The Willing Well

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Based Of The Story Told By Coheed and Cambria...

Note: This isn't my story, It is based of the Amory Wars comic book which is also depicted by the band Coheed and Cambria, and all info (or at least most of it) Is from the cobaltandcalcium website...

I only put this in this part of the forum because even though the story is not my idea i feel it is an original concept for an rpg... feel free to move it however if you feel it needs to be changed

MOST IMPORTANT!!! Make sure you do your research on this rpg so I would expect for you to read the background story at least and i would apprieciate it if you checked out the characters for more info...

In the Beginning

In the beginning, God created three species: Man, Mage, and Prise. They were placed in the universe known as Heaven’s Fence and allowed to live. The “Fence” was comprised of 78 planets aligned in a triangular form divided into 12 sectors. Each sector was given a capital planet with five additional planets (with the exception of sectors 7 and 12, which had eight follower planets). In order for the Fence to exist, a precise method of energy distribution was required to supply each planet with an equal amount of essential elements needed to sustain life. The Keywork itself is comprised the visible beams of light that connect every individual planet, supplied by the seven power star transformers, known as the Stars of Sirius. Sirius Amory, the namesake and chief astronomer of the Stars, discovered that the Stars could produce the essential elements needed to harbor life among the planets and ensure their immobility (provided it allowed them to orbit around the beam).

When God placed all three species in Heaven’s Fence and allowed them to live, he left them with specific rules. Prise would watch over the Mages, and Mages would govern over Man. This way, all could leave peacefully and harmoniously for all time. Should the balance be interrupted, it was the Prise’s responsibility to restore order. He left a riddle to be followed by the Prise:

“If man should decide to dabble in my affairs, then guardian must intervene. But, should I come forth to change the face of Man with you there to challenge me, then I shall return with the Stars to destroy all I have made. Whether Man or I present that danger will not be told in the coming.”

Over time, Mages became greedy and restless. Wilhelm Ryan, one of the twelve Mages sent to govern with compassion and justness, decided to overthrow his fellow Mages and take over their sectors. He ordered Mayo Detinwolf, future Head General of the URA, to occupy the neighboring territory and overthrow the leader, Mage Covent Marth. Immediately Marth and fellow Mages demanded Ryan withdraw his forces, but Ryan then executed Marth and thus began the War of the Mages. At war’s end, Ryan was in control of all three sectors and was hence forth known as Supreme Tri-Mage Ryan. Ryan enslaved Man to do his bidding, creating the United Red Army which he used to inflict a tyrannical rule over the entire Keywork. He used Man not only for labor in life, but as fuel for the Keywork in death by trapping their souls in the Stars. In creating the URA, Ryan appointed his cyborg body guard Mayo Detinwolf as Head General, and captures the 8 remaining Mages and turned them into Onstantine Priests. Described as mindless and blood thirsty, the Priests are Ryan’s merciless executioners.

After years under Ryan’s ruthless iron fist, one of Man’s greatest scientists, Dr. Leonard Hohenberger, devised a plan. With the blessings of neither Mage nor Prise, Dr. Hohenberger worked in secret to create the first IRO-bots. Officially known as Interceptive Recon Operative Bots, they are cyborg like beings that act, feel, and think as humans, but posess super-human abilities. He created a team known as the K.B.I., comprised of Cambria (Knowledge), Coheed (Beast), and Jesse (Inferno). Each with their own talents, they were implanted with the mission of removing Ryan from power. Before he could exact his plan on Supreme Tri-Mage Ryan Wilhelm, Dr. Hohenberger was framed by accusations of ties with a terrorist organization, “Aetna Six,” the doctor was assassinated. Before his death, he implanted new memories into Coheed and Cambria and sent them into hiding. The doctor left Jesse untouched and told him to disappear, presumably in hopes to one day complete their task.

