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Land of Dragons Sign-up and Discussion Thread

Well, I'm thinking of bringing back the Land of Dragons. In my absence last time (which will not occur again), the thread went through a major bomb. So, I'm back and reviving the wonderful Land of Dragons!

Here's the RP Link.

http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/worlds-gate/land-of-dragons-13503.html#post211996

Let's have some fun RPing!

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Name

Land of Dragons


RP Master

Hera Ledro - I give the orders around here lol. This RP is run by myself, and I will be checking in on individual characters from time to time, and will be an avid and active RPer.


Location

Anywhere in the universe. The RP starts off on Earth (though people do not need to start their section of the RP off on Earth), where the main storyline will be. However, this is a diverse RP so, if you so choose, your characters do not have to follow the storyline straight away, though they do have to tie into it eventually. I will be checking in on this and will PM you (or, if it's short enough, use an OOC comment) if I feel you are not going to tie into the storyline. If it gets too extreme, I will be forced to boot (no pressure though :D)


Storyline

This RP is set in a multitude of dimensions (based on the RPers' origins), though the main storyline will be on Earth, year 2007 by national records.

Over time, George W. Bush has gained notoriety, infamy, and power through political means. Now, he has assumed absolute control of America, and is in league with several people (human or not...) to control the Dragons, his main allies being Sukani Ledro and the Dark Dragon, Boromyo King. Now, a band of heros must unite to stop him. Will Bush reign supreme with his allies and control the entire Dragonic population? Or will the heros come to stop him? You choose in The Land of Dragons!

Basically, you are allowed to choose between Bush, the heroes, or the bystanders. However, you must eventually tie into the main storyline in some way.

Timeline

2007- (to be determined)
 
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I'll join again as well. Though I'll have to write my character in the new Bio format.
 
Alright. Well, once this ting gets re-approved, I'll get the rankings and stuff back up. It was fun while it lasted.

You guys know what happened to RPGirl?
 
Well, I'm gonna go ahead and make the RP then. It seems that peeps have no trouble with it coming back.

FROM NOW ON, THIS IS SIGN-UP AND DISCUSSION THREAD FOR THE RP Land of Dragons!

Bio Format

Well, let's keep the bios not so much brief, but not too long, k

If you don't want to make a new bio here, post a link to an APPROVED bio on these forums, and I will look it over. Be warned, my eyes aren't as easy to pull the wool over as the mods :D The bio rules here are the exact same as the ones the mods put down, so don't think I don't know what you are doing if you are trying to pull the wool over my eyes. I will be a little more lenient with god-modding, however, and poeple can be made SLIGHTLY more powerful here than in the other RPs

Name:
Age:
Height:
Weight:
Build:

Class

Well, these are the classes available, and each one has a description. If you are posting a link to a bio, you need no put this part in, as I will be able to discern whether or not it can be classified as one of these.

Warrior - A fighter who fights in melee, solely and purely. Favours melee weapons such as swords (no type limit), hammers, axes, shields, daggers, cutlasses, etc. Rarely, if ever, uses magic or ranged weaponry.

Ranger - An archer who favours ranged fighting, primarily with longbows, shortbows, crossbows, recurve bows, flatbows, guns (no type limit), throwing knives, etc. Rarely, if ever, resorts to using melee or magic attacks.

Spellcaster - Pretty self-explanatory really. A mage who prefers fighting with magic, and uses weapons only to defend himself at close range, more often staves and wands than not, though other melee weapons can be used as well. Spells are mainly categorized as Saturn Spells (spells concerning lightning/electricity), Jupiter Spells (spells concerning wind and air), Mercury Spells (spells concerning water and ice), Mars Spells (Spells concerning fire), and Venus Spells (Spells concerning earth and plants). A person can have complete control over all of these elements, decisive elements, or mix some to make different spells. rarely ever uses ranged or melee attacks unless defending themself, and is extremely weak at said defense.

Chi Monk - this is a person who favours energy attacks, concerning the manipulation of Chi to attack one's foe. So long as the attack originates from the body, there is no limit to the ways that one can manipulate the Chi.

Spellwarrior - uses melee and magic attacks evenly, with equal skill.

Magehunter - uses ranged and magic attacks to an equal degree of skill.

Knight - uses ranged and melee attacks to an equal degee of skill.

Magemonk - uses magic and energy attacks to an equal degree of skill.

Blastwarrior - uses energy and melee attacks to an equal degree of skill.

Monkhunter - uses ranged and energy attacks to an equal degree of skill.

Spellknight - uses ranged, melee, and magic attacks to an equal degree of skill

Surgehunter - uses ranged, magic, and energy attacks to an equal degree of skill

Powerblaster - uses melee, magic, and energy attacks with equal skill

Powerhunter - uses melee, ranged, and energy attacks with equal skill

Dragon Warrior - uses melee, ranged, energy, and magic attacks with equal skill


Description

A brief description of your character's appearance, no more than 4 paragraphs long (each paragraph consisting of at least 4 sentences).

Personality

Self explanatory. A brief description of how your character acts, portrays others, etc.

Fighting Style

A brief, 2 paragraph description of how your character prefers to fight.

Weapons

You can have a maximum of 2 medium sized weapons (i.e. longsword and longbow) or 1 large weapon (a greathammer, for instance). Give brief descriptions of each, from there appearance to what they are made of.

Magic (only if you use magic)

Describe what kind of spells your character uses in battle, from defensive to offensive. you cna vary with your elemental attacks, such as having all five elements. That is allowed.

Energy Attacks (only if you use Chi-based attacks)

A basic description of what energy attacks your character uses and how they use them, what they look like, and everything like that. Please note, you must describe what your attacks look like, and your attacks in the RP are limited to this.

History

This part should be one of the longer sections of your Bio, with a history of your character and his companions (if he has any).

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Well, that's it. You CAN have more than one character in this RP, and they don't have to be part of the same storyline. However, you can only have a maximum of four characters.

