Help on Bios!

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this thread is when the member is aiming to improve the bio BEFORE it goes through the approval process.
This is also a good place to go for comments by yourself or vikki, as you dont have Bio approval prowers.
So, iv someone post in here, and not in the approval queue, I will only comment and nag, I will nto state if it is approved or not.
 
Mehaha said:
Can you sign me up for a comment the second time around?

http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/the-heroes/vanmagus-mortalia-31509.html#post570915

Also I was thinking of helping out when I got used to the site... So will their be requirements to being a critiquer? Obviously good with English but I think I'm good enough. But is there anything else?
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First of all, you have to decide if you want a critique, or send your char through the approval process.
Since you're posting it both for critique AND for approval.

Second, there is a simple 'test' for you to become a critiquer, you have to PM me a critique and I'll see then if you note the details I would note myself.
I will PM you with a link to a Character that Id like your 'nag' on, and we will see. ^^
 
Alumar Loren said:
First of all, you have to decide if you want a critique, or send your char through the approval process.
Since you're posting it both for critique AND for approval.

Second, there is a simple 'test' for you to become a critiquer, you have to PM me a critique and I'll see then if you note the details I would note myself.
I will PM you with a link to a Character that Id like your 'nag' on, and we will see. ^^
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Oh... Sorry that is how I did it last time and didn't know it was wrong well can we do what we did before crit till approved?

Well I made Byron's wife after a friend and maybe a child I'll test my hand at .critting but thanks. I crit on other sites and am somewhat good so after I have adjusted to the rules of FFF I'll be fine here.
 
Mehaha said:
Oh... Sorry that is how I did it last time and didn't know it was wrong well can we do what we did before crit till approved?

Well I made Byron's wife after a friend and maybe a child I'll test my hand at .critting but thanks. I crit on other sites and am somewhat good so after I have adjusted to the rules of FFF I'll be fine here.
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I have already sent you the PM, so just reply to that ^^

Fir the other thing I mentioned, in the future, it might be better if you opt for a critique OR approval ^^
Just one of them at a time, it makes it easier for us, as we are 5 people here, but I'm the only active one that have the power to approve or not ^^
Dont get me wrong, the others are good critiquers, but they are not allowed to approve a char.


EDIT:
I don't have time to do it now, I might not do it before Monday or so.
So it might give hte others time to crit it ^^
 
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Well, as of now I'm doing on my thing. I might finish it first before asking for critique.

But since I'm new here I'm really confused what

ORPG,URPG, and RPB. means,

Can somebody give me a quick overview of that three and how does it affect

your character?
 
ORP - Original Role Play: This is the term for Role Plays that are set in a world entirely of the creator's imagination.

URP - Unoriginal Role Play: This is the term for Role Plays that are based off a Final Fantasy game, or any book or movie, or anything that isn't completely thought up.

RPB - Role Play Battle: This is exactly what it sounds like, a battle between two or more characters played out in RPing style.

The main difference is between U/ORPs and RPBs. RPBs, by necessity, require much more stringent critiques of abilities, as they can directly affect the outcome of the battle. Certain things that can be let go in terms of U/ORPs cannot be in RPBs.
 
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I was wondering if someone can take a look at my character and let me know what you think, what should be changed, etc.

Robert Silvermoon

My character is a Burmecian (FF9 race) that is for primary use in RPB, but can also be used in FF9-based RPs or any rp where a Burmecian would be allowed to participate in.
 
well, i can give it a look, but its gonna be just suggestions. if you are looking for approvao, go to the proper thread.
 
Suggestions are what I want. Otherwise I would have posted in the approval thread. I want to polish my character out to have a better chance of being approved. Mostly if the character is balanced enough, or if there are any areas that need changing or improvement.
 
Tough luck on my behalf. i gotta go to macau, so i dont think i can help ya review. T,T. i am really sorry.
 
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