Years passed, and hopes for an answer to Ryan’s regime began to fade. The Prise stirred with unrest, as they began to feel they had failed God and that the riddle they were left with would soon be realized. However, within Sector 12, on the capital planet Paris: Earth, a secret to Man’s oppressors began to rise. Mariah Antillarea, a Mage believed to be born through Immaculate Conception, is believed by her followers to be the solution to Ryan’s evil tyranny. Followers who refer to her as “The Messiah”, mark between their thumb and index finger, on the web of their hands, with an “M” with two lines drawn diagonally across it, to show they were members of Mariah’s Rebellion. A breath of hope spreads through the race of Man, and soon Mariah has a Rebel Army to fight against the URA. Thus marks the beginning of a whole new war.


Cast of Characters

Sirius Amory
Race: Human
Described as “tall”, having “olive skin, medium build, dark features and glasses. He looks very accomplished and proud,” Sirius Amory is responsible for the creation of the Keywork that harbors all 78 planets within Heaven’s Fence. It was his discovery that the stars had the ability to create elements essential for fostering life that allowed the planets to be populated. His name was then given to the stars, known as The Stars of Sirius, as a tribute to his discovery. It is these energy sources which hold beams of energy from one another to stabilize the Keywork and its galaxies.

Dr. Leonard Hohenberger
Race: Human
Dr. Hohenberger is the well-known creator of the first and only (until Jesse’s later inventions) Interceptive Recon Operative Bots (IRO-Bots). These cyborg-like beings appear human and can be killed, but exhibit extraordinary talents unknown to humans and have the ability to be repaired. Dr. Hohenberger is responsible for assembling the KBI program as a means to remove Supreme Tri-Mage Wilhelm Ryan from power. The KBI team was comprised of Knowledge (Cambria), Beast (Coheed), and Inferno (Jesse). Framed by Ryan in a conspiracy that accused him of ties with the terrorist organization Aetna Six, Dr. Hohenberger was assassinated. Before his death, he disbanded the KBI team, implanted new memories into Coheed and Cambria, and left Jesse with the task of completing the mission should the opportunity arise.

Coheed Killgannon
Race: IRO-Bot
Code Name: Beast
Memory Implants: Stock B187, J366, and Y416, file code “human.”
His bio, which comes from his memory implants, states that he “had a passion for the sciences,” and excelled in the Academy where he earned a number of awards. At 18, however, after his father contracted Melvus (an upper respiratory disease) and became bed ridden, he dropped out of school to help his mother out with money until his father’s death.
In truth, Coheed is the Beast of the KBI team invented by Dr. Hohenberger, a tactical unit comprised of three IRO-bots (Coheed, Cambria and Jesse). As first Counterpart, he has great physical strength and the ability to extend a series of blades out of his left arm to be used as a weapon. After Dr. Hohenberger’s conspiracy is revealed, Coheed’s memory is replaced to protect his identity and wellbeing. He marries Cambria and they have four children: Josephine, Claudio, and the twins Matthew and Maria. Living a pleasant life on the planet Hetricus, he suffers from what he believes to be nightmares, but are really memories of his true identity. One day, Coheed is informed by Mayo Deftinwolf that he carries what is called the Monstar virus, a virus that holds the ability to trigger a reaction in Coheed’s body so severe it would dismantle the Keywork and bring an end to the known universe. While he can control it, he is told, he has passed on a genetic strain to his children, the Sinstar virus, that cannot be stopped and that he must eliminate the danger.

Cambria Kilgannon
Race: IRO-Bot
Code Name: Knowledge
Memory Implants: — Stock A56, C108, M768 & 0896.
Cambria Myers, according to her memory implants, was raised by her father after her mother died giving birth. Cambria grew up moving from relative to relative as her father travelled the Keywork smuggling illegal spices, which enabled Cambria to learn of nearly all the cultures, languages and fundamentals of the entire Keywork.
In truth, Cambria was the Knowledge of the KBI team invented by Dr. Hohenberger. As second Counterpart, Cambria has immense telepathic power, both through her ability to use telekinesis and her prophetic talents. After her memory is altered, she marries Coheed and is mother to their four children, Josephine, Claudio and the twins Matthew and Maria. Cambria telepathically witnesses the conversation between Coheed and Mayo, which takes place at 21:13 in the evening, and therefore learns of Coheed’s task given to him by Mayo.