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Here's my bio. Notice that it's a link to a bio approved (on Page three of my Bio page) on these forums, and not necessarily in the exact same format. My guy is a Powerblaster.

http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/hall-of-warriors/hera-ledros-character-bios-8249-page2.html
 
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Actually I feel like playing a different character then last time.
Basically she's a caster, he main arsenal of spells involve daemonology (summoning and controlling daemons), illusions and sensory manipulation, teleportation and shadow manipulation.

It should be mentioned she's not really evil though her methods are sometimes a bit questionable.
 
Oh my God I completely forgot about the RP!!

Ok I will join again even though I won't use Aiden this time. My new RP Character is: "Maximilian Angelus Fortia Regisheart"

Angelus= Angel
Fortia= strength
Regis= Kingdom

===~+Land of Dragon's Sign up requirement+~===
Name: Maximilian Angelus Fortia Regisheart
Class: Spell Knight
Position: Master of the Regisheart Mansion
Race: Human/Vampire (vampirism allows him to take more damage than normal human beings)


Name: Maximilian Angelus Fortia Regisheart
Pronunciation: (Max-sci-mi-lya Forth-ia Reigis-heart)
Date of Birth: October 1<SUP>st,</SUP> 1989
Nicknames: Maximus Fortia Regis
Job/Class: Scholar and Warrior, Master of the Regisheart Household
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Build: <?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:eek:ffice:smarttags" /><st1:place w:st="on">Normal</st1:place> Athletic Build
Weight: 178 pounds
Height: 5' 11"
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Emerald Green
Skin Color: Caucasian
Complexion: Light Tanned
Position: Brother-in-law of Julius, Dayanne’s Brother.
Fighting Style: Ambidextrous swordsman and weapons’ expertise.
Weapon: Medium Sword and Handgun

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===Medium Sword/Weapon’s Name: “Sentire mihi tristitia” (Feel my sorrow)
*Description: A four feet long 1 feet and a half wide medium sword specially crafted by the Regisheart Family. A beautiful image of a rose surrounded by an angel wing covers half of both sides of the blade’s surface. Two silver wings serve as the hand guard of the blade and they are beautifully decorated with gold. The hilt of the blade was made of the iron, covered with wood and coated with a thin cape of cold while being enveloped with red silk.
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The sword has a chained attached to the hilt of the sword with an emblem of two angel wings surrounding a heart. The heart has the following inscription “Aeternus amoris mihi pretiosus angelus, Dareisha” (Eternal love for my precious angel, Dareisha) carved on one side. On the other side, a small red ruby is placed on the center of the heart.
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==Handgun/Weapon’s name: Broken Heart: “Mihi amor non tenere finalis” (My love doesn’t have an end)
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The Broken Heart is a 3 feet long handgun coated with silver and beautifully decorated with images of roses and wings. The hilt of the gun is covered with wood at both sides and it has the emblem of the Regisheart Family carved on its surface. Also the following inscription “Illa memoria de mihi juramentum ad mi aternus amoris” (The memory of the oath to my eternal love) was carved on the right side of the cannon of the gun. (hmmm something about this description is not right…..oh well…..)
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Birthplace: Birthplace: Aldabra
=====Aldabran Kingdom<st1:place w:st="on"><ST1:P</st1:place>=====
The climate of the Aldabra Region is mild, with slightly cold winters and warm summers. The forests scattered across this region are extense and all famous for the quality of the wood of the trees that grow here. Caves and other natural wonders are most likely to be found near the mountain terrain, and small temples can be found at the highest parts of these mountains.
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Current Residence: Lake Amaria, Regisheart Mansion<ST1:P
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The crystal clear waters that flow through Lake Amaria<ST1:P are known for its astounding beauty and elegance. The waterfall which supplies pure water to the lake is elegantly decorated with the ever present rainbow that comes across the waterfall from the left and into the water itself. The sunlight which shines marvelously on the water’s surface makes up such a romantic scenario in which many couples were known to fall in love. Next to it, the imposing trees and mountains serve as a perfect addition to the <st1:place w:st="on">Lake</st1:place>’s environment, as if God itself has painted a beautiful scenario on the surface of the Earth.

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Next to the lake, there’s a mansion which belongs to the Fortia Regisheart Family. Inside of it, the young master of the mansion resides waiting patiently for the return of a lost love.

