs-bios-16897.html#post291484

I really need help figuring out if I made him too strong or not, and also I could really use some help with the personality section.

I tend to have a problem keeping my characters personality in check, they end up slipping and not acting the way they would...I think they start acting how I want them to and I really want to figure out a way to steer clear of that.

So yeah, any critiques are welcome!
 
Heh sorry, didn't know we needed to sign up to be be a critic. Is there any chance I could sign up? I have experience with RPGing as I was a mod for the section at two other major forums.
 
Be my guest ^_^ Hey, it means getting a girl onto the critiquers, FINALLY! The testosterone around here was killing me O_O
 
Well, I think that we are one of the few Forums that actually have an active RP Section. God knows, there are actually forums out there without one O.O I couldn't believe it, but hey, whatever floats their boat, right?
 
Defiantly, to be honest with you a good RPG section is what I need to be first interested in a forum...well that and the fact that this forum is FF related, but still lol. Its nice to see an active RPG section =D
 
Hey Shadow, I have a Nanaki club up and running here. It hasn't been posted in for ages, though...Wanna join ^_^
 
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