Jesse
Race: IRO-Bot
Code Name: Inferno
Memory Implants: None
Jesse is the third member of the KBI team, Inferno. His main objective was to serve as Mainframe to Counterparts Beast and Knowledge. He is created in the exact likeness of Dr. Hohenberger, and therefore shares his ability to create IRO-Bots as well. When the conspiracy against Dr. Hohenberger came to light and the KBI program disbanded, Jesse was the only one whose memory was left untouched. It is believed at one point he was told to later find Coheed and Cambria and fulfill their mission, but this never came to fruition. His full abilities are unknown, but he later surfaces as “Prize Fighter Inferno” and makes a livable career as a boxer. He later helps lead Mariah Antillarea’s Rebel Army, along with his own IRO-Bots that he has since created, in a war against Supreme Tri-Mage Wilhelm Ryan’s United Red Army (URA).

Claudio Kilgannon
Race: Unknown
Also Known As: Character, The Crowing.
Claudio is the second child and eldest son of Coheed and Cambria Kilgannon. In highschool, he was reclusive and artistic, choosing to spend the majority of his time with his then-girlfriend of two years, Newo Ikkin. However, after a series of events resulting in the demise of his life as he knew it, Claudio became the primary target of Supreme Tri-Mage Wilhelm Ryan’s devious plan and was forced to run for his life with little knowledge of the danger surrounding him. After about a ten year hiatus, Claudio learns of his fate as The Crowing, the only person who can fulfill God’s wish that the Keywork be destroyed and Supreme Tri-Mage Wilhelm Ryan’s tyranny be brought to an end. Reluctant of his new destiny, Claudio is joined by Ambellina, Jesse, Chase and several other important characters to aid in defeating Ryan. Later, it becomes known that Claudio is a direct parallel to the Writer, a figure responsible for the creation and events that take place in Heaven’s Fence.

Josephine Kilgannon
Race: IRO-Bot
Created by Dr. Inaid, a member of Dr. Hohenberger’s research team, Josephine was engineered to by an antidote to the Monstar virus placed in Coheed’s body. Josephine is the eldest child of Coheed and Cambria. She is in a committed relationship with Patrick McCormick, her boyfriend of several years who plans to propose to her. However, on the night of the proposal, Josephine and Patrick are attacked by a gang known as the Jersey City Devils and horribly brutalized. Later torn apart by the events of a tragic night, Josephine and Patrick both fall prey to Mayo Deftinwolf’s devious plan to use Coheed to manipulate the Kilgannon family according to Ryan’s plan.

Matthew and Maria Kilgannon
Race: IRO-Bot
The youngest children of the Kilgannon family, Matthew and Maria are fraternal twins. Young and full of life, the twins spend much time playing with one another and love their family unconditionally. They, too, are victims of the trap that Mayo Deftinwolf has set for the Kilgannon family.

Supreme Tri-Mage Wilhelm Ryan
Race: Mage
Initially, Mages were placed in the Keywork to govern over man justly and with compassion. However, Ryan thought differently and ordered Mayo Detinwolf, future Head General of the URA, to occupy the neighboring territory and overthrow the leader, Mage Covent Marth. Immediately Marth and fellow Mages demanded Ryan withdraw his forces, but Ryan then executed Marth and thus began the War of the Mages. At war’s end, Ryan was in control of all three sectors and was hence forth known as Supreme Tri-Mage Ryan. Ryan eliminates any and all threats by deploying Deftinwolf to do his bidding.

Mayo Deftinwolf
Race: Cyborg
Mayo is the Head General of Ryan’s United Red Army (URA). Assembled by Gyatronic Technologies Inc., and issued to Ryan during the Second Era, Mayo was the first Z Class cybernetic organism of its kind. This cyborg was an amalgamation of the defensive traits from both G10 and Y series, fused to create a cyborg suitable for military rank and combat. Years of programming and training placed Mayo has Head General to what is now the URA. Mayo is responsible for the manipulation of the Kilgannon family and complies with every task set to him by Ryan.

Mariah Antillarea
Race: Mage
While very little is known about Mariah, it is believed she was born through Immaculate Conception. Abandoned on a river bank as an infant, she was raised in a monastery by the Nivus Monks. Three years later, a deadly viral plague swept through the monastery and, while the monks attempted to remove Mariah, she escaped their grasp and in turn healed them all of their illness. It is believed by Mariah’s followers that she is the Messiah, sent by God, to end Ryan’s regime and restore harmony to the Keywork. She amasses a Rebel Army that later defends Silent Earth against the URA.