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The mansion, which is marvelously constructed with the finest wood and best materials around the world, is close enough to the waterfall and covers part of the wood surrounding Lake Amaria.
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The mansion has twenty rooms, all of them beautifully decorated with the finest furniture. The main hall has an elegantly built, wooden stairway with two dragons grabbing a shield with the insignia of the Regisheart Family at both sides of the base of the stairway. The second floor is much simpler, yet it retains the nobility that could be seen on the first floor. Five more room can be found here, as well as a study in which the best pieces of literature and renowned art around the world can be found, the master’s chambers which is the most elegant room of the mansion possessing the best signs of architecture, fine furniture, and such.
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First Impression: Maximilian is well known for his bad tendency to break close friendships quite easily due to his cold behavior. Not allowing anyone to get close enough to become his friend, Maximilian is most likely found alone starting at the floor with his emerald green eyes filled with sorrow.
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Even though his eyes can be seen filled with such deepening hatred towards everyone, Maximilian is not a bad man; instead he refuses to allow others to hurt his feelings. He was once betrayed and abandoned by his friends, and now he doesn’t have the heart to bear such loss again.
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Appearance:
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Maximilian is a young man with an athletic build due to his military training since the tender age of 13. His hair is black and falls before his forehead covering the left side of his face and falls over his shoulders as well. His chin is thin, quite elfish and his eyes are lightly sharp. His eyebrows are thin and their color is silver white. His lips are thin and he rarely smiles main reason why he has always has that cold hearted expression on his face.
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Maximilian wears a chainmail made of both iron and silver which covers his torso underneath a white shirt made with the finest materials which are silk, gold and silver. He also wears a long red leather coat which he leaves opened to allow free movement during combat. This red leather coat has provides some protection to Maximilian’s shoulders due to the iron shoulder pads attached to it. The shoulder pads were coated with silver and many elegant designs of dragons and roses were marvelously carved on the surface of the shoulder pads.
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Maximilian wears black silk pants while wearing light chain leggings underneath to provide some protection to his legs. Chains and emblems are attached to Maximilian’s belt, one of them being the necklace once worn by Maximilian’s eternal love, Lady Dareisha.
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His boots are made of dark brown leather with some silver plates covering Maximilian’s feet in order to provide some protection against possible attacks towards his lower body.
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The sheath of his sword is attached to the left side of his belt while his dual silver handguns are kept inside his leather coat, one in the left and the other in the right.
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He also wears white gloves which provide some protection against scratches made by swords and other sharp objects.
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Distinguishing Characteristics: Maximilian always carries a red rose which he holds elegantly near his chin with his left hand. Also he wears a silver necklace which has the insignia of the Regisheart Family, a dragon surrounding with it wings a shield carved with the initials of Maximilian’s Family name “FR”. Also he wears a silver ring on his left hand with the engraving “Aeternus amoris pora mihi angelus, Dareisha” which means “Eternal love for my angel, Dareisha”. (My first attempt to write in Latin, I sure hope I did well if not, I sure hope Angelus Mortis doesn’t kill me for doing an horrible mistake XD)
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Hobbies: Even though he has the responsibility to watch over the Regisheart Household and his family’s mansion, Maximilian has the time to dedicate himself to reading fine pieces of literature, art, and poetry. He is also known for his fine swordsmanship skills and for most likely to be found near flower fields in which roses can be seen.
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Personality: Maximilian is quite cold hearted and a loner since he has the tendency to confine himself deep within the loneliness of his study. Never allowing anyone to get deep inside his heart, Maximilian’s soul is like a garden left to dry due to the harshness of life. His friends have long since abandoned him, one of the main reasons he cursed “love” and “friendship” due to the large amount of suffering he had to endure after he was forced to get separated from his eternal love, Dareisha.
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A deepening hatred threatens to eat away his soul, and Maximilian fears the sole idea of becoming a living dead, lacking both happiness and feelings, the things that makes him human. During the night, he cries bitterly when he remembers the happy moments he spent with “her” and to the idea of knowing that those moments are long since gone.
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Ambitions: His only ambition is to pursue his true happiness, his love fearing neither the price he must pay nor his fate as long as he is capable of feeling “true love” one last time before the end.
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Concerns/setbacks: Maximilian fears the sole idea of dying alone therefore he pursues happiness vehemently even though fate has not smiled to him and thus he is condemned to sorrow and regret.
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Likes: Maximilian enjoys a good conversation rather than a pointless battle. In the past he had countless conversations with his fiancée but since he was abandoned unexpectedly by her, he shut himself up and refuses to open his heart once again.
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Dislikes: Loneliness, even though he can be quite contradictory because he fears the sole idea of dying alone, with no one left to miss him.
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Intelligence: He is quite intelligent and trusted by his late father as the only administrator of his family’s wealth. The Regisheart Household now enjoys a period of greatness and nobility that could be compared to the life of the Royal Family.
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History: Since he was born, Maximilian was destined for the greatness. Being part of one of the wealthiest families, Maximilian was trained by the best warriors and was tutored by the greatest of scholars. As a result, he became highly intelligent and had many objectives such as becoming a renowned scholar since the tender age of 11. Even though he was raised as a king, Maximilian’s heart was empty and his soul was dry.
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He never had the chance to make any friends thus becoming a cold hearted young man. Suddenly he meets his “true” friends at the age of 16, and among these friends he fell in love with Dareisha.
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Sadly, he never had the chance to confess his love to her before she was sent to another state. Tormented by his lack of courage and the hatred he felt towards his cowardice, Maximilian entered a state of self destructive mood. His friends were forced to leave him behind due to life issues and thus causing much sadness to Maximilian. As a result, Maximilian blames himself for not being able to confess his love to Dareisha and bid farewell to his friends.
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In a desperate search for answers of why he was not able to fully express his feelings, Maximilian cursed himself, “love” and “friendship, and ended up sealing his sad fate, to walk alone without feeling “true love” once again.
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Abilities:
Main Ability:
*Overdrive: Allows Maximilian to unleash one of the following attacks while using a large amount of magic.
====Limit Brakes====
“Angelus de ille Finalis” (Angel of the End, my second attempt to write in Latin XD)
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Maximilian picks a rose from the ground and tenderly kisses it while closing his eyes. Suddenly his surroundings are engulfed by deep pitch black darkness. From within the darkness Maximilian’s eyes glow deep emerald green while he smiles. The light of the fool moon cuts through the darkness illuminating both Maximilian and his opponent (s). Eventually Maximilian unsheathes his blade and runs past his opponent(s), dealing countless attacks against his enemy (enemies). Out of the darkness, a gigantic blade rises from the shadows and slices through them while Maximilian jumps high into the air and deals countless shots with his dual handguns. In the end he falls on the ground, picks the rose once again and tenderly kisses the rose while the darkness clears out revealing the recent massacre.
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“Rosa Mortis” (rose of death)
Maximilian picks his rose and tenderly smells it while smiling. After starting coldly towards his opponents, Maximilian tosses the rose towards his opponent(s), unsheathes his sword and deals a devastating diagonal shockwave that cuts through the rose and pierces his enemy (enemies).
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“Redemptionis: Ille Grandis Finalis” (Redemption. The Great Finale)
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Maximilian stares at the ground while a single tear flows from his right eye and falls on the ground. Then he raises his head slowly starting coldly towards his enemies. In a release of everlasting rage, Maximilian picks a rose from the ground and kisses it while pronunciating the name of his lost love.
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“Please forgive me….I can’t bear the suffering of living without you. Here and now I cast away my life and sentence my enemies to have a taste of eternal horror and sorrow.”
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After this, Maximilian unsheathes his sword with his right hand and draws one of his handguns with the other. Then he rushes towards his enemies in a burst of emotions and slashes fiercely towards all of them, dealing countless blows randomly with his weapons.
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In the end, exhausted and with not a single drop of energy left, Maximilian releases and inhuman howl and unleashes a devastating horizontal shockwave by swinging his sword from left to right. After that he quickly aims his gun his enemy and pulls the trigger, thus releasing a powerful fireball which consumes everything in a cataclysm of flames.
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Finally he falls on his knees, and stares sadly at the ground while the last ounce of strength abandons him. Suddenly the memory of his reunion with his lost love flashes through his mind and then he faints.
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Other Abilities (General for RP Characters):
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*Dual Wielding: Allows Maximilian to dual wield weapons such as swords and guns. Though his expertise is similar to his brother-in-law Julius, Maximilian is better than him in terms of swordsmanship.
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*Hidden Power: Maximilian’s hidden power as a mage allows him to cast powerful magic, though his power pales in comparison to Julius Argexis’ spell casting abilities.
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*Black Magic <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">LV</st1:City></st1:place> 1: Allows Maximilian to use Novice Black Magic Spells such as:
-Fire: deals fire damage on a single target.
-Blizzard: deals ice damage on a single target.
-Thunder: deals thunder damage on a single target.
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*White Magic LV1: Allows Maximilian to use Novice White Magic Spells such as:
-Cure: Heals all wounds with a holy green light, though it needs time to experience its full effects. Can only be used once per battle.
-Esuna: Remove all status ailments.
-Holy: Deals heavy light magic on foes. Effective for undead and fiend type monsters.
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*Arcane Magic LV1: Allows Maximilian to use Arcane Spells such as:
-Death: Instantly kills an opponent but due to its low level, the miss percentage is high.
-Scourge: Deals non elemental damage to an opponent and inflicts poison which deals continuous light damage on a foe.
-Meteor: Crushes opponents with the power of stars. Due to its basic state, the spell can only use a minimal fraction of its full potential.
-Dark: Deals dark magic upon foes.
 
