Tales of FFF

Hey, I've revived him to be on my side, Shen. And for your information, my character was trying to bring out a new summoning.
 
Julius Argexis said:
FFGuy, you must add more details to both your spells and your abilities. And also, for future reference, RP Biographies are posted here, that's why it's called the "Sign UP" Thread...


This is powerplaying
Who told you that you could powerplay with my character? That is not correct, if it's a "phantom" then it's ok. Still a Phantom is a strong opponent that it can't be pawned that easily. Shenorai fought a phantom and she didn't powerplayed me, in fact that was a great One on One RP battle, and yes she DID won against Phantom Lucius.



Not enough descriptions and thus not approved.

This is powerplaying and you are portrating your character as the Ultimate Being. Being able to merge with "God" and the "Devil", in RPs, is placing you way beyond normal levels like an unstopable force and that is not fair.

Also the "human weakness" is a really unfair ability because almost everyone in this RP could be considered as a "humanoid" creature.

Overall, the abilities don't have enough details for us to visualize what the hell is going on when that happens. Spells MUST contain details for their descriptions about how they look, how powerful they are, hit ratio, etc.

So far, this bio is not approved and you are not authorized to use it for this Role Play. -_-
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in most of the parts including where i am easily beating Lucius etc is actually a part of the plot where i originally defeat Lucius, but he hits me from behind or something and the attack weakens me and makes me less powerful and hardly any stronger than a normal human being

i can delete the overpowered skills though but i will label what abilities etc i lose from the attack anyway
 
FFGuy said:
in most of the parts including where i am easily beating Lucius etc is actually a part of the plot where i originally defeat Lucius, but he hits me from behind or something and the attack weakens me and makes me less powerful and hardly any stronger than a normal human being

i can delete the overpowered skills though but i will label what abilities etc i lose from the attack anyway
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Not delete them, but rewrite them FFGuy, a writer doesn't give up that easily when he faces and obstacle :mon: and I don't expect you to give up that easily;)
 
alright, when i have time either today or tomorrow i will have a go at editing the stuff i find required, it is just a pity that spells are my weak point
 
Location and Sect

The following is a Music Guild location and sect being added to the RP.

To get in the seekers you need to be in my club and get accepted.


I am adding Ottilatic to this RP as this my location and Julius is allowing me. It is the location of the greatest library in the world also it is a great place to relax. The Knowledge of Music and Lore fills the place. Remember you need an airship to get to it.

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[FONT=&quot]Ottilatic Ottilatic, the floating isle and headquarters of The Music Guild. This place also houses the greatest Library in the world. It is about twenty-six square acres. The isle is filled with different architecture from around the world. The main land mark on the isle is the tower that is in the center of the isle. Which resembles a tall monolith, that can see over the whole isle. This tower houses the Harp of Ottilatic, which when played does many things including moving the isle and activating the magic shield. At the base is a library filled with books and musical scores from all over the world. The actual book storage is underground and the books cover almost all topics of study. These books and scores are allowed to be taken to anywhere on the isle. But not off of. Also, guild operations are conducted from here.

The under side of the isle is extremely rocky except for the Underdome. This dome is used to see what is underneath the isle at all times. Also, this dome has no entrances just windows.

Other facility on the isle is as follows:<?xml:namespace prefix = o /><o:p></o:p>
  • The dormitories are located near the central tower. The dormitories look like long stone buildings with steep roofs. These facilities house the isle staff of moogles. Also the kitchens are located here for the entire isle. All food is bought to the guests and other people.<o:p></o:p>
  • The guest houses are located opposite of the dormitories. They have the far eastern feel and style about them. But they are made of more steady materials.
  • There are gyms for training the martial skills of the members and the moogles are on the safe side and have infirmaries nearby the gyms.
  • There are concert halls for people to play for the moogle workers and for others. Most are used for practicing.
  • The moogles have storage sheds and trading posts to sell moogle trinkets and other moogle goods to those vistors. The items they sell is moogle food, magical devices, and some other items from all over the world.
  • Many courtyards and parks are near the edge so people can have a nice view of the surrounding ground.
  • Also there is a beautiful pond for swimming and sitting near.
  • Along the edge of the isle are airship docks for airships of varying sizes. There are only two main docks for airships. <o:p></o:p>
[FONT=&quot]The following is a basic layout of the Isle[/FONT][FONT=&quot]
http://www.finalfantasyforums.net/at...1&d=1183954763


[/FONT][/FONT]The Seekers

Seal of the Seekers- A Book with a Blue Ribbon around it.

They are the sect of The Music Guild that governs the searching and retrieval of Knowledge. Their Meeting room is below the Library. They go out over the world in search of knowledge or gather knowledge from their homes and send it to Ottilatic to be put in the Library there. They are a rather secret group in what knowledge and stuff they are after. Also, they are the only ones allowed to the forbidden lore room in the library.


  • Seekers also get a special item, called the Book of Transcript. It allows Seekers to copy books and scrolls by touching the book to the item if instantly copies it. But the book must be bought back to Ottilatic to have the knowledge removed and place in the library. The book may only have one book copied in it. Also this book can allow seekers to copy books in the Library for reference on missions. The book is black with the seal of the seekers on it.
 
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i have edited some of the parts you said about, tell me what you think, i will do some more tomorrow
 
*sigh*
I'm thoroughly disappointed with the bio that I posted here. I'm actually working on my character profile right now. I should be done in...who knows...one or two weeks?
 
i know that i still have mega powerful abilities but most of these will dissapear when i am hit, such as ultima and possibly flare
 
I am terribly sorry for my long absence, but I was horribly sick and doctors said I had to rest from everything. I had abdominal pain, the right side of my chest the felt as if it were about to explode and the headache was a hell. (for a moment I thought that I had some sort of heart disease but the electrocardiogram showed that I have a healthy heart)

It was just a virus....a really horrible one....:sad2:

I'll try to catch up with everything.
 
yay! I'm glad you're alright Master Julius.....we all missed you a lot. Heh, what's funny tho, is now that you're better, I'm not doing so well. My muscles ache everywhere. I did this stupid tug-of-war bungee thing and won, but the other person insisted upon yanking my rope, so i flew backwards and hit the ground. It hurts, but i'll live. So, how is everyone else feeling?
 
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