Chase
Race: IRO-Bot
The most powerful of all of Jesse’s IRO-Bots, but meekest in appearance. She is The Vishual; she can hear everything that the Writer is thinking and saying. She is a grown woman in the body of a 4 year old girl, though, exhibits child-like adoration for her “father” Jesse. She is often the reassurance Claudio needs when he doubts his fate as The Crowing.

Sizer
Race: IRO-Bot
One of the “children” of Jesse’s group of IRO-Bots, The Pioneers, Sizer feels like an older brother to Chase. However, he feels that Jesse favors Chase and therefore struggles for Jesse’s affection. After being abducted by the URA in Chase’s place, Sizer is interrogated, disassembled, and left for dead after he refuses to give up information. Later, he is teamed up with Claudio and serves to take Jesse’s place as leader of the IRO-bots.

Newo Ikkin
Race: Human
Newo was Claudio’s extroverted, beautiful, and popular girlfriend of two years during their time at Rye Cooper High School together. Fiercely loyal to those close to her, Newo spent the majority of her time with Claudio until a series of events that tore them apart indefinitely. Later, it comes to light that Newo is somewhat of a manifestation, created by Writer, who is tormented by his past relationship with a woman named Erica Court. Newo stands to represent the evil or devious aspects Writers sees in Erica, which goes on to influence Claudio’s relationship with Newo.

Patick McCormick
Race: Human
Josephine Kilgannon’s long time boyfriend and would-be fiancée were it not for a night full of tragic events started by the attack of the Jersey City Devils and Patrick’s later apprehension by the URA soldiers occupying the Kilgannon home at the time Patrick brings Josephine home. After his escape from the soldiers, Patrick’s fate is sealed by an Onstantine Priest that was sent to tie up all of the loose ends in the Kilgannon home.

Paranoia
Race: Prise
Paranoia and the Prise were positioned as guardians to they Keywork and its power sources, Stars I, II, III and IV. In their creation, God presented the Prise with the task of intervening should Man attempt to take on the role of God. However, if it is God’s will to change the face of Man, then the Prise must remain impartial and suffer the wrath of God’s destruction.

Ambellina
Race: Prise
Cast out by her fellow Prise for reasons unknown, Ambellina’s wings were burned and she was forced to guide Claudio to find Inferno and join the war against Wilhelm Ryan, fulfilling his role as The Crowing. Like the rest of the Prise, her mission was to see that God’s will was carried out in the Keywork. “The Fallen Prise” forges an oddly deep connection with Claudio during their travels together, a dynamic that is in stark contrast to Claudio’s past relationship with Newo, for it is not in a Prise’s make to feel emotion.

Al the Killer
Race: Human
Al pilots the Velorium Camper, a shipping barge in which he spends the majority of his time. He is somewhat of a racist psychopath with an affinity for murdering white girls, either in fantasy or reality. Al has an unnatural obsession with his sniper rifle, whom he treats like a companion, and in his past was a remarkable shot. Both Al’s piloting and sniping abilities are put to use when Claudio, Ambellina, Jesse and Chase employ him to carry them to House Atlantic.

Apollo
Species: Canine
Apollo is both Newo Ikkin, and the Writer’s dog. He exists and parallels himself in both worlds: Writer’s world and Heaven’s Fence.

The Writing Writer
Race: Human
A parallel to Claudio Kilgannon of Heaven’s Fence, the Writing Writer lives in our world. The issues of his own life make him see delusions that cause him to take out his own personal suffering on the characters in his story. The story gets darker and more troubled as his own problems grow. He doesn’t want The Character, Claudio Kilgannon, to feel the same pain that he has, so he interferes with the story. He sees the vision of Ten Speed, who manipulates his thinking and convinces him of what must be done in the story to allow himself some peace.

Miss Erica Court
Race: Human
Erica is Writer’s past love, whom he at one point wished to propose to. Erica left Writer after a period of time when the relationship was failing because Writer didn’t spend enough time with her and didn’t put enough energy into the relationship, despite his deep love for her. Writer carries a heavy burden of guilt, grief and pain over his loss that eventually manifests into a deep hate for Erica.