Maximilian Angelus Fortia Regisheart - [NOT APPROVED]


I must admit, that's a good bio. However (sorry to be so picky)


The spell names are unoriginal XD Thunder, Blizzard, Esuna, all way too FF. I'd suggest giving them original names, or not giving them names, such as what i did with mine.


I'm a little sceptical with the Cure ability. While It would be acceptable if it could heal you by 50% or 60%, a full heal is just a little bit too much. I'd say maximum of an additional 75%. In other words, make it so that it heals you back by 75%, so if you are 25% health or higher, it will fully heal you.


Esuna's a little irrelevant. According to my understanding of RP rules here, status ailments can't be done so...yeah, a little unnecessary. you can keep it if you want, just in case we send an NPC to poison you LOL


Once again, Limit breaks are too unoriginal, and are technically copyrighted. Calling them something like Ultimate Attacks or Finishing Moves would be much more acceptable.


Also with context to Limit Breaks, we have to keep an open mind in terms of the accuracy of your attacks and the reflexes of your opponent.


Julius Argexis said:
dealing countless attacks against his enemy (enemies)
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Very common phrasing in your abilities. :P The phrasing, whether the attack in itself is avoidable/inaccurate, makes it sound as though there is no way that the person can avoid it, and that it is a skill in which deals insane damage with no chance of dodging. Changing it to something such as:

swinging several times wildly
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would be much more acceptable. In this way, it leaves an opening for you to miss or your opponent to dodge, and can't be classified as god-modding. While it's good to make your attacks strategically accurate, it's not quite fair for you to deal several attacks. The 'deal' part alone makes it sound unavoidable, as dealing something with a weapon is actually hitting them.

I have no problem with Rosa Mortis though, that one was well done.

Other than those things, it's a good bio. Just change those around as per my suggestions (not to the letter, but in essence) and I'm sure I would have no trouble approving it :D
 
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Ok, I'll work on it Hera. Thanks for your suggestions.


Also "Finishing Moves" is used in DBZ Tenkaichi 1 and 2 (according to my versions) , ok I'll change the name...


Added: This is the part you asked me to change....

*Side Note: Most of the spell won't be used in every Role Play, only the basic defensive/offensive spells.

New:

Abilities:
==Main Ability: Final Judgment==
*”Destruere illas catenas quid nos aptare” /”Destroy the chains that bind us”: Allows Maximilian to unleash one of the following attacks while using a large amount of magic.

====Dictum ====
“Angelus de ille Finalis” (Angel of the End, my second attempt to write in Latin XD)

Maximilian picks a rose from the ground and tenderly kisses it while closing his eyes. Suddenly his surroundings are engulfed by deep pitch black darkness. From within the darkness Maximilian’s eyes glow deep emerald green while he smiles. The light of the fool moon cuts through the darkness illuminating both Maximilian and his opponent (s). Eventually Maximilian unsheathes his blade and runs past his opponent(s), swinging his sword several times in a burst of anger, aiming his attacks accurately at his enemy (enemies). Out of the darkness, a gigantic blade rises from the shadows and slices through them while Maximilian jumps high into the air and deals countless shots with his dual handguns. In the end he falls on the ground, picks the rose once again and tenderly kisses the rose while the darkness clears out revealing the recent massacre.

“Rosa Mortis” (rose of death)
Maximilian picks his rose and tenderly smells it while smiling. After starting coldly towards his opponents, Maximilian tosses the rose towards his opponent(s), unsheathes his sword and deals a devastating diagonal shockwave that cuts through the rose and pierces his enemy (enemies).

