Who Likes Poems?

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I was wondering if anyone here likes poems.I made this one for a very special person she goes to the forums here.Tell me what u guys think or ladies?
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I call this one-I Will Find You, My love

You are gone now, my love.
Where have you gone, my love?
I will follow you, my love,
to the darkest depths of damnation.
I will find you, my love.
I will search for you, my love.
Through every world and every light,
I will search, my love.

Our game of hide and seek could last all eternity
and I will find you, my love.
Our hearts beat as one whether you are near or far.
I will find you, my love.
My heart serves me better than any blood hound, my love.
I will find you.
I can see you in the stars;
I can feel you in the rays of the sun.
I can hear you in the songs of birds;
I can smell you in the breeze.
I will find you, my love.

Until our eyes meet, my love;
Until our hands touch, my love;
Until our lips embrace, my love;
Until we meet again, my love.
You are gone now, my love,
I will find you, my love, my soul mate.
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I call this one making love with you

When we are making love:
it is like sand through an hour glass,
a feather drifting slowly to its unknown destination,

A fluffy white cloud floating, pushed by the wind,
a gentle breeze upon my skin,
the bright rays of the morning sun through mist on the pond,

A flower kissed by dew,
the warmth you send through me just by you touching me,
the sound of a rushing waterfall
flowing along and where it may end... unknown

Making love with you is more magical than
to slide down a rainbow,
to catch that falling star,

to have a real genie who can make all my Wishes come true,
...and if I did ...
My only wish would be- to always be with you.
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You noone here will ever know who these two are for.
 
*stares for a long moment in absolute silence*

WOW, OMG.... I'm wordless. Those poems are amongst the best I have ever read, and I've read a lot. I don't know what to say really because no word will make justice to the beauty of your poems.

I love poetry but I usually like to read darker poems, yet these... these are just amazing.

Usually I pick my fav verses but I just can't do it here, each verse... each word is just perfect.

Honestly I don't know what else to say, I think I'm just rambling now. I'm absolutely speechless and that's an achievement because I always know what to say. lol

Thanks for posting your poems, and please write more, I'd love to read them. ^^
 
THX for the comments.
well I have a couple more i still have I just started doing poems like 3 days ago and hopefully i will make more soon.
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This one is called "Missing you"

Have you ever bothered to realize
how much you mean to me?
I care so much for you inside,
and miss you so deeply.

My mind is always curious about
the way things might have been.
As days go by and time goes on
I look back once again.
On all those times you took me
right into your arms,
I felt so safe and special,
you comforting me with all your charms.

Every little kiss from you
was like a dream come true.
This love I have inside my heart,
it all belongs to you.

It's funny, all those little things
I never thought I'd miss.
Like those little conversations we had,
or the first time that we kissed.

I guess what I'm trying to tell you
is I miss you more each day.
It hurts me not to see you,
Or not to know if you're okay.

I want you to understand
that I liked you from the start.
And I want you to know, no matter what,
you'll always have a place in my heart.
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This one is "My Love For You"


There are no words
to express what I
feel for you.

There are no songs
as beautiful as the music
that fills my soul
when I hear your voice.

There are no roses
as lovely as your smile.
Nothing moves me
like you do.

There are no days
brighter than the days
I spend with you.
You're my light
in the darkness...

And there could never be
words strong enough
to express my love for you.
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Well to be real honest I only made these poem cause most of these are just how i feel about my love :inlove:Sakura:inlove:.
 
I'm really sorry Meik, somehow I couldn't comment teh other day. But I promissed I'd leave a comment and I always keep my promisses... when I make them, lol.

Anyways, once again I can't describe in words how wonderful your poems are. Because when I look at them I know I'm not reading words, I'm reading feelings. That's wonderful

I loved them both so keep posting. ^^
 
poems eh...it just so happens i am working on a book of poems.....heres 2 of mine

AT THE CASTLE GATE

At the arch of the castle gate
It is your arrival I await
The castle is like those of old
A huge stone fortress of legends told
Over the years many stories have been carved into the walls of stone
And since then many have faded, leaving but one alone
The remaining tale was carved deeper than the rest
Not only immortalized in stone, but also in the heart beating in the young queen's chest
You, the noble queen, beauty and caring divine






And I, the writer if the lines that sent chills down your spine
It's surprising though, these lines are few
In fact there are only two
"My dear queen, I love you true
Now and forever my heart belongs to you."