Ten Speed
Race: None
As Writer’s grief worsens, so do his delusions. Ten Speed is the possessed bicycle that appears in Writer’s visions. Ten Speed convinces Writer that he must dramatically change his story to insure that he get some peace in his own life.

Groups:

Onstantine Preists
Race: Priest
During the War of the Mages, Ryan eventually took over power of all 12 Mage territories, and in the process some were killed. The remaining Mages were then captured and turned into Onstantine Priests, blood thirsty executioners used to do Ryan’s bidding. Mindless, grotesque, and vicious, they are described as “mutated killing machines with no memory and a lust for blood.”

IRO-Bots
Dr. Hohenberger’s invention, “IRO-Bot” stands for Interceptive Recon Operative Bots. Like humans, IRO-Bots can feel love, anger, sadness, confusion, fear, and any other emotion humans experience. They can feel pain, be killed and must feed, breathe, and drink like humans. However, they can be repaired if injured and exhibit extraordinary skills and abilities unavailable to a mortal. The original three, Coheed, Cambria and Jesse, were invented for the KBI program Dr. Hohenberger had planned. Jesse’s later inventions are not only created, but can transform entirely into beasts at will.

Lost Souls of the Keywork
These are Supreme Tri-Mage Wilhelm Ryan’s unfortunate subjects whose souls have been suspended and used to power the Stars of Sirius as fuel for the beams. They haunt Claudio’s dreams and call out to be released from their torture.

NOTE: This is just for you to get info on it and for me to see who is interested... The plot I will tell later and the template I will show later as well... Please join this could be really good!!! I PROMISE!!!
 
Sorry for the double post, but I am now posting the character pallate...
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Now here it is!

Name - Your characters name....

Alignment - Is your character Good, Evil, Neutrel, this rpg could play with you alignment you never know what your character might end up doing...

Race - Human, IRO-Bot, or Mage...

Gender - Male or Female?

Age - Simply how old is your character?

Appearance - What does your character look like?

Attire - What do they wear?

Personality - How do they act? What are their morals? How do they feel about things?

History - If you can it would be apprieciated, idk if i want to say nessacary but it would be really nice if your character was tied in somehow with another character from the bios above, otherwise it might be hard for your character to get involved...

For the fun stuff now :p

Weapons - Now keep in mind this is sort of a sci-fi/regular rpg so a human would probably not have a weapon to start with or something like a regular gun, IRO-Bots could hve built in weapons which i would appreicate being explained in skills and abilities section... Mages would probably be the only race to have super sci-fi weapons like laser guns or something like that... I wan't a good description of what the weapon is and why you have it...

Skills and Abilities (ONLY for IRO-Bots): Anything from controling fire to having blades protrude from your body, to reading minds and seeing the future, be CREATIVE and use DETAIL... AND PLEASE JUST BECAUSE THIS IS THE ONLY CLASS THAT HAS ABILITIES DON'T ONLY BE IRO-BOTS we are still gonna need humans and mage's...

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If you have any quiestions feel free to ask XD
 
Character one- my main, i will create the others in time, i dont have said time right now though... tell me if it needs lengthening ok?