“Redemptionis: Ille Grandis Finalis”” (Redemption. The Great Finale)

Maximilian stares at the ground while a single tear flows from his right eye and falls on the ground. Then he raises his head slowly starting coldly towards his enemies. In a release of everlasting rage, Maximilian picks a rose from the ground and kisses it while pronunciating the name of his lost love.

“Please forgive me….I can’t bear the suffering of living without you. Here and now I cast away my life and sentence my enemies to have a taste of eternal horror and sorrow.”

After this, Maximilian unsheathes his sword with his right hand and draws one of his handguns with the other. Then he rushes towards his enemies in a burst of emotions and slashes fiercely towards all of them, unleashing a powerful barrage of attacks randomly with his weapons.

In the end, exhausted and with not a single drop of energy left, Maximilian releases and inhuman howl and unleashes a devastating horizontal shockwave by swinging his sword from left to right. After that he quickly aims his gun his enemy and pulls the trigger, thus releasing a powerful fireball which consumes everything in a cataclysm of flames.

Finally he falls on his knees, and stares sadly at the ground while the last ounce of strength abandons him. Suddenly the memory of his reunion with his lost love flashes through his mind and then he faints.


Other Abilities:

*Dual Wielding: Allows Maximilian to dual wield weapons such as swords and guns. Though his expertise is similar to his brother-in-law Julius, Maximilian is better than him in terms of swordsmanship.

*Eye of Wisdom: allows Maximilian to understand ancient texts and scriptures. It also provides Maximilian with the power to see farther than any normal human at the cost of some magical strength.

*Hidden Power: Maximilian’s hidden power as a mage allows him to cast powerful magic, though his power is slightly weaker than Julius Argexis’ spell casting abilities.


*Book of Wisdom: Maximilian’s enchanted book includes most of the spells that were forbidden a long time ago by the ancients. Though he was not a master mage himself, the blood of ancients and his hidden power allowed Maximilian to learn the ancient wisdom hidden within the pages of this old book. The book was written in Latin, main reason why the spells must be pronounced in this language in order to fully unleash their powers.

“Flamma Antiqŭus” (Ancient Flame) : allows Maximilian to call upon the powers of fire to cast a powerful wall of flames to shield him against enemy attacks. The wall fades after enduring a small amount of time.

“Ferox Infernum” (Fierce Inferno) : allows Maximilian to call upon the powers of fire to cast a powerful wave of fire. The wave takes the form of a gigantic sword heading towards Maximilian’s opponents. The sword is then swung mindlessly several times and disappears after a few moments.

“Pluvĭa de Vita” (Rain of life) : allows Maximilian to call upon the power of water and unleash a healing rain which replenishes his strength. The rain also slowly heals Maximilian’s wounds and the regenerating effect disappears after a few minutes.

“Parāre Tempus” (Stop Time) : allows Maximilian to call upon the powers of time to slow all movement around him in order to dodge attacks which would be nearly impossible to avoid normally. The effects last for mere seconds.


“Relampadāre Terribilis” (Terrible Lightning) : Maximilian unleashes the powers of lightning to cast a powerful thunderstorm upon his enemies. The spells randomly aims to the nearest enemy and it remains as an active spell for a 30 seconds.


“Sphata de Gelum” (Sword of Ice) : with the powers of ice, Maximilian freezes all water based spells around him and uses them to create a powerful attack resembling a huge sword. The sword is then used to strike the ground freezing everything around him. The effect of the spell lasts a few seconds and is mainly used against slow enemies.


“Anĭma Immortālis” (Immortal Soul) : allows Maximilian to summon a powerful magical shield with the powers of light and darkness. The shield protects him against elemental spells.

“Lux Divīnus” (Divine Light) : a powerful light is summoned from the heavens to illuminate the area. Also the spell has a devastating harmful effect on the creatures of darkness.

“Iudicĭum Obscūrus” (Dark Judgment) : a pitch black darkness surrounds the nearby areas and absorbs light based energies. Also the spell has a devastating harmful effect on creatures whose elemental attribute is light.

“Iudicĭum Finālis” (Final Judgment) : Maximilian’s most powerful spell. With the powers of light and darkness, Maximilian summons twelve magical swords, six swords of light and six swords of darkness, which remain spinning around Maximilian. Suddenly the swords begin to spin fiercely around Maximilian and then they head towards the heavens and come rushing down towards his opponents. The swords keep swinging wildly until they fade away after a one minute.
 
Very well done. Definitely [APPROVED]

The only suggestions I would make now is to simply state how long some of the skills last. Skills such as the Immortal Soul should have time limits, as protecting from elemental damage is a little powerful if done for the whole battle. You need not change this, however, as I am sure that good RPers will figure out ways around this.

Very good. Shall I start the actual RP now? I think I should :D

On a side note, I will admit that 'Finishing Moves' is used in Tenkaichi, as well as other games. it is just such a commonly used name nowadays, and is paraphrased so much daily, that while it isn't original, it can't be considerred unoriginal either.
 
Yeah, I'll wait for Frenzy and Drachnon. They were active in the old LoD, along with RPGirl. Wonder how she is, I think I'll PM her later, or e-mail maybe.

Oh, and i made a mistake. Tenkaichi/Tenkaichi 2 use skills called Blast 1, Blast 2, and Ultimate Blast. It's the Budoukais (1-3) that use Finishing Moves/Ultimate Moves.

As per the suggestions, no biggy. I'm happy to help. It's my job as RP Master of the Land of Dragons, isn't it? lol
 
Don't forget about yours truly either!

