Fox rolled his eyes and sighed. Of all the Lieutenants he was friends with, Damon and Danny had always had this rather odd, bizarre relationship that both confused and intrigued him, but it also made them act incredibly immature ninety per cent of the time. It wouldn’t have surprised him if the pair started rolling around on the ground at that point, each trying to gain dominance over the other.
That was my favourite part of the chapter, it's so close to real life! Brilliantly written, and really funny too. Mitsuki's right, you do have quite the eye for detail, and I too, like the length of the chapters. It makes it easy and fun to read ^^