Name - James "SHADOW" Tiler
Alignment - Good
Race - IRO-Bot
Gender - Male
Age - 17
Appearance -
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Attire - Jeans and a t-shirt with an open shirt on top. Along with army issue Boots and a Dog-tag necklace
Personality - This cheery chap is all about the bright side of things. Optimistic to a fault sometimes. He can be really annoying. But dont let that fool you, He may be a joker but when it comes to battles hes relentless and always serious
History - James, a member of the IRO-Bot faction "Exiles" which was created solely by his father of sorts a 'man' by the name of Exilus, who happened to be an IRO-Bot created by Dr. H who was sent into exile so that he may one day secretly create other IRO-Bots to aid the KBI (The three original IRO-Bots) and manage to avoid persecution... Anyway back to James. He was created along with 7 other IRO-Bots and he was sent to monitor The Knowledge and The Beast at there home... He went to school with Claudio and became his only friend (other than claudios girlfriend Newo).... James struck up a relationship with one of his fellow IRO-bot comrades, Michelle and together the group lead a normal and happy life, or so it seems, But the fighting has begun with renewed force. He decided it was time to go back to what he knew best, what he was born to do
Weapons - Laser-katanas. He calls them the "flames of death" They slice through anything thats up to as thick as Adamantium. And if it slices flesh, it instantly cauterizes it thus causing extra pain. These he uses for Close quarters battles. He stores them in hidden compartments that open up from his arms. and with a slight movement the weapons are brought out and into his hand. They were Exilus' Prize weapons but he gave them to Shadow when Shadow was created so that shadow could use them to protect the others in his squad. The other weapon Fayd has is nowhere near as cool. Youd expect a flamethrower or laser cannon, But thats not his style. He uses a Crossbow with explosive bolts instead. The aptly named, Thunder-cracker, Fires a highly explosive 3 bore plasma round, They are generated by shadow himself

Skills and Abilities (ONLY for IRO-Bots): He has "Active Camouflage" allowing him to appear invisible on radar and to human eyes. His energy signal is distorted as well, thus making him harder to track as well as the ability to have blades protrude from his fore arms. That skill he uses for stealth kills and Hand-to-hand combat
 
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Its not bad but I have a few things....

The history is the only thing I have a problem with actually... He is 17 right? So even though he is an IRO-Bot he should be going to school or something right? I don't understand where or why he would become an accountant... I know i'm going to sound picky but the history NEEDS to be really good, every thing else can lack but the history really needs to be there for me to incoorporate you into the story well...

Also the history should be a little bit more in depth, saying exactly who he has connections with and what those connections are... This includes connections with other characters you might make as well as AT LEAST one character from the cast of characters list... And the more connections the better just remember that :p

Maybe some examples of what I would do would be something like...
James a member of the IRO-Bot faction "Exiles" was created by his father of sorts a man by the name of Exilus, who happened to be an IRO-Bot created by Dr. H who was sent into exile so that he may one day create otherIRO-Bots to aid the KBI (The three original IRO-Bots)... Anyways back to James. He was created along with 7 other IRO-Bots and he was sent to monitor The Knowledge and The Beast at there home... He went to school with Claudio and became his only friend (other than claudios gf Newo).... Something like that :)

Sorry if i'm being a pain in the ass... I Just want this rpg to be REAL GOOD
 
I am thinking of joining, but the is heaps of info to digest and it sounds really complex.
 
Tipsy,
Thats really the only thing about this that is kind of challanging, and thats what I was afraid of, the fact the there is alot of info to digest... All you really need to know the is the main plot which is told in the In The Beginning section other than that all I ask is you have at least one connection with one of the Cast of Characters chracters in your history... Its based of a sci-fi comic book so its a little confusing but if you have any quiestions just feel free to ask! :)
 
Name - Felius Ryan Magnium

Alignment - Good

Race - Mage

Gender - Male

Age - 20

Appearance - Felius Ryan Magnium

Attire - He usually wears leather pants (with two eye simbols on them), red sleveless leather shirt (with eye symbols on it), a pair of gloves and shoes. When he was on his home, he also use to wear a long cape, a symbold of his familly. Since he is no longer in home, he is now without it.

Personality - Being born in a family where your own brother betrayed the way of the mages, left Felius with a great amount of guilt. Being unable to help his brother, Felius became cold as ice (towards his brother) and helping others. He is helpfull and extraordinary resourcefull.

History - Felius was born in the Ryan familly. Being one of the most known famillies, because of Wihelm being a Mage, Felius did not like all that attention. When he made 10 years old, he could already see the changes on Wihelm's personality.

At the age of 15 he ran away from home and travelled from planet to planet, in search for the “The Messiah”. After some difficulties, Felius managed to encounter Mariah Antillarea and thus becoming a friend and a powerfull ally. After a couple of years, Felius backed away of Mariah because of his own feelings for her. He then travelled once again from planet to planet, to feel the hardships his own brother made all over.