I'm definitely up for joning! However, I like Drachnon, am extraordinarily busy.
I'll see what I can do as far as bringing Macon back
 
I would like to use this RPBio as well:
(Oh God now I am like Hera writing really LOOOOOOOONG RP Bios.....which is good I suppose)


Name: Julius Argexis Silverwing Van Retsimar
Pronunciation: (Juo-lious Ar-geckxis- Silverwing- Vaan- Reit-si-maar)
Date of Birth: Mach 27, 2045
Job/Class: Swordsman
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Build: Athletic, moderately defined, muscular structure.
Height: 5’ 9”
Weight: 185 Pounds
Hair Color: Sienna --> like this -->Hair Color Example
Eye Color: Greenish Grey
Skin Color: Light Tanned
Complexion: Sharp, quite young and elfish (erm I am not good with this one)
Position: Judge Magister
Fighting Style: both Dual and Single Sword Wield Disciplines
Weapon: Twin Long Swords, handgun, and a small dagger.
===Descriptions: the swords are cross shape 4 feet long swords. The blades of the swords are 6 inches wide and have numerous engravings of roses and angels. There is an emblem with the shape of a lion holding a shield engraved with Julius’ family name attached at the end of the hilt of the sword.

Julius’ dagger is a memento of his fiancée Dayanne and a constant reminder of this forbidden love. The dagger has a 1 feet long 3 inches wide blade decorated with a hand guard in the shape of a rose. The hilt of the blade is coated with silver and golden lines all around it. Also there’s a heart shape emblem surrounded by roses attached at the end of the hilt of the dagger.

Julius’ handgun is coated with silver and has Julius’ family name carved on its surface in gold. The handle of the handgun is made of iron surrounded by the finest wood available, coated with silver with an emblem of in the shape of an “S” attached to the end of the handle.




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Birthplace: Aldabra
=====Aldabran Kingdom=====
++Orsteinsbrought Castle: Most likely known as Castle Silverwing, a magnificent architecture of medieval times slightly influenced by the many cultures that were related to the Silverwing Family. The castle's surroundings are vast plains, with Vermillion Forest to the west, the Mount Orland to the north and the Lake Amaria to the southwest. The climate of the Aldabra Region is mild, with slightly cold winters and warm summers. The forests scattered across this region are extense and all famous for the quality of the wood of the trees that grow here. Caves and other natural wonders are most likely to be found near the mountain terrain, and small temples can be found at the highest parts of these mountains.
• The Main Hall: The main hall of Castle Silverwing is by far one of the best built architectures since ancient times. This magnificent structure has the splendor of a noble palace yet retaining the strong impression of a powerful castle. Not only its walls and the pillars that sustain the structure of the castle are made of the most exquisite concrete, but also the floor is made of well polished marble. A red fur carpet goes across the room in the middle leading to the Royal Stairway. Several rooms are located at the sides of the hall, and fountain 6 ft wide is located in the center of the hall, beautifully decorated with statues of angels and knights depicting the story of the Silverwing Family. The water that flows through the statues and into the fountain itself is so clear that it was once said that those who saw their reflections on the surface of the water would eventually see through their own souls.
• The Stairway: The royal stairway was built by a group of the greatest architects of their time. The steps were made with the best wood available while the other components were beautifully decorated with marble, gold and silver. Two statues of lions carrying a shield with the name of Julius' family engraved on its surface are located at both sides of the base of the stairs, as if they were expecting a visitor. A red fur carpet was also used here to cover the steps of this magnificent stairway which leads to the upper floors.
• The Clock Tower: The opposite of most of the exquisite rooms of the castle. The materials used here were rather strong and lacked elegance, yet they went accordingly with the scenario of the tower. The Clock Tower can only be accessed from the west side, and it is most likely used as the old throne room when the castle was first built. After Julius' father ascension to the throne and further on becoming the new master of Castle Silverwing , the Clock Tower was abandoned and left to decay. Even now the old decorations of the throne room beautifully decorated with Gothic like architecture are as amazing as they were in their times. The view from the last floor of the Clock Tower is almost unbelievable since it looks more like a dream scene taken out of a fairy tale. The Clock Tower lies among the clouds and after the sunset, the stars glow amazingly creating the perfect romantic scenery
• The Library: The Great Library of Orsteinsbrougth was built after the Clock Tower was finished. Not only it has a vast collection of books which contain the history of many lost civilizations, but it also serves as the resting place of many archaic spell books. Most of the spells hidden within these texts are thousand years old, and they require some time for skilled magicians to master their secrets. The Library consists of three sections, a main lobby, The Chemistry and Ancient Arts Room, and the second floor in which more books can be found.
• The Throne Room: By far the most exquisite room of the castle. The Throne Room consists of a gigantic hall in which the King's Throne is located at the farthest part of the room with a red carpet decorated with the emblem of the Silverwing on its surface leading to the throne. The Shield of the Silverwing Family lies behind the throne high above where everyone can see it. At the sides the glass windows decorated with images of knights and dragons give the impression of being inside a dream.
• The Rooms (in general): The rooms in general were made in the same manner, besides the Royal Family Chambers which contain much more luxury. The rooms have huge beds next to the west side of the room. The small table made of the finest wood decorated with the statues of dragons and lions lie to the right side next to the window from which you can see the garden. The rooms also contain a bathroom, a study in which some books were arranged for the visitor to enjoy, and the balcony. Seven rooms are located at the left side of the castle, and the other seven are at the right side. The second room however, has the rooms of the knights, four more rooms for special guests, and the Royal Chambers.
Current Residence: Orsteinsbrougth Castle, but he is not likely to be found here since he is more likely to be found in the nearby towns.

First Impression: At first, Julius may appear as a lonely young man whose heart has been broken far too many times. The way he speaks with such formality and the way he treats women kindly earned him the title of "Sleeping Lionheart". Many times he was known for the way he enjoys romanticism, and this can be seen much in his last relationship with Lady Dayanne. For Julius, even the smallest detail can change the meaning of a romantic night, main reason why he always carries roses with him. His eyes are rather cold, and much suffering can be seen if you were to stare at them for a brief moment. For some unknown reason, when Julius is with Dayanne, the romantic "Romeo" he has inside takes over him and he somehow becomes a romantic dreamer, writing poetry and speaking with such formality, that women are slowly charmed by the sweet yet cold glint of his eyes.