Ever since those fateful days
The evening when i carved the lines into the stoned under the sun's fading rays
And when you read them the morning after
Greeting me at the gate with relieved laughter
Finally our feelings are known
At last our love is shown
So once again I await
For your arrival at the gate
Today however marks a special time
Which is why Im writing this rhyme
We are preparing for a event to make people sing
For today I will be crowned your king
united today, together through anything
Our two hearts as one the beats will ring



THE NIGHT OF THE FULL MOON

Tonight is a clear night
Pitch black at the stroke of midnight
With the exception of the full moon's light
A beckoning symbol for creatures of terrible fright

This creature is a fabled hybrid
Requiring silver to ensure its dead
Part man and part wolf, its desire for blood is never fed
Werewolf is the name many have come to dread

There's no telling how many are hunting at this late hour
Looking for another innocent victim to devour
Dont worry theres no need to cower
I have not yet been overwhelmed by that dark power

Lightning crashes, a window squeaks
Thunder rolls, the floor creaks
The house is filled with terrified shrieks
And I awake from the dream as a child speaks...

The child's voice fades as I feel the warmth of blood
And a late night newscaster drones on about a flash flood
Looking out the window, I see that the rain has turned the land to mud
Confirming that the window was closed, I see the moon and fall to my knees with a thud

"Well," I think "Isn't this a nasty surprise?"
I turn to the child and see fear in her eyes
"Run!" I exclaim " Take the others and run for your lives!"
And I stagger away from the window amidst frightened cries

Well its late, this story is almost done
This lunar transformation has begun
Time to go quench my thirst on the blood of an unsuspecting someone
Heh heh heh, sounds like fun



ok so im on opposite poles with these two....more if wanted
 
There pretty good i like them both i mostly like the second one u made.:cool:
 
Sorry, but I cant stand poetry. Not saying theres anything wrong with your poems, ive just never been a fan of poems.
 
~SapphireStar~ said:
Sorry, but I cant stand poetry. Not saying theres anything wrong with your poems, ive just never been a fan of poems.
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Have u atleast ever tried to give it a chance if not just try it.I first hated poetry but now look i love it.
 
Meikyousisui said:
Have u atleast ever tried to give it a chance if not just try it.I first hated poetry but now look i love it.
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Tried to give it a chance? Ive been round poetry my entire life. School, home and work, Im surrounded by poets. Im doing a writing course, so I know loads of people who are poets and Im just not a fan. After being surrounded by poetry for ones entire life, Im sick of it personally. I cant write it either, writing it is too much of a task for me.
 
well each to their own...heres another of mine

FLASHES

Images of a troubled past
come to mind again, recalled so fast
Each picture lasting less than a second
Recalling related occurences as the current event hath beckoned
The items portrayed in such images depend on the situation
Each time different memories are called for the demonstration

These flashes may be of anything
From the sorrows of losses to laughs that happy times bring
In times of great pain
The flashes can be so gruesome, horrifying, able to drive you insane
Or in times of joy
Your first kiss, or maybe a favorite toy

At birth these flashes may be blank
Not knowing what to do or who to thank
As a child these images tend to be
Innocent and wild, more likely to be free
However throughout the progression of life
These pictures become troubled, more filled with strife

These flashes, as life goes on, change
Rearranging, reoccurring and increasing in range
Until the sequence of images of the troubled past
At the final showing leaves you aghast
Flashing once more as you close your eyes
From the beginning of your life until your demise
 
First time i tried poetry i was real stressed out cause i was thinking about that to much but then after awhile i got used to it and now its real easy.

Most ppl think its hard but u just have to think real hard.

I will post up more later.
 
Friends

A friend is someone we turn to
when our spirits need a lift.
A friend is someone we treasure
for our friendship is a gift.
A friend is someone who fills our lives
with beauty, joy, and grace.
And makes the whole world we live in
a better and happier place




You are friendly, kind and caring
Sensitive, loyal and understanding
Humorous, fun, secure and true
Always there... yes that's you.