Weapons - Felius is very well known by his genius aim and decisive blow. He uses a sword with two blades and the blade is made of pure beam, captured from the beam that connects the planets. This beam is highly powerfull and deadly. He also uses two handguns, solid as steel and weight of a ton. Due to Felius's training, he can holde them as they were light as a feather.
 
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Rage I like your character, he is nicley done, and the fact that you incoorperated him in with two of the characters from the story is also an added plus for you :) Of course you are going to finish your attire but other than that not being done, the only thing that I have to say is the last name of Wilhelm is Ryan, so your characters last name would be Ryan not Wilhelm :D But other than that I'm going to say... WELCOMEEEEE TO THE RPG :p
 
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Well it is always good to know that somebody will join >< I can understand how this is alot of information, as I have been told many times, so I can understand why if you were busy you wouldn't have hte time, but I really need to get some peoplem joining and signing up so I can get this thing on its way <(^-^)>
 
Don't worry about a thing :D I never get enough of information and nothing is too much or too hard for me, but I just need to take a free hour for making a profile... never know how long it may take... sometimes 15 minutes for a good char, sometimes 55 minutes... :)
 
Yeah I know exactly what you mean, I am just glad to know you are joining, take as much time as you need to make a good character and make him original!!! :p
 
i edited Shadow... i am writing the other three up as we speak, but im not sure how long it will take to put them up... will you check james to see if hes alright now please apollo
 
Exile Jame's is good for now just remember that you are supposed to secretly be watching The K and the B and that although you are friends with Claudio (The Crowing) he plays a big part in this story... You are not supposed to tell him anything... Your mission is top secret. and things havn't quite fired up yet, yes battles are still going on but remember, your mission is to strictly keep track of Coheed and Cambria (Coheed being the beast and Cambria the knowledge) So please don't do anything intill I get the first part of the story rolling okay... So for now as far as ANYBODY besides Jame's other IRO-Bot friend knows, you are just some regular 17 year old...
 
sir yes sir i will try my best, i promise to give my greatest performance yet in history RP
 
Alright Exile it's good to hear it :p
All I say is, we get a feeeeew more people with some good bios to join, then I will write up my bio and then we will get this show on the road!
 
First lemme state my sincerest apologies for double posting.... but now is the time if ever to release my bio and telll everybody that the rpg will be starting as soon as I find the time to right up my amazing idea for the beginning post :)

So here it is!!!

Name: Todd Ikkin

Alignment: Good

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Appearance: Todd has short golden blond hair just like his sister... see cause not only do Todd and Newo share their common loyalty to others they also share a same astounding beauty... Todd is a very hansom young men with a dark complexion yet still his skin color is white... He has amazing blue eyes that could charm snakes...

His build is quite nice as well... Do to him being in the Rebel Army he must stay fit at all times, which means that Todd's body is very well kept (that of a soldier) and his muscular features have wooed many of ladies to fall for him...

Attire: He wears a short sleeved white t-shirt... honestly nothing special about it, although he wears a sleeveless tan jacket over his white t-shirt... the jacket has a few pockets that he keeps some of his petty items in such as cash and other...

He wears a regular pair of blue jeans, a little tattered and dirt covered, possibly from battle or maybe even from just horsing around a little bit, honestly you could never tell with Todd... On his feet he wears a pair of army style boots with soles that give him great traction for battle, but the boots are still light enough to give him the agility he needs...

Personality: Todd Ikkin, like his younger sister Newo Ikkin, is fiercely loyal to those he cares about... He will stick by the ones he cares about and those who need him even if it may cost him his life... He is very reliable person, he always keeps to the promises that he makes with others and strives to fufil the promises that he has made to himself. Todd is brave and will not back down in the face of danger, however, Todd is also an intelligent person who knows when backing off is the right thing to do.

Todd is also very friendly... Those who meet him are almost always suddenly spellbound by his amazing personality... He keeps things fun almost all the time and likes to always view the bright side of things.... However he is still realistic and does not blind his self with ideas of a false reality where things are perfect, because Todd knows that nothing is perfect, he knows that even he himself has flaws...

Todd realizes that sometimes his trust can also be a downfall... In a world as corrupt as his, it isn't always such a good quality to be a very trusting person... People are deceiving and although Todd can see past most charades for some reason he will still put his trust in people...