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Appearance: Julius has light tanned skin, silver hair and greenish grey sharp eyes. He has an athletic build due to his constant training during the first few years as a Judge Apprentice, continuous Swordsmanship Training, and Field Exams. He’s five feet and six inches tall, sharp facial expressions and small ears. He wears his official judge magister armor with some slight changes on his helmet, which looks more like the head of a dragon. His armor is beautifully decorated with small precious stones on the armor parts that cover both his elbows, shoulders and knees.

==Face:
=Nose: small and pointy at the tip much like an elf but slightly bigger.
=Ears: small
=Eyes: small and sharp quite elfish.
=Eyebrows: medium size eyebrows with the shape of a wide V turned upside down.
Much like this--- )
=Jaw: small and slightly round at the end (must work on this)
=Mouth: small and the lips are thin.

Distinguishing Characteristics: A vertical scar on the center of his forehead. A small necklace with the expression written in Latin "Poena funesta natus" (Painful Tainted birth).

Hobbies: Writer, Argexis is well known for his skills as both a writer and an excellent swordsman.

Personality: Not the typical average teenager that you can find around. Argexis is quite a loner due to his constant training and excessive strategic and scientific studies. He has the tendency of blaming himself for everything negative and tends to hurt himself with excessive training. He normally keeps his inner pain, whether if it's physical or emotional pain to himself. His father feared him for how cruel Argexis could become if by any reason Argexis were to lose control over his actions.

Julius is usually known for his imperfect socializing skills and he has a tendency of avoiding large crowds and other similar situations which involves huge amount of people. Quite stubborn, Julius is the type of guy who doesn’t change his mind one he has an objective, even though there is only one person in this world who can make him change his mind, which is the daughter of a friend of Julius' Family.

Ambitions: Not a man of many selfish objectives, there's only one thing in this world that Argexis desires the most, and that's the love of a certain woman. In other words he just wants his suffering to stop and lead a happy life full of joy. Is Argexis selfish for wanting something that seems so impossible for a man like him?


Concerns/setbacks: There's only one thing Argexis is afraid of, and that is the fact that he doesn't know what he might be capable of if he loses control over his emotions. The torment of becoming a ruthless tyrant haunts Argexis dreams to the point of forcing him take an antisocial behavior.

Likes: Argexis would change everything and anything for a brief moment of peace with his soul, or more simplistic, he could always read a good book.

Dislikes: Disloyalty, betrayal, and lies which arouse his inner cruelty.

Intelligence: Being trained to be a strategic genius, Argexis excels in the ancient Art of War though his true passion lies in poetry.


History: Being the first born son of the Silverwing Family which has been highly involved with military activities since it was established, Julius was trained in the Arts of Swordsmanship since he was five years old not having the opportunity to socialize with people of his age becoming one of the main reasons of why he is so antisocial. After becoming captain of a small unit at the age of fifteen thanks to his excellent leadership capabilities, Julius has experienced both the advantages and disadvantages of war, and earned the fame of being quite cold with both friends and foes alike. Strange though, Julius has the tendency of becoming quite a sentimental guy every time he is near the person he cares about, the daughter of his father’s best friend. Unfortunately, Julius is not good when dealing with deceptions and has the tendency of blaming himself for everything negative that happens all around him, one of the main reasons why his father fears him, because Julius can be quite cruel once he begins to hate himself.

Abilities:
*Dual Wielding: Allows Argexis to dual wield weapons.
*Dual Wielding: Allows Argexis to dual wield weapons.
*Master Wielding: Allows Argexis to wield any weapon regardless of their complexity.
*Iron Will: Argexis to summon forth strength from within his soul after enduring a lot of damage. This ability allows Argexis to push his power beyond his own limits, but it’s necessary for him to take a direct hit and some damage.
*Corruption by Hatred: Argexis is possessed by a deepening hatred that transforms him into a blood thirsty monster full of rage. His muscular mass is increased by five times making him look like a tank with arms. His body is surrounded with a yellowish red aura and his eyes glow deep emerald green. In this state, Argexis can’t tell which one is a foe and which ones are allies. There’s only one small weakness, the roses serve as a trigger to his memories making him vulnerable to any attack. If his memories are pushed to far beyond his mental endurance, Argexis returns to his normal self and loses consciousness. Only pure rage can push Argexis over the verge of his emotional resistance and make him take this form.

*Main Ability: “Punishment” Allows Argexis to use one of the following signature moves.


*Ferrum Terriblis (Fierce Terror)
Argexis uses dark magic to shift his surroundings enveloping everything in a dark mist. He momentarily disappears while leaving the sound of his swords being unsheathed echoing through the air. Suddenly we see him running towards his opponent and doing an upwards slash followed by a downward crushing blow that ends with a blinding flash.




“Ira Aeternalis” (Eternal Rage)
Argexis grins confidently as his sword is surrounded in dark flames. As soon as the flames enveloping his sword seem to become more and more unstable in comparison to the amount of feelings storming inside his heart, Argexis laughs and ran towards his enemies and begins his insane slaughter swinging his sword mindlessly. As his sword is swung fiercely against his enemies, the flames enveloping his sword intensify significantly to the point of unleashing a furious hellfire, with flames capable of scorching anything in his path. After Argexis swings his sword for the thirtieth time, Julius quickly steps back and comes rushing forward as strong as a fierce meteor slashing through anything in his path. In the end, the flames fade away and Argexis is seen standing behind his opponent.










“Aeternus Finalis!!!!” (Eternal End)
Argexis summons forth the deepening rage gathered inside his heart and infuses it deep inside the core of his sword. He then begins his punishment by swinging his sword upwardly from left to right sending a powerful vertical shockwave towards his opponent. As soon as the first shockwave is close enough to his opponent, Argexis unleashes several attacks swinging his sword wildly and randomly sending powerful shockwaves infused with rage towards his enemies. The barrage of attacks continues seeming eternal until all the area is engulfed with a blinding light ending the last shockwave with a ferocious explosion.