Special, accepting, exciting and wise
Truthful and helpful, with honest blue eyes
Confiding, forgiving, cheerful and bright
Yes that's you... not one bit of spite.

You're one of a kind, different from others
Generous, charming, but not one that smothers
Optimistic, thoughtful, happy and game
But not just another... in the long chain.

Appreciative, warm and precious like gold
Our friendship won't tarnish or ever grow old
You'll always be there, I know that is true
I'll always be here... always for you.



I believe in angels,
The kind that heaven sends,
I am surrounded by angels,
But I call them friends




Standing by,
All the way.
Here to help you through your day.

Holding you up,
When you are weak,
Helping you find what it is you seek.

Catching your tears,
When you cry.
Pulling you through when the tide is high.

Just being there,
Through thick and thin,
All just to say, you are my friend
 
Wow that was a really great poem i wanna put more here but sometimes i don't have anytime to do more.Hopefully i will post more tomarrow cause i have been thinking on some new ones just give me some time so i can put more up.

That was a great poem Tifa AC.
 
i got one its called engulfed in darkness

pain...agony...destuction these are the symbols of the darkness
its faint but u feel it breathin,it serene but u hear it whepin
its weak but u feel it strugglin these are the signs the darkness has u....
u feel relief yet there is pain, u feel strenth yet u are weaken,
u feel the light but yet u are not reachin these are the sense that u have gotten from the darkness
u dance with ure demons and destroy ure allies ure life is no longer yours....feel my pain, my rage, itsays u feel and experience now tell me can u see it u rebirth and u destuction these are the symbols that u are no longer u
 
well another poem that was great i have to give u a 9/10 it was just beautiful.

Like i promised here is 2 more poems.

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I call this one "My love for You".

The fresh air kissing my face
The moon shining down on me
Every time I look at your face
It brings happiness inside me...

Your love is wonderful, divine
I'm dying to make it mine
I know it will never happen in time
But just the thought... that you are mine

Your hair, your arms, your lips
The way you walk
The way you talk
Oh, how can I deal with it...

Always making me laugh when I'm sad
You lighten up my day when I'm feeling bad
Your sense of humor is not like my dad
Oh boy... I love you so bad

I love you with all my heart
My world, my life is all about you
Oh boy, it is so hard
To live a day not thinking of you...

When I feel sad
I wish for you
When I feel lonely
I think of you
And when I'm happy
It's because of you...

If you ever go away
If you ever leave me- one day
My life will be swept away
For there's no you in my miserable day...
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well i couldn't think of a name for this but here it is anyways.

When i stare into your eyes it brings me joy
when i stare into your eyes i feel happiness
when i stare into your eyes i feel acceptance
when i stare into your eyes i feel like i can live forever

you make this world great
you make this world feel amazing
you sit here helping me thru everything
you sit there always making me feel good


i stand here waiting for u
i will always stand here and i will always be here for u
remember that this world would be a pain for me if you were not in it
you mean everything to me
words just cant describe it

i love u so much
when you stare at me i just cant help but love u even more
my love for you will always stand
it digs deeper into my soul
your my true love and i will stay here by your side


forever
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I love poems very mutch and yours were perfekt,well i will need about untill tonight to send you at lest one more.
 
I wont lie, I've always been of the firm opinion that while poetry is a wonderful means of expression, 'true' poetry is an artform which uses carefully crafted words as its medium, and this 'poetry' lacks that techinical finesse I enjoy reading.

Having said that, though, it's obvious you're not exactly planning on becoming a published writer or anything and I'm certain whoever you wrote these for will love them, and you, Meikyousisui, to absolute pieces for what they are ^_^
 
thanx meik thats one of the moment i was in deep thought and it popped in my head but heres one i writing a long time ago

i need help wit the title

i wonder if life is an illusion created by the mind;concept of cofusion expressed between these lines
i wonder if the basics of motality is express in vitality;pain and grievences that forms extreme agony
i wonder if destruction is always cause by the ignorance of man or the reason of incopetance,war is so highly in demand
i wonder if temptation is simply a concept or the expression of ones true deception
i wonder are the true forces of good and evil and y is it caught in and evergoing circle
 
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