Hope, another flawed virtue... Todd always has hope in his heart even in the most unlikely of situations... Hope can be a good thing but on the other hand when you have hope for something, it hurts only more than it would have before... He tries to stay realistic, but he doesn't let the realism of whatever situation it might be get his hope down entirely.

Although Todd is a very kind person at heart... If you do anything to hurt somebody he loves or cares about... His heart will fill with vengence, a dark seed will grow... His heart will grow cold towards whomever hurt his loved one and he will be relentless and unemotional towards them... Cold and unforgiving...

History: Todd Ikkin is the older brother of New Ikkin... He was born three years before her and when he grew up with Newo he always played the part of the wise and helping older brother, the protective and loving brother that other young girls wished they had... When he was still just a young teenage boy, he attended Rye Cooper High School... Just like his sister he was a very popular person, however he didn't let that popularity get to his head and he was still always kind to others... In fact he actually was a person who stood up for younger kids who were made fun of alot in school. A particular boy he always tried to stick up for was a boy by the name of Claudio Killigan, who in later years became his younger sisters boyfriend.

After he graduated he made a decision that would send his life flowing in a different direction... He told his family that he was leaving... That for the peace of the planets he would set out and join Mariah Antillareas' Rebel Army in hopes that he could help end Wilhelm Ryan's reign... So he joined the ranks of the Rebel Army as young man and after working hard many years and staying loyal he managed to work his way up to the position of one of Mariah's finest soldiers... In fact he worked side by side with Jesse and his IRO-Bot family in ranks... and so he continues to fight the battle... occasionaly stopping in to say high to the ones he loved and left behind back in his old town....

Weapon:
After Todd worked his way up to Jesse's position Jesse, being the inventor and creator that he is, decided to craft a few weapons for Todd that would help him with most troubles that he encountered, three very special weapons that were created with a little inspiration from him and his siblings...

Gauntlet of Beast: A large steel gauntlet that covers all the way up to his elbow... It is crafted finely and it was engraved with what look to be claw marks from some large beast, of course they were only put there by Jesse but never the less, it is an original design not present on any other piece of equipment in the Rebel Army...

This gauntlet when activated will first and for most... Start to glow a bright green color on the marking that looked as if they were left there by the claw of a great beast, and whilst the marking glow green, a large yet neat looking sword type blade will protrude from the the gauntlet... the blade is very sharp, it is astoundingly durable, and it is around 4 feet long...

However, the marking can also glow a dark blood red... and when that happens the blade becomes deformed and other shorter blade will protrude from the gauntlet making a scary barrage of blades that could tear almost any opponent to shreds, however this form cause a bit of pain to Todd's right arm, which is the arm the gauntlet is placed on...

Ring Of Inferno: A small steel ring that has the designs of a ring of fire that encircles the ring... Other than that design there is nothing very astounding about the ring... well its appearance that is...

The ring when first activated the design on the ring will start to glow a sort of orange color... when this happens Todd is aloud to manipulate fire to an extent, he can send fire projectiles and he can other minor tricks with the flames produced...

However when the design glows a dark blood red... Todd is aloud to cover parts of his body in flames to inflict burn damage in the way of physical attacks and increase the power of his flames magnitude by a lot... He even has the power to engulf his entire body in flames... however when he uses these blood red abilities of the ring he will take quite a bit of damage afterwards, inflicting pain on him...

Headband of Knowledge: A steel headband with the design of a thousand tiny dragonflies...

When activated the dragonfly designs will glow a light blue color... when this happens Todd can access assortments of telekinetic powers on a small level such as, telekinetic movement of objects, mind reading, and future sight...

However if the dragonflies glow a blood red color... These same telekinetic powers will be amplified and can be used on a much larger scale, massively increasing Todd's brain power... However when this is used it does damage to Todd's mind that can end up being very severe and maybe even crippling.
 
Yes I wanted a powerful character but I wanted him to be hindered at the same time, so it will add an interesting taste to say a battle where he has to save somebody he cares about but doesn't quite have the power so he needs to use his like awesome powers that will end up hurting him so to help the one he loves he will have to endure like some pretty hard ass pain :)
 
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