“Absolutus Zero”
Argexis gets out of control unleashing his rage mindlessly ending up being consumed by his sorrow. He suddenly falls on his knees and pierces the ground with his sword. His tears flow from his eyes combining both emotions of hatred and love in a desperate effort to maintain his sanity. In the end, one of the tears falls on the ground and everything seems to slow down all around Argexis. His heart beats faster than ever and memories of his lost love flash through his mind. Hoping to regain control of his self, Argexis unleashes powerful battle cry and all his surroundings go back to normal. Suddenly he notices that the area is surrounded by pitch black darkness and, in order to release all his power, Argexis pulls his sword of the ground and swings it fiercely downwardly with all his might unleashing every feeling inside his heart in this single, yet powerful, final blow. If the attack is successful, the opponent won’t only feel the physical damage but will also feel Argexis hatred deep inside his/her heart.



*Other Abilities: Julius Spell Book
Julius inherited the ancient “Tome of Ancients” from his mother great grandfather who was a powerful mage himself. The ancient tome contains many texts that were enchanted by the strongest mages of all times. Written within its pages there are spells long since forgotten and even forbidden spells were included here. As the heir of the Van Retsimar Clan, Argexis’ body hides within its veins the blood of ancients and the power of the Van Retsimar Clan.

*Basic Spells:
===“Recuperatio” (Recover)
A basic healing spell that slowly recovers the wounds of a single target and the complete healing process takes no less than two minutes.

===”Flamma” (Flame)
A basic fire based spell that summons forth multiple fireballs spinning around its caster that are redirected towards a single target.

===”Frigidus” (cold)
A basic ice based spell that summons six spears of ice that are redirected against multiple targets. The spears are six feet long and two feet wide that instantly freezes everything it gets in contact with.

===”Relampadare” (Lightning)
A basic spell that allows is caster to summon multiple bolts of lightning from the heavens randomly targeting multiple opponents. The effects of the spell last for thirty seconds.


*Intermediate:
===“Sphatha de Lux” (Sword of Light)
An Intermediate thunder-light based spell that allows its caster to summon forth a four feet long 1 foot wide broadsword made of pure electricity and holy powers. The hilt of the sword can only be grabbed by the caster of the spell and it can be used as a normal enchanted weapon. The sword also has a purifying effect that can banish evil essences and dark based spells.

===”Completus Curare” (Complete Heal)
An intermediate holy based spell that heals multiple targets. The recovery effect takes no less than four minutes to completely heal multiple targets.

===”Scutum de Energia” (Shield of Energy)
An intermediate non elemental spell that shields against frontal elemental and non elemental attacks. The magical shield is 6 feet tall and 5 feet wide and requires the caster to fully dedicate itself to this action and will eventually disappear after the caster dispels the enchantment.


*Advanced Spells:
===”Meteorus Gigantis” (Giant Meteor)
An advanced elemental spell infused with the powers of both fire and earth. The incantation summons a giant meteor from the heavens and sends it towards a targeted area that will damage anything three feet away from the affected area.

===”Angelus Mortis” (Angel of Death)
An advanced dark based spell that allows its caster to transform into the angel of death. The caster will take the form of a cloaked creature with black wings wielding a scythe enveloped with a dark aura. As the angel of death, the caster will pursue its target swinging its scythe (a five feet stall with 4 feet curved blade attached to the upper end of the staff) wildly against a target. If the scythe touches a target, it will instantly drain all its energy and weaken its magical powers. The effects of the spell will last for half an hour.




===”Archangelus” (Archangel)
An advanced light based spell that will summon forth a creature wearing full body armor with 6 feet wide white angel wings to aid its caster in battle. The summoned creature will cast both defensive and offensive spells such as:
==”Recuperatio”
==”Flamma”
==”Frigidus”
==”Relampadare”
==”Spatha de Lux”
==”Scutum de Energia”

===Description: The summon wears a strong silver full body armor that is beautifully decorated with angelical engravings, wings and feathers of gold. The armor also has six precious stones, 2 rubies, 2 emeralds and three amethysts covering the emblem attached to the armor. The archangel’s helm has a golden crown attached to it and the summoned creature wears a red cape covering his right arm. A red sheath decorated with titanium is attached to the left side of the archangels’ belt. The archangel’s main weapon is a beautifully crafted sword with a blade as pure and shiny as silver and a hilt coated with gold that has a small red orb attached to the end of the hilt.

*Master Spells:
===“Sphata de Archangelus” (Sword of the Archangel)
An ancient spell that summons from the heavens the legendary sword of the archangel, a mighty sword infused with the powers of fire, water, earth, ice, wind, light, and darkness. Similar to the sword wielded by the “Archangelus” summon, the sword can only be wielded by the caster of this enchantment or else the blade will turn against the unworthy of its terrifying power. Only a Van Retsimar can use this spell, and only the heir of the legendary clan can unleash the full power of the blade. The sword disappears in a blinding flash of holy light as soon as all the enemies around the caster are banished into the depths of oblivion.

===”Armatura de Archangelus” (Armor of the Archangel)
An ancient spell that will protect the caster with the legendary armor of the ancient “Archangelus”, an ancient armor infused with the powers of fire, earth, ice, wind, light and darkness. While wearing the armor, the armor will raise the elemental resistance of the caster against the forces of darkness and will absorb all light based spells directed against the caster. The armor has one weakness; at the cost of a magnificent protection the caster won’t be able to cast any spell as long as he/she wears the armor. The armor will disappear after enduring a devastating magical attack or as soon as the forces of darkness around its wearer are banished.






===”Sanctuarium de illas Sphatas” (Sanctuary of the Sword)
An ancient spell that summons seven swords, similar to the one wielded by the summon “Archangelus”, each of them with different elemental attribute aligned to either fire, water, ice, wind, earth, light or darkness. The summoned swords will spin fiercely surrounding and protecting its master like a furious tornado of elemental energies and will attack if the command is given.
 
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